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31  General Boards / FanFic and FanArt Board / Re: Fusion Mayhem! on: January 09, 2013, 04:57:53 pm
1- Dud3 u lyk sohuld st0p wreaytin an dye 

Really liked it, although not my favorite part so far. The

2- I feel that introducing too many characters at once (The "Fighters" I like to call them) can pin you to the wall.
You either give some too much screen time, or not enough. You have at the moment your protagonist, supportive characters (Freeangel, Zoey, etc,),
their friends, villains, and now sidekicks. It can get out of hand. Still, their characterization in this was great.

3- Shawna fo sho

4- Keep at it

5- 8-ish

6- She's so into you, bra. I'll be your wing man, any time.

While I can't exactly write as eloquently as you, I hope my criticism came across as reasonable.
32  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: January 09, 2013, 04:42:47 pm
OT: I leave for two minutes and this thing gets four pages? I see what's going on here....
 Side note: Did he jump over the fence? Is he still outside? I might have to alter my post accordingly

Garrett gets up from bed, annoyed with all the commotion. Elizabeth, who was resting her head on his arm, sighs.

Garrett: "Hopefully they leave soon. I want to be able to take a nap without having to make life-and-death situations."

Elizabeth: "Can't you just let Steve handle this? He's the eldest...and I want this to last as much as possible. Us."

Garrett: "If you want that then you wouldn't want to have him in charge. He'd let any one that looks slightly human in."

He hurries down
33  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: January 07, 2013, 02:43:26 pm
Steve: "He's still outside," he yelled "he's sort of just...sitting there."

Garrett comes back downstairs "So, Liz, your choice."

Elizabeth: "Why? It's your house."

Garrett: "So, Liz, what's it going to be?" He seemed to ignore her

Liz: "We could let him stay inside. Not in here, just not out there..."

Garrett: "You're gonna be the death of me, woman. Since you seemed so interested, you and Zoey will watch him."
34  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: January 06, 2013, 05:50:41 pm
OT: Pffft, amateurs.

Steve called for the young man to return. Steve was an older gentleman, perhaps in his mid 40s. He served
in the military as an engineer, fixing up broken vehicles. He's seen things. His voice isn't pleasant to the ears.

Steve: "Here," he throws down a little backpack "this should get you on your feet."

Elizabeth walked back inside, not quite pleased with what Aubrey and Leo had just done

Garrett [Still in his room, monitoring the whole thing] : "And they called me an as*hole..."
35  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: January 04, 2013, 04:39:50 pm
Steve: "He...he lit flares...WHY THE HE-"

Garrett: "He's coming towards us."

Elizabeth ran downstairs and grabbed a few magazines for herself and went outside. When she noticed the intruder, she fired a warning shot

Liz: "Don't move dirt bag. Who are you, how did you get here, and why should I not shoot you for endangering us all?"

Garrett sent Liz a text message. Liz pulled out her phone with her free arm and read it.

Liz [To herself]: " Waste this idiot lel"
36  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: January 03, 2013, 02:15:10 pm
Elizabeth looked at Garrett for answers

Garrett: "I'll go check the cameras."

He made his way to his room upstairs which was set up to monitor the outside.

Garrett: "Come on you bugger...where are you?"

Elizabeth yelled at Steve who was upstairs keeping watch

Steve: "I don't see anything!" he yelled back

37  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: December 23, 2012, 08:25:47 pm
Elizabeth: "Wherever the road leads? You do know the "road" is filled with undead cannibals?"

Garrett: "Survival of the fittest. Besides, what do you propose?"

Elizabeth: "I'm just saying that's a just a sure way of getting eaten."

She takes a zip of liquor

Garrett: "You mentioned you were here with your "Classmates," where are they?"

38  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: December 23, 2012, 05:41:16 pm
Elizabeth: "We're not here for your comfort. You have a roof under your head; that's more than most can say at this point.
When you leave everything you came with will be returned."

Garrett comes back down

Garrett: "Give them pistols. No ammo. If they argue just kick 'em to the curve. They can't exactly argue with a shotgun aimed at their head.
The chick with the katana is cool, though."

Elizabeth: "You're kidding right? After the incident?"

