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Title: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on October 05, 2010, 10:07:21 pm
First, you should know while this story will be based off of FusionFall, it is not Fusionfall related.

Fusion Mayhem shares similarities, like Fusion(renamed), a galactic lord who has his minions (not made out of Fusion Matter) attack planets, overthrowing them, and chaining them to his mighty spaceship. Fusion has powers, he can manifest energy, turn it into a solid, and use it to attack in all directions. His minions are the galaxies finest bounty hunters, whom he cloned. Earth is next on his sight, but little does he know, Earth was anticipating his attack. Earth got rid of its schools, and began training their children to fight the menace that could well mean the end of Earth. After 114 years of training, it was time. A few kids, like the protagonist (Alshary Sharpshoot) were not forced into military training and were allowed to, you know, just be kids.


Alshary Sharpshoot
Age 14
Info:
Was found near a pier on a small boat at the age of 3 by an Egyptian runaway teenager named Abasi Tania, who at the age of 18, adopted the infant. In the countryside, she raised his until she mysteriously disappeared when Ash was 9. There, he raised himself, wondering if she was ever to come back.






I'll post more info later.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 11, 2010, 10:40:24 pm
"Fusion Mayhem!" Chapter 1: Alpha , Part 1
In this chapter...
Alshary Sharpshoot (Debut),Sparklebird (Debut),Minnions(Debut),Therese (Debut),Hank (Debut), Abasi (Debut via mention)


-In a scene of a forest, a young boy wearing a green Egyptian-like costume is seen running around the woods, as he is running he unsheathes a claymore with a green emerald encrusted near the tip of the sword, he attacks a log, successfully cutting it in half.-

Alshary: Yeah! I got it! -throws claymore at bullseye in the tree- That's another! -Suddenly, a log attached to a rope comes charging at Alshary[/color]- Huh? -dodges with a facile backflip- Now, if I can finish the last drill this time... - Four wooden spikes are shot at Alshary- Here goes... -Dodges the first and second wooden spikes with 2 sidesteps, the third one by jumping away from it, but is left vulnerable for the fourth one- Oh no! -Quickly unsheathes claymore and blocks spike- Aww, I didn't finish!

Sparklebird: *giggles*

Alshary: What's so funny?

Sparklebird: Your not very good your own drills are you? I though you were a gonner when you were left vulnerable for that fourth spike, but you do have good reflexes! You still need a lot of work though!

Alshary: And I suppose you can do better?

Sparklebird: Maybe I could, if I tried. After all, I used to be in the military.

Alshary: Yeah, you military kids are very elite... -notices the sky turning red- Oh no! I'm gonna miss dinner! -sprints over to Therese and Hank's house-


