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Title: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on November 06, 2010, 03:02:18 pm
Neh, I just felt like writing/posting a story on here. I don't have much confidence in my own works for I don't know reasons. I'll still type anyways.

Okay. Heads up, the story is FusionFall related.

Update: I fail in prologues... V
2 Update: Sorry, I'm having writer's block >.<...


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Mayito on November 06, 2010, 03:50:02 pm
It's gonna suck =P lol jk hope you post story  ;D


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on November 06, 2010, 10:31:11 pm
It's gonna suck =P lol jk hope you post story  ;D

It will probably fail =/....  ^_~ Still deciding


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Mayito on November 06, 2010, 11:15:07 pm
Lol nah it won't fail anyways post it I want to read it !!! Can I be in story also!!


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on November 06, 2010, 11:31:50 pm
Lol nah it won't fail anyways post it I want to read it !!! Can I be in story also!!

You can. Although, I shall ask you a few questions.


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Mayito on November 07, 2010, 12:04:10 am
Alrite Fo Sho


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Spike Spiegel on November 07, 2010, 12:56:57 am
oh can i be in it too ?


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on November 07, 2010, 10:13:01 pm
Lol, maybe I should change this to a sign up thread or something.


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Makastar on November 08, 2010, 01:53:08 pm
Me wants to be in Lucien's story :3 kthanx!


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on November 08, 2010, 07:47:43 pm
I fail at Prologues x.x..... Yes, I write a lot, too.... x.x


Prologue-


       Look up. What do you see? No, not the sun. How can you miss what I'm motioning towards? Yes, that thing. That giant of blob of multi-colored green thing that's directly centered in the once beautiful, blue sky. That Fusion planet is currently intoxicating and destroying Earth, our home. Now look ahead, what do you see there? Yup, that exotic rich land which now is covered in poisonous green toxin that is ruining and killing us. Although, we've managed to keep some places alive. Okay, last question. What do you see in that life viewed picture?... Correct, us and them. Us kids, adults, heroes, and villains, defending our home. Them, the fusions, the monsters, that's going to take away our home and lives if we don't fight back.
   A peaceful truce has long been impossible. They, the adults, are worry about us kids. They're wasting their time with that, apparently. You know that, you've been fighting haven't you? How do we fight; where did we learn, they all ask?
   Simple. Dexter boy genius and his tools and technology. Ben Tennyson, his fighting plumbers and knowledge of alien intelligence. Mojo Jojo, his resources and his league of evil yet helpful monkeys. Double Dee's and the K.N.D.'s training facilities and resources such as weapons, armors, and such.    Now, within those large branches, there's more branches underneath those. One of those smaller branches happens to be the largest and most secret organization. How I'm wording that sounds evil, but it's not. They're the S.A.C.T., the Secret Alien Capture Team. Don't judge a book by it's cover because that's not all they're capable of.
   The rest of the S.A.C.T. has been kept a secret for everyone's own good. Who knows what someone could do if they happen to find one of our atomic assortment labs and steal one of their High Frequency Battle Canons. See what I'm saying? Probably not because you haven't seen the damage caused by one. Anyways, within the S.A.C.T. are a lot more branches such as the Assassination Groups, Technology Labs, Stealth Squads, Mechanism Fighters, Divisions, Mercenaries, Spies, and One School.
   That just went awkward, but yes they do have a school, an Academy called the U.C.A., Unknown Crysalical Academy, school of technology and field weapon mastery. A school for those who have what it takes, of course. The only way you can possibly get accepted is either you're from a wealthy or battle associated family or an academy observer that sees your skill. Also, yes, it has to be kept a secret or you'll face punishment. A very possible life threatening punishment.
   Also, when they mean Unknown, they mean it. The school literally is in an unknown area where even most students don't know.
   Anyways, there is this one group in the academy that exceeded the expectations and formed a new division in the C.E.S.A. which shall be classified for now. They were a funny little bunch that faced a lot of problems. They nearly split up, but there were plenty of times where they laughed and plenty where they were wounded.
   This is before the present, and this is written by Division 5's 2nd in Command and edited by the rest of the team.



Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Spike Spiegel on November 26, 2010, 11:50:15 am
Bravo story it didn't suck it was really good nice job


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on January 23, 2011, 03:18:40 am
ALRIGHT FINALLY THE FIRST CHAPTER! I'm sorry for the major huge delay! This chapter won't be much. Just a little bit. It will be boring most likely and it will definitely have a lot of grammatical errors. Correct and critique me if you like. Don't be afraid to say it wasn't that good and it had a horrible description and wording. Alright thank you~




   As the rain pelted harshly at the ground, and thunder and lightning sliced through the air like a murderous chain saw. The group of five ran through the muddy forest in a quick pace and exited out into a large clearing. One of them glanced behind him and noticed the bright light beam from the hovercraft above them were still hunting them down.

   "They're still on our trail," He said breathlessly to his exhausted and hurt teammates.

   They knew that if any of them gets caught means that they will die. Then they heard a volley of gun shots behind them.

   "Don't look back Just keep running," The leader of the group shouted as it thundered. He was was afraid, of course. All of them were afraid. Who wouldn't be if you stole top secret items and information from the enemy's territory, and they found out. Then they're trying to kill you.

   There were loud, gurgled, frustrated screams heard from the helicopter as they tried to shoot down the runners but to no avail.

   The group finally reached the other side of the clearing just in time as a blast of green matter was hit where the last foot was before it stepped into the safe dark haven of the trees. They all stopped and crouched down low catching their breath as they tried to hide from the prowling helicopter. The leader searched through the muddy ground for a secret latch. It was quite hard considering that it was night, and it was so dark you can barely see your hand 5 inches away from your face.

   Then he bumped his hand against a metal form of a tree root and tried to insert password onto the structure of a root form keypad.

   "Found it, come on," he quickly whispered to his four companions as they gathered around him.

   There was a sudden jolt on the ground, but then it suddenly emptied out beneath them sending them plummeting into more darkness until they landed into chlorinated waters. Their eyes stung when they opened their eyes surprisingly underwater, and swam up to the surface and gasped for air.

   "Wow, you guys put up an interesting show," A voice rang from the other side of the brightly lit gym room. A dirty blonde boy put a couple of towels beside as he squatted down near the pool's edge and held out his hand to the annoyed team.

   The silver haired leader swam up to him and grabbed for his hand but then he pulled him into the water instead.

   The silver haired boy got out of the water and grabbed a towel and threw one to each of his teammates as they got out soaking wet with mud and water in a ticked off and tired mood. "Deserve it that you just watched as we were almost killed out there, Scoville," he took off the small, soaking wet and dirty backpack. "Here," he threw it harshly at the coughing boy in the water, which sent him under the water again causing him to come back up to have another spasm of coughs, "your gift."

   The the team now sat there still wet with their towels either on their necks or on their heads, watching the soaked Scoville smile and said, "Thank you, Travis, for the warm introduction and the harsh gift."

   "No problem," Travis said nonchalantly. He looked towards his friends with a worry expression. "Drevera, Ace, and Lucien needs to go to the infirmary because they were ambushed and suffered some bruises and cuts. Fray is okay, surprisingly. Although, we all need a rest," Travis said casually as she stood up.

   Scoville smiled and stood up like the rest of the others and said, "You're right Travy. We'll all have a discussion with the S.D.1 tomorrow during your lunch. Good night,"  then he simply left the gymnasium.

   Drevera closed her eyes in annoyance then pushed away her violet hair strands away from her bright green eyes. She looked at Lucien and asked, "Is there a reason why we can't kill him?"

   Lucien chuckled as the cuts on her face stung, "I honestly don't know. Because all officers standing above us won't like that and we'll probably be sent to solitary confinement for a week or more."

   Drevera supported Ace as he tried to stand. Lucien looked up at them and said, "Well, I guess I'll escort you guys to the infirmary. Travis and Fray, you guys can go to sleep, I'll take it from here," the ice blue eyed girl gave a friendly smile then made her way over to the door with Drevera giving us a nod and following behind her.

