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« Reply #345 on: December 31, 2012, 09:23:42 pm »

HAPPY NEW YEAR *bans* jk Tongue

1 - I admire your writing style and how much detail you incorporate while also working with a lot of dialogue.

2 - There are still moments of errors but those are just things that can easily slip into writing by an editor's stance *shrugs* Just figured I'd mention that.

3 - I'm not sure on favorite characters but I did like everyone's portrayal done by you *shrugs*

4 - Don't feel you need to rush anything with Fusion Mayhem; take your time and really build up your story. If you need a break from it, take a break and let the story form itself over time.

5 - Currently, I'd probably rate it a 7.5 or 8.

6 - We shall see Tongue
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