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« on: March 09, 2012, 12:43:26 pm »

hey guys im going to be posting a cool fanfiction soon and i would lvoe your feedback ^^ also if you want to be int he story fill out this app

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« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2012, 08:13:57 pm »

I'm gonna take a guess and say that this is gonna be some alien, or zombie apocalypse like the other ones, but just to boost ur self esteem, Wink

Name: Jasper
Age: 18 (soon to be 19)
Bio: Unlike most people in his neighborhood, Jasper was raised quite well, knowing how to be polite and civilized, while his classmates grew up to be failures. Jasper has learned in college to take risks, but don't take suicide missions. Jasper was skating down a rail one day when his colleague fell and bled to death. this flipped a switch on Jasper. He learned that true panic, is devastating, and he always protects his friends.

Any Added Info: Hiding when found, I guess?

Remember to thank me for posting  Wink I remember when I was one of the new ones (I don't want to say noobs XD) I would always come home too see that my topics were barely viewed. nice first post, friend.
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« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2012, 08:24:53 pm »

To support thee, i shall make a bio. I guess.

Name: Unknown, but calls himself Silver
Age: 13, almost 14
Bio: His father was a crime lord. His mother took drugs. Dispite his terrible childhood, the young boy was a happy child. His father wanted him to run his business, so he taught him how to shoot almost any gun, and properly use it. His father died when he was 9. He was shot to death by one of his own, wanting his fathers fortune. The boy took revenge and had the backstabber's blood stained on his hands. His mother killed herself soon after. He then raised himself. He abandoned the name, life, and memories he used to have, and started over. He called himself 'Silver,' for his mother gave him a silver coin for his birthday at the age of 5. It was a heirloom that was his only memory of his family.
Any Added Info: Not one for revealing any memories, is stubborn and headstrong, has good amount of strength, knows how to shoot a gun.
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« Reply #3 on: March 15, 2012, 02:50:51 pm »

you guys are now in the story and please wait for chapter 1 to be posted here
and i would love more detail if ur good or evil ^^ or you wanna be a 1 time person, thank you for your support im working on the story as you read this
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« Reply #4 on: March 15, 2012, 03:42:35 pm »

Chapter 1 Part 1
The Arrival


As night approached I ran into the forest trying to outrun the bounty hunters. My son was crying loudly, I wasn’t surprised why; he was scared he was only about 6 months old at the time but he was humanity’s only hope for survival. For you see, in the year 2598 the earth was visited by an advanced alien race that knew humans and have visited them before during the time of the roman empire, and the building of the pyramids. They were back but this time to take my son due to the coding of his DNA. My name is Omega, I have no last name due to being an orphan but it won’t matter these aliens want our lives for my sons coding to clone us into weapons. It started when I was only 25 had a beautiful fiancé, we were happy as can be, then a year later we were married. The church bells where ringing, my wife’s nieces and her sister where tossing rice into the air I don’t know why.  Then 2 years later I got a call from the government telling me to head to capitol, Dexter was there with the head of earths defense. Dexter told me to give them my son due to the coding of his DNA, as a father I denied and questioned “why” I know I would soon regret asking, “your son is our only hope and we need to use his DNA to help us win this war” Dexter replied seriously. “What!?!” I yelled at Dexter in shock and anger. Blossom walked in wearing a long red dress “Hello Dexter how is our progress to finish the war?” Blossom said in a calm yet serious voice. “Fuse is on the move and expanding, making new monsters.” Dexter said in a concerned voice. My phone would begin to ring; I would pick it up “Hello?” I said in a confused voice wanting to know who was there. “Hello omega, meet me in green maw.” The lady on the phone said before hanging up. “Grab Omega.” Dexter said before Blossom grabbed me and walked me to a time portal. “Omega I am going to send you to the past to help us end this war.” Dexter said while he handed me the blade of the fusion Phoenix. I walked into the portal to arrive into a neighborhood, a person around the age of 13 helped me up “Are you ok?” the person said. “Yeah. What is your name?” I said to the person. “My name is Silver.” Silver said as he helped me onto a bench. “What year is this?” I asked Silver. “2397” Silver said.
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« Reply #5 on: March 15, 2012, 04:09:41 pm »

Nice man. I'll stay in. It expresses me perfectly. I would help someone. I would say I'm good, but I get very angry when the time is right. I don't express much emotion besides anger and calmness. Just so you know. Thanks for including me in the first chapter! I'll stay in for sure!!  Grin
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« Reply #6 on: March 15, 2012, 06:14:05 pm »

Let me redo how I come in, I didn't realize this was the plot of the story. maybe I come in as a new recruit that has been assigned to be Omega's handler?
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« Reply #7 on: March 16, 2012, 12:01:06 am »

ok and tomarrow chapter 1 part 2 will be out
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« Reply #8 on: March 16, 2012, 07:14:38 am »

Cheesy
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« Reply #9 on: March 16, 2012, 01:58:46 pm »

ok im working on chapter 1 part 2 right now and part 3 will be out maybe on sunday or saterday
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« Reply #10 on: March 16, 2012, 05:59:29 pm »

Sweet. I GET MORE PARTS IN A STORY!!!
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« Reply #11 on: March 16, 2012, 09:46:09 pm »

NOOOOOOOOOO I LIKE PARTSIES!
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« Reply #12 on: March 17, 2012, 12:40:27 am »

Chapter 1 Part 2

The after shocking paradox

“2397!?!?!” I yelled in shock. “Dexter sent me to far back, this is the year fuse invaded!” I yelled at silver.  “Fuse? What is a fuse?”  Silver asked in a confused tone. “Hello omega, I am Jasper. Your handler, Dexter sent me to keep an eye on you.” Jasper said in a neutral tone of voice. “Hello Jasper, I am here to stop Fuse.” I said in a voice that sounded serious yet scared. “Fuse is coming tomorrow so enjoy meet some people, and don’t sleep with your great grandmother.” Jasper said in a voice that at first was serious but then filled with a joke filled manner. A young fusion spawn would jump onto omegas lap and began to cuddle into his stomach “hey guys it likes me!” I said laughing. “No time to joke around Omega.” Jasper said in a tone that confused me but ohwell.  The fusion spawn would begin to sleep, “They sleep.” Jasper would say before bursting out laughing. “What are you guys talking about?” Silver asked. “You will know what it is in a few days.” Jasper said. I would have disappeared cause I would be walking to a ice-cream shop in Pokey Oaks square “So Eepo, you like ice-cream?” I said to the fusion spawn. Eepo would begin to purr “I’ll take that as a yes Eepo.” I would say to the fusion spawn in a happy mood. “Where did Omega go?” Silver asked. A huge group of women would be crowding around a table, “I found him” Jasper said in a tone that sounded like he knew why.






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« Reply #13 on: March 17, 2012, 08:36:45 am »

It's good. But I'm not always calm in a situation where i don't know what's going on. I would get kind of angry and then demand awnsers
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« Reply #14 on: March 18, 2012, 09:15:08 pm »

Also, its a bit hard to read, and know whos talking when. make sure that the paragraph is several different ones, not just one blob. get some advice from Alice.
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