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The Monsters Within: An Original Story *Chapter Three Posted*

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« Reply #30 on: May 11, 2011, 08:18:51 pm »

Ah, well I didn't mean it to but ok.

Anyway, I'm working on a new chapter.
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« Reply #31 on: May 11, 2011, 08:29:27 pm »

-claps- That was an awesome chapter Alice, but with all the great stories you've written, I'm going to mix them up in my head. Cheesy (That could be an interesting story...)
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« Reply #32 on: May 11, 2011, 08:47:57 pm »

"leaving Josh on the sidelines to keep himself out of their spews of hatred and anger." I really liked how you created that line! Of course, I just loved the whole thing. The concept, the creativeness, the characters, so far! I don't know about everyone else, but I saw similes in there :V. Anyway, I've been waiting for this chapter to come out! And the wait was worth it :] Sorry I didn't get to it sooner.
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« Reply #33 on: May 11, 2011, 08:50:45 pm »

It's very interesting how it all came to you into a dream. Told u u had a gift. And when you get gifts, (the dream) you give gifts. (the story)
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« Reply #34 on: May 11, 2011, 09:11:14 pm »

Thank you everyone for your kind words ^^ You really make me happy to be writing these stories Cheesy

I'm going to try and make sure you guys don't have to wait too long for chapters anymore.
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« Reply #35 on: May 11, 2011, 09:31:27 pm »

No, no, take your time. Don't feel rushed. We all know how tight of a schedule you have, and we understand. (I must sound like an idiot if you don't have a "tight schedule") bottom line: its worth the wait, so take a few decades if you need to.
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« Reply #36 on: May 12, 2011, 11:47:21 am »

I want to thank all of you for the kindness you've showed me while working on my stories! You have no idea how much the kind words mean to me. Keep alookout on this fiction section within the next two days. This is a promise, something is going to be updated and its going to be huge! ^^
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« Reply #37 on: May 12, 2011, 04:23:08 pm »

Like most stories, I'm in suspence!! It's greatly suspenceful. The suspence level is just right, compared to a Leonardo De Caprio movie is like "What is gonna happen?!?!!? I wanna know NOW!!!!"
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« Reply #38 on: May 12, 2011, 04:52:35 pm »

Thanks so much, I also updated Cyber Paradise with a new chappie as well Smiley I'm super proud to have updated these this week. Look out for more updates.
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« Reply #39 on: May 12, 2011, 05:16:20 pm »

Yay!
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« Reply #40 on: May 12, 2011, 06:53:41 pm »

Cant wait Alice. Super great stories.
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« Reply #41 on: May 16, 2011, 09:31:51 am »

The second chapter is written at this point, just editing it. Might post it today. Keep a lookout for it.
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« Reply #42 on: May 16, 2011, 04:16:47 pm »

Whoop whoop!
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« Reply #43 on: May 17, 2011, 09:20:22 pm »

Saw it. Read it. LOVED. IT.
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« Reply #44 on: May 18, 2011, 01:57:15 pm »

Can't wait for new chapter.
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