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« Reply #345 on: January 09, 2013, 04:57:53 pm »

1- Dud3 u lyk sohuld st0p wreaytin an dye 

Really liked it, although not my favorite part so far. The

2- I feel that introducing too many characters at once (The "Fighters" I like to call them) can pin you to the wall.
You either give some too much screen time, or not enough. You have at the moment your protagonist, supportive characters (Freeangel, Zoey, etc,),
their friends, villains, and now sidekicks. It can get out of hand. Still, their characterization in this was great.

3- Shawna fo sho

4- Keep at it

5- 8-ish

6- She's so into you, bra. I'll be your wing man, any time.

While I can't exactly write as eloquently as you, I hope my criticism came across as reasonable.
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