   "Good night, guys," Ace said over his shoulder as they exited.

   Fray turned to Travis and asked, "Do you think their going to be happy about the info we collected?"

   "Tch, they better be. We nearly died," Travis said as he started to exit the gymnasium.

   "Well, let's all expect the good tomorrow," Fray sighed as they exited the door back to the resting quarters.

   The platinum blonde hair boy sighed, "Time will tell, won't it?"


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Makastar on February 15, 2011, 07:56:20 am
I frickin' love your story :3 I can't wait to read more.


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on March 05, 2011, 04:18:50 pm
I frickin' love your story :3 I can't wait to read more.
I frickin' love your story :3 I can't wait to read more.
^^ thanks Ali. I'm still on an art and writers block. x.x Thank you though!


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on April 02, 2011, 09:48:52 pm
Please correct me of my errors. Thank you....

Chapter 2

   The next morning, Travis woke up and hit his head against the bottom of the top bunk bed. He grunted in surprise and rubbed his forehead.
   
        "Great way to start the day, huh?," he sighed. Travis looked around for his other teammate, but no one else was in the room with him. He guessed  He looked at the clock on the nightstand beside him and it read 5:09 AM. Only four hours of sleep. Since he couldn't go back to sleep, he decided to get up and get ready for the day.
   
        Fifteen minutes later, he exited his sleeping quarters in his school uniform containing a gray, navy blue, and white jacket over a black t-shirt and the same color theme pants over the same styled shoes (Kinda like the Admiral set on FusionFall). He was wearing a black choker with an emblem of a silver cross. On the left side of the vest, over the heart, labeled "U.C.A."
   
        He walked through the empty halls of the underground base toward the infirmary.
   
        "Everything's the same, it seems," He muttered over her breath. The tunnels were the same dull blue, the halls were the same dark metallic ground and walls, and as usual, no decorations except for doors.
   
        When he arrived at the only pure white building, which was the infirmary. He stride to the room where his friends were in, he noticed on a nearby clock that 5 minutes has passed, half them were still asleep, and the nurse wasn't at her usual desk.
   
        There were 4 beds on each side the room. Besides the medical supplies, everything was eye blinding gray-ish white.
   
        Two Hey's were heard from Lucien in bed and Fray leaning on the wall beside him at the first bed on the right. Drevera was on the bed beside Lucien and Ace was across from her. Lucien had a bandage over her forehead and right cheek, and her upper right arm was bandaged.
   
        "Good morning. Did you two get enough rest?" Travis asked in a hushed tone so he didn't wake the other two sleeping beauties. Obviously, not since he can see the dark shadows under both their eyes.
   
        Fray nodded and Lucien gave her her gentle smile and whispered, "Not really, but it's enough I guess; we're soldiers in training, after all."
   
        "Four hours?" Travis gave her a questioning look and Fray slightly chuckled and shrugged. Lucien just smiled.
   
        Ace shifted in his bed and muttered loudly something about a Tech suit and buttered toast causing the three to stifle their giggles.
   
        Drevera screamed in frustration and all of a sudden sat up and threw a box of tissues from her nightstand straight to Ace's face causing him to sit and yelped in shock. "Because of your sleep talk I barely got enough rest," she complained as her bright green eyes glared at him. Her violet colored hair was messy and out of place with strands of hair sticking up at odd angles. There were bandages at different places on her arms and her forehead area was wrapped up.
   
        Ace grabbed the tissue box and threw it back at Drevera who caught it with ease just before it hit her face. "Well I'm sorry that I just happen to be in the same room with you," he argued. His sandy blonde hair was just as messy as Drevera's and he had less wounds than her but his wrists were bandaged.
   
        "Okay. That's it!" Drevera leaped out of her bed to give Ace a few more wounds but Travis ran in between them and held his hand in front Drevera's face signaling her to stop.
   
        "Alright you two, quit bickering, and either get ready or go back to sleep. We leave in 45 minutes," Fray announced calmly.
   
