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« Reply #345 on: December 31, 2012, 09:47:13 pm »

1. The detail that you put into it and how you have developed the characters.

2. There weren't any major problems that needed to be fixed.

3. Like I said before and Alice said now, all of the characters are interesting in their own way and that makes it hard to choose a favorite.

4. None that I can think of right now besides just working on the rest until you feel satisfied.

5. 8, Your fan-fic has improved a lot since you started writing it.

6. I think I'm just going to keep beating you up until something happens. Tongue
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"C'est décidée, je m'en vais. J'ai laissé mon enfance en été. Perdue dans l'hiver.  Le froid est pour moi le prix de la liberté. Quand on prend de la hauteur tout semble insignifiant. La tristesse, l'angoisse et la peur m'ont quittée depuis longtemps."
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