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The Monsters Within: An Original Story *Chapter Three Posted*

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« on: February 10, 2011, 09:44:02 am »

AN: All right, this is just the prologue since that's all I've written out so far but this story is actually from a dream I had the night before last and I just found the whole concept of this dream fascinating. So after I woke up, I went to scribbling everything down and working on developing it into a story. So without further adieu, here is is! Remember no flames allowed! Constructive Criticism is welcome.

Title: The Monsters Within
Author: Mae Everglow

*~Prologue~*


Some would probably say that Josh Hill was nothing but a dreamer, constantly letting his imagination wonder while reality caved in around him. However, if you asked the boy himself, he would say that he was just giving himself light during a dark living situation.

Josh had loved to play video games and read many different tales since he was very young. Every chance he got, Josh would get his hands on a game system or a piece of literature and just let his mind wander about. It helped for him, he supposed, since his parents were constantly at each others throats in a fight.

There was no doubt in his mind that Josh's parents loved each other at some point...but year after year the screams would get louder and the violent outbursts between them would grow. The boy's only true way of escaping, since running away would be ill of him, was to just let his mind close off reality and soak in the adventures of his make-believe heroes.

Instead of feeling trapped in a prison known as life, he explored different worlds and battled many demons and monsters. He stood toe to toe with dragons and rescued damsels in distress without question. In these worlds, he was not a lowly ten year old boy with little to look forward to. He was their hero!

However, for every hero, there is a monster...And let anyone be warned by this boy's story, the more you push away from your life, the more distorted the reality becomes. And then, things that only occur in your wildest dreams...become real.

*~End Prologue~*
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« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 02:28:11 pm »

*Applauds*

Love the idea of the story and the fact that it was your dream that has come to life in your story! So far it sounds very interesting, and adventurous. I can't wait to hear more. :]
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« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2011, 04:57:50 pm »

Aww thanks! :3 I'm going to try and work more on my writings this weekend! I know I keep saying I'm gonna post stuff up but its hard to finish up chappies currently with school and work going on. I shall try my best though *thumbs up* glad you liked it ^_^
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« Reply #3 on: February 16, 2011, 09:54:24 pm »

I don't just like this I love it!
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« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2011, 08:31:44 pm »

Wow. You have a gift right there alice. You're gonna have to pm me some pointers.
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« Reply #5 on: February 22, 2011, 09:35:20 pm »

Your name's Mae Everglow?
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« Reply #6 on: February 22, 2011, 10:58:40 pm »

It's obviously a pen-name lol. That's my writer's penname.
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« Reply #7 on: February 23, 2011, 08:25:04 am »

Ohh. Well, good story!!  Grin
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« Reply #8 on: February 23, 2011, 10:09:31 am »

Thanks, more will be coming soon so keep checking in for more.
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« Reply #9 on: February 23, 2011, 07:41:10 pm »

Yay!
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« Reply #10 on: February 23, 2011, 07:50:17 pm »

YAY!!! WOOO!!!!!!
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« Reply #11 on: April 21, 2011, 10:49:25 am »

Thanks, more will be coming soon so keep checking in for more. (posted Febuary 23, 2011)

Hm?
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« Reply #12 on: April 21, 2011, 01:49:39 pm »

Please be patient with my updates >.> I'm trying to deal with real life (school, work, etc.) and so updates aren't coming fast for you guys. Sorry for that, but you all will just have to bear with me and deal with it Tongue
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« Reply #13 on: April 21, 2011, 02:10:28 pm »

Alright, just don't say it will be up "Very soon" when 3 months (it has been 3 months... Right?) have passed and they are not up. Anyway, not trying to push you, just don't really want you making our hopes go higher and higher.
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« Reply #14 on: April 21, 2011, 02:38:54 pm »

Quiet! She has lots of stuff on her plate right now.
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