        "I'm going back to sleep," Ace and Drevera said in unison.
   
        "No you're not!" They both screamed at each other in unison again. They both stared angrily at each other then crossed their arms and looked away.
   
        "Jay-zus, you two are acting like five year olds," mumbled Fray as he stood up. He went over to the two and, without a care in the world, gave a punch to Drevera's and Ace's face causing them to complain some more at the annoyed blonde who just stood their smiling to himself.
   
        Lucien and Travis tried to calm down their laughter at the annoyed group. "Okay, okay. Calm down you Sleeping Beauties and the Beast. Now you guys are wide awake and we wasted two minutes. So get up and get ready. We depart back to school soon," Travis instructed as he walked away towards the destination with Fray following behind him.
   
        Fifteen minutes later, the rest of the team went up to the upper level floors in their school uniforms and boarded the academy's S.C.A.M.P.E.R. The windows were black and you couldn't see a thing out of them. Their was a wall that separated the driver and passenger seat from the rest of the hovercraft. The flight was about 10 minutes when they landed. The group of 5 stepped out into a large clearing with their grand, Victorian styled academy in front of them. Surrounding the academy was a large green grass field then stretched into the forest. They were basically isolated from civilization. The school had 5 floors with 18 basement floors. Half of the underground floors are for stealth and weapon training. The other half was for technology and chemical studies. Another building known as the gym was behind the school next to a track area which is next to the three sets of training pools.
   
        Fray's pale skin and dull light blonde hair blew in the breeze. He smiled and commented, "Home sweet home."
   
        "Back to work," Ace droned depressingly as he sighed. He then shrugged and walked along with his friends to the front entrance of the school.
   
        Drevera snickered at Ace's comment and announced, "Let the day begin shall we?"
   
        A loud ringing alarm went off as the group knew the clock has ticked to 8.
   


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Makastar on April 02, 2011, 11:14:01 pm
The first run-through I LOVED IT~! I'll go through and do corrections later if you want ^_^ ALl in all, I loved it~! BTW did you read the new drabble?


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on April 09, 2011, 10:31:34 pm
The first run-through I LOVED IT~! I'll go through and do corrections later if you want ^_^ ALl in all, I loved it~! BTW did you read the new drabble?
I'm glad you love it Alice! And yes I finished reading all the recent drabbles. I loved them all!~

Next chap is coming... next month? o.e Soon!


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Makastar on April 10, 2011, 12:09:03 am
Hehe thanks for reading the drabbles ^_^ I have been writing a bit more in my journal but I haven't been at an actual computer for most of the day and yesterday too because of the storm.

Anyway, can't wait to read more :3


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Smax on April 10, 2011, 08:22:23 am
Wow. Very detailed, pretty much no flaws. First thought when I finished reading- Wow that silver headed guys a bad--s


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on May 07, 2011, 04:51:28 pm
Wow. Very detailed, pretty much no flaws. First thought when I finished reading- Wow that silver headed guys a bad--s
Haha, thank you :) Silver hair dude must be Travis. Jeez I need to update soon. Thank you for commenting.


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Makastar on May 08, 2011, 06:28:07 pm
MOAR PWEASE? lol ^^ i miss you lulu!


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Smax on May 10, 2011, 09:34:35 pm
Lolz look who's talking. Patience has pancake mix.


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on May 10, 2011, 09:38:34 pm
MOAR PWEASE? lol ^^ i miss you lulu!
Lolz look who's talking. Patience has pancake mix.

Lol, lucky for you guys I finished typing the latest chapter (FINALLY! right?!) Still editing stuff left and right....


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on May 10, 2011, 09:45:36 pm
Chapter 3


   The Academy, known as the Unknown Crysalical Academy, U.C.A. for short, is the school of technology and field weapon mastery. It teaches its apprentices at the ages of 7 to 17 the art of weapon and combat on the field and the wonders of technological devices behind the screens. The school holds the state of the art technology sponsor by Dexter the boy genius himself. Which consists of computers, simulator's, gadgets, weaponry, and much more. Unlike most schools, U.C.A. teaches kids by their learning ability than their age. For example, a class of highly advanced math students can have the ages 10 to 17 in one class.
   