Sparklebird: Um, kay? -shouts- I'll see you later!

~~~~~~~~~Inside the house

Therese: Whoah! Calm down! I can't handle much excitement right now you know -pats her own stomach, as she is pregnant-


Alshary: I'm very great full that you guys have offered to cook dinner for every night.


Therese: You could stay at our home too!


Alshary: Thank you Tesse, but I won't leave my house, even if I'm the only one living there... -looks down- I wish I knew where Abasi was...She was the closest thing I have had to a mother.

Therese: Cheer up kiddo! I made you your favorite! -serves Alshary his favorite food, Chicken and Mashed potatoes with 2 biscuits-

Alshary: Thank you Tesse! Is Hank coming? Or is he still working on that crib for your baby?

Therese Still out working on that crib. Trying to prove to be a great husband, but if he keeps building everything for our baby a that pace he won't even have any energy to hold her!

Alshary: Oh... -looking outside via window-

Therese: Why are you looking outside kiddo? Are thinking about that girl that always visits you when you're training?

Alshary: Wha? NO! No no no no. Why would I be? Heheheh... -blushing-

Therese: *giggles* Young romance is so cute!

Alshary: Romance? I barely know her! Why would I like her? I have reason to in the slightest! -uneasy, continues to eat food-


                                       Scene 1 End






Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Mayito on November 11, 2010, 10:52:03 pm
I don't get it....


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 12, 2010, 12:51:42 pm
Um, what don't you get? This is pretty obvious stuff.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Jamie Canyon on November 12, 2010, 03:50:03 pm
I get it perfectly.  I think you've got a good story under your nose, now just keep it up.

Whens the next chappie coming out? o_o


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Mayito on November 12, 2010, 10:26:13 pm
Now I know why I don't get it!! But I guess I should no say!! Good bye!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 13, 2010, 05:59:10 pm
Joker: K, u done trolling?

Jamie: Right after I'm done with Chapter 1, which will continue later today.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 13, 2010, 10:48:57 pm
I visit you a lot and you don't know me much? XD I love it so far though. ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 15, 2010, 07:53:37 am
hahaha love it :P Write more now! Kthnx!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 18, 2010, 08:34:10 pm
I knew you'd make this awesomer then awesome.

So far, it looks like something out of a manga. I like it.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 18, 2010, 08:51:58 pm
Thank you for your very kind support amigos!


I will post a new scene each Friday.

On occasion, I will post 2 scenes.


Only way I can find this in my schedule.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 23, 2010, 04:33:23 pm
So the next scene will be this Friday?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 23, 2010, 05:06:39 pm
Yes, I might do more than 1 since it's a holiday.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 23, 2010, 06:13:16 pm
When does the Alice appear? The Alice is bestest everrrrrr :3


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 23, 2010, 07:25:56 pm
Alice will appear along with her "friend" in a different chapter, because she's **** like that.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 23, 2010, 09:53:13 pm
WOOT! Wait "friend" OH LORD! who could that be??? -waits-


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 23, 2010, 10:08:42 pm
Lol, "friend", can't wait to see what happens next. XD


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 24, 2010, 12:09:05 am
Did I mention her friend is a boy? You could make a word if you put boy and friend together. Interesting...


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 24, 2010, 06:20:24 am
Interestingggggg...so when's my chappie coming up hmmmmm!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 24, 2010, 07:25:36 pm
When it does. Your entrance shall be EPIC.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 24, 2010, 08:45:12 pm
Gah~I can't wait to see this chappie -whines-


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 24, 2010, 09:44:22 pm
Sooo, next chapter comes out this Friday?
Lol, you girls and your excitement.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 24, 2010, 11:30:04 pm
Not a chapter, but a scene(s)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 25, 2010, 09:30:03 am
Make it appearrrr already V_V


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 25, 2010, 07:31:08 pm
Lol, you can feel Alice's excitement! ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 25, 2010, 11:12:11 pm
IT'S FRIDAY! -points to clock- gimme chappie!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 26, 2010, 09:35:45 am
INCLUDE ME IN UR STORY!!!!! IM INTERESTING....maybe......BUT GO!!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 26, 2010, 09:46:19 am
-sits and waits patiently for chappie-


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 26, 2010, 04:53:01 pm
Settle down noah, Alice. I'll post the chapter later today

That Soapy kid is a stud.

Silver I can't just add you, I've been working on this story for a while.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 26, 2010, 05:16:23 pm
A stud? XD  It will be interesting to hear how this turns out.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 26, 2010, 05:36:21 pm
-sits and waits- wait, who's a stud???


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 26, 2010, 05:58:08 pm
Quote
I'll post the chapter later today

I'll most likely have to wait until tomorrow, then.

Btw, who's Soapy? x]


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 26, 2010, 06:09:14 pm
Quote
I'll post the chapter later today

I'll most likely have to wait until tomorrow, then.

Btw, who's Soapy? x]

Couldn't be u since ur not a stud :P hehehe


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 26, 2010, 07:11:51 pm
HAHAHA!!!!!! STUD!!!! HAHAHA!!!! YOU CRACK ME UP SOMETHIMES MAN!!!! HAH AHAHAHA!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Spike Spiegel on November 26, 2010, 09:58:00 pm
hmm story is allright


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 26, 2010, 11:13:02 pm
"Fusion Mayhem!" Chapter 1: Alpha , Part 1
In this chapter...
Alshary Sharpshoot (Debut),Sparklebird (Debut),Minnions(Debut),Therese (Debut),Hank (Debut), Abasi (Debut via mention)


-In a scene of a forest, a young boy wearing a green Egyptian-like costume is seen running around the woods, as he is running he unsheathes a claymore with a green emerald encrusted near the tip of the sword, he attacks a log, successfully cutting it in half.-

Alshary: Yeah! I got it! -throws claymore at bullseye in the tree- That's another! -Suddenly, a log attached to a rope comes charging at Alshary[/color]- Huh? -dodges with a facile backflip- Now, if I can finish the last drill this time... - Four wooden spikes are shot at Alshary- Here goes... -Dodges the first and second wooden spikes with 2 sidesteps, the third one by jumping away from it, but is left vulnerable for the fourth one- Oh no! -Quickly unsheathes claymore and blocks spike- Aww, I didn't finish!

Sparklebird: *giggles*

Alshary: What's so funny?

Sparklebird: Your not very good your own drills are you? I though you were a gonner when you were left vulnerable for that fourth spike, but you do have good reflexes! You still need a lot of work though!

Alshary: And I suppose you can do better?

Sparklebird: Maybe I could, if I tried. After all, I used to be in the military.

Alshary: Yeah, you military kids are very elite... -notices the sky turning red- Oh no! I'm gonna miss dinner! -sprints over to Therese and Hank's house-


Sparklebird: Um, kay? -shouts- I'll see you later!