Garrett: "When is dinner ready?"

She doesn't argue any further; she knows it's pointless.

After about an hour or so, Elizabeth calls everyone down for dinner.

Garrett: "So, where are you going to go when all of this is though?"
39  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: December 20, 2012, 06:43:21 pm
Garrett looks at Liz for an answer

Elizabeth: "Speeding the process up..."

Garrett: "I'll be upstairs. Show them to their rooms."

Elizabeth remotely speeds up the force of the greenhouse's showers. In a minutes everyone is soaking wet, a bit
bruised, and decontaminated

40  Site Related / Announcements/News/Events / Re: Name Change Generator! on: December 20, 2012, 06:18:08 pm

God speed, mods. Purdy plees?
41  General Boards / Rec-Room / Re: Count down till End! :( on: December 20, 2012, 06:16:48 pm
The end is nigh! REPENT! REPENT!

Too bad I did not get to finish KoTOR...

And how crappy is it that I still have to hand in two essays tomorrow?

Worst apocalypse evur!
42  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: December 20, 2012, 02:33:06 pm
Garrett: "They are well armed if you haven't noticed, Elizabeth."

Elizabeth: "I have and I don't like it." she waits a few seconds before continuing "Steve locked up all their weapons."

Garrett: "The little one wants to learn how to handle a gun."

Elizabeth: "And? You want Stephen make him some sort of Rambo?"

Garrett speaks into the intercom once again

Garrett: "Don't forget to pick up the new set of clothes that was provided for you. Your old ones will be washed and returned to you shortly."

He looks at Liz

Garrett: "What did we get sprayed with, anyway?"

Elizabeth: "Water, soap, and something green."

Garrett: "So..."

Elizabeth: "It's just a mental thing."
43  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: December 19, 2012, 05:00:30 pm
Garrett: [through an intercom] "Not unless you want to sleep in the doghouse"
44  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: December 18, 2012, 02:40:40 pm
Garrett: "Not my idea."

Liz: "You too, Garrett."

Garrett sighs but does not argue. While he instructs the others to follow, Liz takes the weapons and brings them inside
the house.

The group proceeds to a makeshift "decontamination chamber" which was just a re purposed greenhouse.
The many plants, fruits and vegetables were still inside, but they were moved in order to give way for the cleaning process.
Garrett striped down to his undergarments  and waited for the shower heads to pour down the a mixture of
chemicals they felt got the job done.

Garrett: "Never again..."

He exits the greenhouse though a door that leads straight inside.

Liz: "You had me worried," she hugs him "if you had gotten-"

Garrett: "I'm still here, right? Why worry? Say, where's the girl?"

Liz: "She's in your room. You have a new message, by the way"

Garrett: "Just gotta wait for them now."

Liz: "Are you sure we can trust them?"

Garrett: "Never trust anyone."
45  General Boards / RP's / Re: The Walking Dead RP on: December 16, 2012, 03:04:12 pm
OT: You're all so needy. Don't worry, papa Soapy has arrived

Garrett caught a glimpse of Nash's little arsenal before turning has gaze back to the woods.

Garrett: [to himself] "Liz is not going to like this..."

A few minutes later, they arrive at a two story house. Since this thing was built in the middle of the forest, it was incredibly hard to miss.
It's bright, fancy paint scheme just screamed "Hey, pay attention to me!." Luckily it is protected by an electric fence powered by a generator
inside. The solar panels are visible from the the outside.

Garrett: "Come on, no need to stay in the open."

He walks towards the front gate and presses a button to allow him to speak into an intercom.

Garrett: "It's me. And guests."

There's a beeping sound and Garrett opens the gate

They all walk towards the front door. Garrett rings the door bell

Garrett: "Forgot my keys..."

The door opens and a hand pulls Garrett inside. The door is shut behind him. After a few seconds it opens again and a woman comes out.
She looks to be around the same age as Garrett, but less friendly

Liz: "Drop your weapons and proceed to the right for disinfection. If you refuse you will be shot."

She held a shotgun with both hands, and from the second story there was another man with a gun aiming directly at Garrett's new "friends"

Garrett comes up behind the woman

Garrett: "Don't want blood on the carpets."
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