        The academy is doing their best on teaching the kids on their new battlefield of fusions and toxic matter. The group that has just arrived and began class are bright students, but will suffer some tough sacrifices along the way. For now they will be just living the life of an average teen in training to be a spy, assassin, engineer, etc.
   
         A young girl with silver hair and dark green eyes walked to the front entrance not long after the group of last night's chase entered. She crossed her arms and looked at the school with an annoyed, serious, and unamused look. She sighed and walked in while trying to calm down her tornado of thoughts and growing hurricane of annoyance.

        Meanwhile.....

   In a research lab in Tech Square, scientists and engineers are trying to build new and improved weapons and gadgets for their fellow fighters on the battlefield fighting against Fuse. A specific field or engineers is trying to build a cannon that could possibly knock Fuse off it's trail on its direct impact on Earth. So far, things are still a bit off...
   
       "Are the blueprints for the Dex's new cannon finished being scanned yet?" A curious woman asked as she peeked over one of her assistants shoulder to look at their progress. She had winsome yellow eyes that can be the sun to almost everyone when she's in a good mood. Silk like purple hair that are strung into moonrings on both side of her head. She had on a small smile that showed sun rays.
   
        The assistant jumped up and gasped due to the sudden fright.
   
        "Miss Alice! Oh my goodness you shouldn't sneak up on me like that!," the frazzled assistant explained as she calmed her running heart.
   
         Alice Freeangel giggled and placed a gentle hand on the assistants shoulder, "Sorry Mellany. I thought my footsteps were loud enough," Alice simply shrugged then went back to looking at the blue maps and white sketch paper scattered across the blinding white glass table in front of them.    
       
         "Alright, let's see here," The winsome eyed wondered as she separated the scratch work from the real deal. She carefully laid out each important information from the next so there were no mistake into building what could might be the weapon to turn the war around.
   
         Alice Freeangel was the leader of her team of mechanics in Dexter's third laboratory in Tech Square. She is fairly new but has adjusted and went right to work and in no time, she flew to the number one spot. Alice is a graduate of UCA at the top of her class. Has a lot of street and book smarts and she shows them out in the field. Alice is caring and bright woman and is always looking out for her fellow friends. Though, if someone calls her something she doesn't like, they should suspect a large hammer slamming in to their heads.
   
         Her co-worker, Mellany Skywind, is older than Alice by a few years. Mellany isn't a graduate of UCA, but knows her machines the best in her field. She specializes in blueprints and planning in this lab. She has brown eyes and short brown hair that barely touches the collar of her porcelain white lab coat. Mellany has the will of nearly a "scaredy cat" so they nicknamed her. She can be easily frightened though she tries not to be which is coming along slowly.
   
        As their work progressed, so has the other workers in their lab. Out of nowhere came an explosion that sounded from below them and what sounded like a person screaming out a long "I" down the hallway.
   
        That person came bursting into the blueprints lab holding a machine gun with devious eyes.
   
"I fixed it!"
   
         The two girls were a bit creep out by the man due to his attire and psycho like eyes. The tall man had on goggles and a lab coat that was completely singed off a few inches at the back tail end.
   
        "William, when you say you fixed something and it involves a machine gun, or even any other device, please don't aim that directly at us," murmured Mellany as she scooted back and shrunk a little. Alice sighed yet smiled.
   
        "Alright! looks like your little weapon can be sent to Dexter to see if he approves of it," Alice said as she strides over to get a closer look at the machine gun, which was also a flamethrower also which was not little. William lowered the gun and smiled. It amazed her on how much their lab workers can possibly make due to the possible lack of resources because of the war. Then another explosion happened again, this time louder.

        "Oh...," William casually exclaimed like it was no big deal, "I think they blew up the prototype wrist mini machine gun."
   
        "You're kidding?!" Mellany shrieked.
   
        Alice laughed full heartedly and shrugged, "This lab is still surviving at least!"
   