~~~~~~~~~Inside the house

Therese: Whoah! Calm down! I can't handle much excitement right now you know -pats her own stomach, as she is pregnant-


Alshary: I'm very great full that you guys have offered to cook dinner for every night.


Therese: You could stay at our home too!


Alshary: Thank you Tesse, but I won't leave my house, even if I'm the only one living there... -looks down- I wish I knew where Abasi was...She was the closest thing I have had to a mother.

Therese: Cheer up kiddo! I made you your favorite! -serves Alshary his favorite food, Chicken and Mashed potatoes with 2 biscuits-

Alshary: Thank you Tesse! Is Hank coming? Or is he still working on that crib for your baby?

Therese Still out working on that crib. Trying to prove to be a great husband, but if he keeps building everything for our baby a that pace he won't even have any energy to hold her!

Alshary: Oh... -looking outside via window-

Therese: Why are you looking outside kiddo? Are thinking about that girl that always visits you when you're training?

Alshary: Wha? NO! No no no no. Why would I be? Heheheh... -blushing-

Therese: *giggles* Young romance is so cute!

Alshary: Romance? I barely know her! Why would I like her? I have reason to in the slightest! -uneasy, continues to eat food-


                                       Scene 1 End




Chapter 1: Alpha, Scene 2

-After his dinner, Alshary rushed out into the woods in search of Hank-



Alshary: Hank! Hello? Where are you! Tessa is getting lonely...TESSE IS GOING INTO LABOR!...It didn't work!


Sparklebird: Gross...Who's going into labor?


Alshary: Nobody, it's just a method I always use to make Hank come back inside, but it didn't work.


Sparklebird: Isn't he that guy the one who always chops down trees for wood?


Alshary: Yeah, him! With the beard! He is my idol next to Skyler Shiver♥.


Sparklebird: That kid who sings like a woman?


Alshary: SHUT UP HE SINGS LIKE AN ANGEL!


Sparklebird: You tell me to shut up one more I'm gonna have to porcupine spikes right into your throat! -hears something rustling in the bushes- What could that be?


Alshary: Hank! Is that you? TESSE IS IN LABOR!


Sparklebird: That is still gross.


-the bushes keep rustling-


Alshary: Maybe it's a koala!


Sparklebird: If Koala's lived here in Setylia...


(Setylia is the fictional state which the story is taking place on now).


Alshary: Wait a minute, why would Hank be rustling in the bushes?


-starts to notice the sky getting a lot darker-


Alshary: Let me guess, that is not Hank.


Sparklebird: You're right. -shoots a piece of turquoise which is generated from her limbs. History behind her powers  is unknown-

Minnion: Gah! Right in the eye!

Alshary: I knew this would happen one day! I knew that one day Fusion was going to find this town which is supposed to be well hidden in the woods! But luckily, I have prepared for such a moment -unsheathes claymore-


Sparklebird: More are going to pop up right now.


-The Minnion is suddenly joined by more Minnions-



Sparklebird: Called it.


Minnion: I am the great bounty hunter Razalo! I am as quick as the wind and will use it as weapon to cut you limb from limb!


Alshary: A fish? With a mohawk? And a leather jacket?


Minnion: I am a basilisk! Now prepare to be cut!



- the wind starts to get rough-


Sparklebird: My friends were anticipating you guys too ;)


-creates an armor from her turquoise-


Alshary: You have diamonds? Yay...All I have is a sword...


Minnions: DIE!


-a streak of nearly invisible wind is launched at Alshary-

Alshary: Alright Ashy, we've been practicing this...


-dodges the first streak with a sidestep, the second with another sidestep, the third one with a flip-


Alshary: Here goes... -dodges the fourth one with a cartwheel-


Minnion: Grr...time to use our razor sharps fins!


Alshary: What?!


-2 minnions dash towards Alshary at a jet-fast speed-


Alshary: Oh no! -dodges attacks, barely-


Minnion: throughout the galaxy, I'm knowing as the "Blinding Razor"!


Sparklebird: There are 9 of you, and countless amounts of my turquoise. Hmmm... -shoots turquoise out from all sides-


Minnion: Thank you kid, you made defeating  you all the more easier...


Sparklebird: Huh?


-A piece of turquoise manages to reach Alshary, who quickly blocks it with his claymore, but is left vulnerable-


Minnion: This is it! -Streaks of air are launched at Alshary-



Sparklebird: NOOOOO!



-the streaks of air cut through Alshary-



                               Scene 2 End



Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 27, 2010, 07:20:21 am
why did you kill ur self?!?!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 27, 2010, 09:15:50 am
O_O...MOAR!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 27, 2010, 09:51:54 am
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR!~!!!!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 27, 2010, 11:12:35 am
Quote
I'll post the chapter later today

I'll most likely have to wait until tomorrow, then.

Btw, who's Soapy? x]

Couldn't be u since ur not a stud :P hehehe


FAYUL

I'm not Soapy, I'm Phuong, and I can do cartwheel.

- does a horrible cartwheel -

Anyway, nice scene you got thar.

Can't wait 'till next.. Friday.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 27, 2010, 01:58:46 pm
If you guys suck up enough I might give you one tonight  :P


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 27, 2010, 07:40:30 pm
im not gonna suck up to SCUM!!!! jk, but no, i just want to know why u freiza'd ur self.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 27, 2010, 08:15:53 pm
Cause im ****, any other questions?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 27, 2010, 10:40:46 pm
If you guys suck up enough I might give you one tonight  :P


 - Begins sucking in the air around Sharpy -

 It'll take a while before I can suck up a whole human being...


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Spike Spiegel on November 28, 2010, 05:31:06 am
If you guys suck up enough I might give you one tonight  :P


 - Begins sucking in the air around Sharpy -

 It'll take a while before I can suck up a whole human being...
wow dude. and why did u kill your self dude? and can i be in the next chapter or sence?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 28, 2010, 01:59:30 pm
I can't add anyone else to my story right now since I have been writing this since Summer.


Also, some of you should know why I "killed" myself.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 28, 2010, 02:28:36 pm
TELL US!!!!!! TELL US!!!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 28, 2010, 05:39:32 pm
Another great scene Ash! It's cool that you let me have turqoise powers too! ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 28, 2010, 06:45:56 pm
YOUR IN IT AND HE WONT PUT ME IN IT?!?!?! no fair.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 28, 2010, 07:26:01 pm
I didnt know you well enough back then Silver, sorry.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 29, 2010, 07:43:55 am
its cool bro. if you make another one, remember to pull all your freinds like me, alice, sparklebird, and others. cuse we got your back man.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 29, 2010, 08:22:47 am
(http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:IwBP_gVixYatGM:http://www.zerochan.net/src/zerochan.Taokaka.138933.jpg&t=1)
-taokaka says post moar pwease-


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 29, 2010, 10:18:51 am
-looks at the picture- what is that?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 29, 2010, 12:58:26 pm
OT: Srsly, have u not seen all my Taokaka stuff? It's Taokaka without the mask. Stay on Topic though :P

PS: POST MOAR NAOW!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 29, 2010, 02:29:49 pm
fine. i just dont know where its from. ok back on topic. POST MORE!!!!! POST MORE!!!! POST MORE!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 29, 2010, 03:03:32 pm
(http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:IwBP_gVixYatGM:http://www.zerochan.net/src/zerochan.Taokaka.138933.jpg&t=1)
-taokaka says post moar pwease-


She's a human being? /Shot/

fine. i just dont know where its from. ok back on topic. POST MORE!!!!! POST MORE!!!! POST MORE!!!!!!