        William huffed and chuckled, "Too soon to say..."
   
        "Don't talk nonsense William!" Mellany scolded.
   
        "Alright, Alright! Let's go see how bad the damage is," Alice replied like this was an everyday thing.

        __________________

   Just as the bell rung for third period, a red headed figure walked up the front of the steps. His handed were in his pockets and his expression seemed like he wanted to kill someone. Half-heartedly, that boy sort of did feel like that. His dark sapphire eyes gazed up at the school and he sighed and went in with murderous thoughts on his good for nothing counselor. He already escaped school for 4 months, and he doesn't want to go back. Sadly, his caged will couldn't decide that.

        __________________

   
        During 3rd period in Study Hall, Travis plopped into his desk and lied his head down as his eyes immediately closed a second later. He was still worn out from last night's mission. His classmates kept on pestering him and his team about their mission they did. All there was to it was to steal information and report it back to Scoville. Of, course that didn't satisfy their curious companions.   
   
        Fray knocked on his head lightly and chuckled.
   
        "Wake up Cinderella, or do I need to hit you with a glass shoe?" the pale boy said with 1-inch text books in his hands.
   
        Travis sighed as he looked up showing deep shadow bags under his eyes, "Those Disney jokes are getting old."

        Fray set his supplies in the seat next to him and crossed his arms as he looked at the platinum blonde in front of him. Fray was in a casual mood, not even the slightest bit tired, since he has gone straight two days without sleep which didn't really bother him. He had a high tolerance in a lot of things.
   
        Drevera came in a few seconds later just as the bell wrung to begin their class, which is just made up of free time.
   
        Drevera's bag and binder hit the desk roughly which made a loud clang sent through out the room and a complaint from our teacher. She ignored that and come right over and slammed her hands on to Travis's desk.
   
        "What?" Travis ask curiously, but slightly agitated by the loud chaos made by her.
   
        Her voice came into a low mutter, "What do you think the heads will say about our job last night. I'm sure by now they've finished recording all the information we collected."
   
        "Be patient, Drevera. I'm sure they will call us anytime by now," Fray replied.
   
        Drevera wasn't a patient person at all. They teachers even agreed to teach her how to be since each student has to be patient in what they're doing so they can learn more about a specific subject. Though, even Drevera didn't have time for that.
   
        "You guys are amazing," someone next to the swooned.
   
        A few desks away from them sat a teenager with short black hair that had bangs that nearly covered one of his light teal eyes.
   
       "How is that, Hilson?" Travis said as he turned towards him.
   
        Hilson Dreyman was your typical wimp that's a genius of computer technology. He can crack computer codes and take apart and re-build a regular hand gun like it was his 6th sense. Holson is quite young of the age of 12. He reads a lot which means he has a ton of information printed into his mind. Choosing the computer and machine work over physical work, he isn't good in gym. A reason why he seems frail and nimble. Though he's still a kind guy.
   
        "Well," Hilson started as he marked the page in his book, "You guys are a good team made of members than can balance out what you guys can overall accomplish. Plus, you aren't those people who brags about it a lot... Maybe a little agitated over it, but you guys come out okay."
   
        Travis smiled at the kid's statement. Even Fray and Drevera smiled.
   
        "Thanks Hilson. That sorta means a lot," replied the violet haired Drevera who blushed a bit.
   
        "Haha! Don't take it too much. That wimp is just sucking up to ya!" shouted a scratchy voice from the other side of the room as
   
        They turned around to see the classes pain in the back.
   
        "Oh shut up, Verdez! Nobody asked for your comment!" Drevera immediately retorted back.
   
        Andrew Verdez (likes to be known as Verdez) was the trickster with dark brown, spiked hair and the same colored eyes. Surprisingly, he's also a team leader like Travis. He's in love with anything machine, sharp, or basically any thing that he can make into a weapon. Even a person. He's pretty tall but he got held back a two grades. Verdez is a tough guy with an arrogant attitude.
   