She's from Blazblue

On~Topic:

How long is this story of yours, anyway?

The last scene confused me a lil bit for some reason...


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 29, 2010, 05:51:37 pm
As of what I have right now, it's a bit long.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 29, 2010, 06:40:49 pm
As of what I have right now, it's a bit long.


(http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:VhJuuWNOj3vVnM:http://http://www.munsterfans.com/forum/aspjpeg_resize.asp?Path=http://www.w3bdevil.com/forums/That-Is-Excellent-MrBurns.jpg&Size=500&t=1)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 29, 2010, 07:01:53 pm
i totally got it. BUT EXPLAIN WHY YOU KILLED YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 29, 2010, 08:13:28 pm
Settle down now Silver. I might post a scene before Friday and finish the chapter on Friday.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 29, 2010, 09:11:51 pm
but dude, you gotta explain what heppened!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 29, 2010, 09:25:43 pm
I think it'll make more sense when he posts the next scene and he won't say anything because it will be a spoiler.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 29, 2010, 09:28:33 pm
 I love how this thread was more deserted for a couple of weeks,
but when you put something up, it got populer.


( Incomplete thoughts ftw)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 29, 2010, 09:31:52 pm
-sits and wait for the next chappie- must kno wat happens next...


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 01, 2010, 02:43:17 pm
-sits next to alice- you waiting for the chapter too?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on December 17, 2010, 07:19:40 am
-whines- the wait is killin' me! Where's Mista Ashy V_V


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 18, 2010, 11:30:18 am
THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 26, 2010, 02:00:39 am
Ok, I know I am WAY overdue in posting the next chapter, but now that I'm no longer busy, I will catch you up as the week comes. I'll likely have a new scene(s) tomorrow. Sorry if you thought I was trolling, I was not, I was just busy. Also, my Alshary Sharpshoot persona was killed by a fusion ambush, so reviving me was a hassle. Anyways, I am back.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 26, 2010, 09:34:17 am
wait, if your not ashy anymore, who are you?!?!?!?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 26, 2010, 11:07:08 am
I'm still me, I was just revived.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 26, 2010, 12:52:11 pm
then how did u die?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 26, 2010, 05:22:11 pm
I explained everything in that one post O_O


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 26, 2010, 05:34:16 pm
ohhhhhhh. but do u mean he died in ff so you said to all of the ppl he died, or did u make it up.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 26, 2010, 06:31:31 pm
It's just a creative thing to say for me not being here for a week.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 26, 2010, 08:02:09 pm
oooooooo.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on December 27, 2010, 03:12:16 pm
Good to see you back again Ashy! ^^ And another forum name change? XD


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 27, 2010, 03:56:19 pm
first he was courage, then something else, then shuma, then is revived.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 02, 2011, 04:47:00 pm
Lol welcome back!

-still waiting-


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 02, 2011, 05:28:46 pm
well, now he is not posting the chapter and im bored. -falls asleep- ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZZzZzZzZzZzZzZzzZz


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 03, 2011, 10:41:03 am
-starts sharpening the pitchforks- Must...Have...New...Chappie!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 03, 2011, 03:10:11 pm
-takes out flamethrower- I WILL BURN THIS THREAD TO THE GROUND!!!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 03, 2011, 03:18:00 pm
O_O but if u burn it, then it will die!!!! V_V


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 03, 2011, 03:34:00 pm
oh good point. i will burn the parts that dont have us in it. -starts flame-


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 03, 2011, 10:02:25 pm
Patience young ones...


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 04, 2011, 10:03:48 am
Don't burn it! That's mean!!!

And I'm older than you so :P But seriously, what date should we expect a new update ^_^ Just curious since I miss reading!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 04, 2011, 06:40:27 pm
Friday for sure, but I really hope I can post before that

Alice, I was chryogenically frozen, so biologically I'm younger than you, but I'm actually over 700 YEARS OLD


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 04, 2011, 07:45:11 pm
i thought u were 15. not over 700. ur past is weird dude. -starts up famethrower- i will burn it after friday if the new chapter isnt posted. U STILL NEED TO EXPLAIN WHY U KILLED URSELF!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 04, 2011, 09:16:32 pm
Bring it on.

But in all sriousness, please just wait a little a longer, I know I'm way overdue but posting chapters takes longer than doing RPs. If I post a scene or chapter, I want to do it right.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 05, 2011, 09:26:22 am
*giggles* I know how long it takes to do chappies Ashy, I write novels afterall ^_-

I'll try and check in Friday but I'm going to be at a con. I'll just set it up so I get sent updates of this thread on my phone I suppose so I can keep up with everyone else in reading the new chappie ^_^

Good Luck! ^_-


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 05, 2011, 02:58:35 pm
u write novels? are any of them famous?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 06, 2011, 07:32:36 am
My novels aren't currently published, my poetry is though. :P Enuff talk on that though, More talk about Ashy's story!!!

*waits for Friday* I bet its gonna be a really good chappie...or he'll kill us with a cliffhanger!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 06, 2011, 03:51:17 pm
I STILL HAVE MY FLAMETHROWER!!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 08, 2011, 12:53:55 am



Chapter 1: Alpha, Scene 2

-After his dinner, Alshary rushed out into the woods in search of Hank-



Alshary: Hank! Hello? Where are you! Tessa is getting lonely...TESSE IS GOING INTO LABOR!...It didn't work!


Sparklebird: Gross...Who's going into labor?


Alshary: Nobody, it's just a method I always use to make Hank come back inside, but it didn't work.


Sparklebird: Isn't he that guy the one who always chops down trees for wood?


Alshary: Yeah, him! With the beard! He is my idol next to Skyler Shiver♥.


Sparklebird: That kid who sings like a woman?


Alshary: SHUT UP HE SINGS LIKE AN ANGEL!


Sparklebird: You tell me to shut up one more I'm gonna have to porcupine spikes right into your throat! -hears something rustling in the bushes- What could that be?


Alshary: Hank! Is that you? TESSE IS IN LABOR!


Sparklebird: That is still gross.


-the bushes keep rustling-


Alshary: Maybe it's a koala!


Sparklebird: If Koala's lived here in Setylia...


(Setylia is the fictional state which the story is taking place on now).


Alshary: Wait a minute, why would Hank be rustling in the bushes?


-starts to notice the sky getting a lot darker-


Alshary: Let me guess, that is not Hank.


Sparklebird: You're right. -shoots a piece of turquoise which is generated from her limbs. History behind her powers  is unknown-

Minnion: Gah! Right in the eye!

Alshary: I knew this would happen one day! I knew that one day Fusion was going to find this town which is supposed to be well hidden in the woods! But luckily, I have prepared for such a moment -unsheathes claymore-


Sparklebird: More are going to pop up right now.


-The Minnion is suddenly joined by more Minnions-



Sparklebird: Called it.


Minnion: I am the great bounty hunter Razalo! I am as quick as the wind and will use it as weapon to cut you limb from limb!


Alshary: A fish? With a mohawk? And a leather jacket?


Minnion: I am a basilisk! Now prepare to be cut!



- the wind starts to get rough-


Sparklebird: My friends were anticipating you guys too ;)


-creates an armor from her turquoise-


Alshary: You have diamonds? Yay...All I have is a sword...


Minnions: DIE!


-a streak of nearly invisible wind is launched at Alshary-

Alshary: Alright Ashy, we've been practicing this...


-dodges the first streak with a sidestep, the second with another sidestep, the third one with a flip-


Alshary: Here goes... -dodges the fourth one with a cartwheel-


Minnion: Grr...time to use our razor sharps fins!


Alshary: What?!


-2 minnions dash towards Alshary at a jet-fast speed-


Alshary: Oh no! -dodges attacks, barely-


Minnion: throughout the galaxy, I'm knowing as the "Blinding Razor"!


Sparklebird: There are 9 of you, and countless amounts of my turquoise. Hmmm... -shoots turquoise out from all sides-


Minnion: Thank you kid, you made defeating  you all the more easier...


Sparklebird: Huh?


-A piece of turquoise manages to reach Alshary, who quickly blocks it with his claymore, but is left vulnerable-


Minnion: This is it! -Streaks of air are launched at Alshary-



Sparklebird: NOOOOO!