        He chuckled being full of himself as usual. The teacher immediately whacked Verdez in the back on his head with her metallic yard long ruler that can extend its size 3 times. Verdez stayed silent after the teacher's scolding. Then an announcement came on.
       
        "Excuse this interruption, but can you please send Team 5 under the command of Coach Greyson to the Headmistress's office please."
   
        The three looked at each other while the rest of the class glance up at them. Hilson smiled as the three walked out. The class immediately started murmuring and making up hypothesis of wonders about team 5, their mission of last night, and thier visit to Headmistress Lacaster's office.


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Makastar on May 10, 2011, 10:00:48 pm
lol I am patient, she's knows I'm not rushing her at all. I just wanted to see if she'd log in if I posted something on her story :P AND SHE DID! *genius*

Love the chappie as always ^^ Can't wait for moar! Hope life and school are going a little better for you ^^


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Smax on May 11, 2011, 07:16:53 pm
Great chapteh! Took a long time to read though. But still, I think you and a lot of other writers should really be grateful for your gift. Many many people just can't write like u guys do.


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on May 11, 2011, 09:10:00 pm
lol I am patient, she's knows I'm not rushing her at all. I just wanted to see if she'd log in if I posted something on her story :P AND SHE DID! *genius*

Love the chappie as always ^^ Can't wait for moar! Hope life and school are going a little better for you ^^
Heh, life is still rough as always. C4 is still in the progress. Hmm... I can always type a chapter within a day if I don't care about my problems and I actually have confidence and focus on my writing... But I do have a short attention span from time to time so~ -Facedesk-. And nah I just come on at random times. Maybe just a coincidence that I finished the Chap exactly that right time -shrugs-. Sorry o.o (Now must read ur storeh!)
Great chapteh! Took a long time to read though. But still, I think you and a lot of other writers should really be grateful for your gift. Many many people just can't write like u guys do.
Lol, yeah most writer's tend to make chapters long so readers don't have to be on the edge of their seat to find out what happens next... Though they still do that anyways depending on the story. I'm grateful though I do wish I have more patience and effort. Well, people can write, but it takes time and some just doesn't like to read and write. -shrugs- We must accept that we're all different. 

((Did I mention I have long comments as well?))


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Smax on May 11, 2011, 09:28:28 pm
Lolz to long comments. That's what I do in RPs and someone PM'd me saying to keep it short and sweet. I didn't listen. Anyway, back on topic.


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Makastar on May 12, 2011, 12:00:56 pm
Lol Long comments just mean you have lots to say ^^ And I like that. Now if it hasn't really nothing to do with anything, I can see how its bad xD

But anyway, Love the story, glad to have you here! Your my favorite Sissy evah~! And I can't wait to chat it up with you again. Also, Did you read my story?


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Smax on May 12, 2011, 05:38:55 pm
Hasn't everyone... (not meant to be offensive)


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Makastar on May 12, 2011, 06:38:45 pm
Um...no...I know she mentioned going to read it...wanted to know what she thought.

Keep it about her story Smax, I just asked the question for her in my post.


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: LastRequiem on June 08, 2011, 03:58:00 pm
Sigh, been busy and sorta trying to catch up on reading your stories Alice :).

-Bangs her head against the desk- Ugh! Writers block. I think I'll just draw the characters right now or something just to get rid of it. Plus I do prefer drawing yet i can't make manga comic like stories x.x. Alright, I'm so sorry for the... Unactive-ness


Title: Re: U.C.A. - C.E.S.A.
Post by: Makastar on June 16, 2011, 10:50:54 am
You're fine! I MISS YOU! I hope you can come to the convention this summer V_V

Anyway, writers block is something that happens to the best of us. The best way to get through it is to just scribble random things down until you build up a pathway or just ideas into your brain. I am often just continuously writing to keep the drive alive in me. Recently over the last week and a half, I haven't written anything at all that remotely is something fun (I don't count the writing I do for work). I posted up something on the writing blog today but its very rough around the edges from my lack of practice over such a short time.

Just keep working on your skills and you'll be fine ^^ I look forward to your next updates!