-the streaks of air cut through Alshary-



                               Scene 2 End





Chapter 1: Alpha, Scene 3

Sparklebird: YOU KILLED HIM! HOW COULD YOU! -Due the loss of her friend, Sparklebird starts shooting the turquoise from her body uncontrollably,killing a few of the Minnions. All while crying-


Minnions: Oooh, someone needs to learn a lesson! This town belongs to Lord Fusion and LORD FUSION ONLY!! -the remaining minnions (4) slash at Sparklebird with their "razor-sharp fins"-


Sparklebird: I'm not scared of you -Sparkle suddenly generates a blade made out of turquoise that is also "razor-sharp-  I'm going to cut you all into chum for what you did to Ashy!


-Sparklebird blocks the wind attacks and outruns the minnions, even going so far as to throwing her turquoise blade, which impales and kills one of the minnions-

Sparklebird: I can't keep up, they're way too fast for me.  But I can't die here, and I'm sure as heck I won't! TAKE THIS! -Sparklebird shoots more turquoise out all sides, but the minnions have made their way around the turquoise because of Sparklebird's repetitive use of it-

Sparklebird: Oh no! One of them is close! -Sparklebird quickly reacts with a backflip, barely dodging the minnions' fins, which leaves a cut going across her left arm-

Minnion: Let's make this quick, we have a village to take over!

-The minnion attempts to stab Sparklebird on her stomach, but with all of the energy she has left, she rolls and gets another cut. This time on her side-

Minnion: Look at her, all worn out and useless. Since she has managed to live for this long why don't we finish her off with style?

Other Minnion: Sounds like a plan! -the 3 Minnions start manipulating the wind so they take the form of rings, as soon as they're taking time to create the rings, Sparklebird shoots turqoise at all 3 of the minnions, one that gets a turquoise in their head and dies-

Sparklebird: -While clutching her wounds- Showoffs...-Sparklebird quickly creates a barrier of turquoise around her which  bemuse the minnions long enough to allow her to get up, turn around and run towards Sharpshoot- If I'm going to die, at least I'll die by his side...

-suddenly, Sparklebird feels a hand on her left arm-


Sharpshoot: The only thing I will never let happen is your death at the hands of Fusion...


-Sharpshoot stands back up-



Sharpshoot: Look at me, I'm all healed, don't know why, but I'm not complaining.


Minnions: IMPOSSIBLE! -The minnions shoot razor wind at Sharpshoot on vital areas, like the heart, neck and head. Sharpshoot is still standing, bleeding, but still standing-


Sharpshoot: Do you still want to kill Sparklebird? 'Cause I won't let you! -picks up his claymore- IKUZE!




                                           Scene 3 End





Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 08, 2011, 10:12:34 am
WOOO!!!!!! how could u not die here?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on January 09, 2011, 07:35:14 pm
That was a great scene Ashy! ^^ Are you posting another one next Friday?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 10, 2011, 06:52:54 am
*reads*

*waits for more*

I love how everyone's calling u Ashy now :P Very nice scene. Can't wait for more! I hope you give my character a giant hammer :3 hehehe


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 10, 2011, 09:05:44 pm
Wait, she's in it too? Aww cmon man!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 10, 2011, 09:34:02 pm
@Alice: Honestly, don't expect one. I didn't write a giant hammer into your character.

@Zoey: Friday for sure

@Silver: I though I mentioned that before O_O


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 11, 2011, 06:16:49 am
Awww sad day V_V *is over it already*

And yeah Silver, I"m in it...why do u say it like its a bad thing >.>


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on January 11, 2011, 10:56:26 pm
I think he just really wants to be in it, but it's not Ashy's fault that we didn't know him before. Maybe you will be in another fan-fic Silver, don't be sad.
Also Alice, it's because of us everyone's calling him Ashy now :D


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 12, 2011, 06:36:30 am
I think he just really wants to be in it, but it's not Ashy's fault that we didn't know him before. Maybe you will be in another fan-fic Silver, don't be sad.
Also Alice, it's because of us everyone's calling him Ashy now :D

Hehehehe! Best nickname ever!!!! <3


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 12, 2011, 07:06:49 pm
@ alice and zoey: i dont think so. no one knows about me except for dasher, alice, astro, ashy, zoey, and some others.
@ashy: u mentioned that zoey was in it but not alice.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on January 12, 2011, 09:24:54 pm
@ashy: u mentioned that zoey was in it but not alice.

Ash told me that Alice was going to be in it and probably anyone else who is in it.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 12, 2011, 10:26:18 pm
To hold you guys off *or attempt to* until Friday, here are your Tesse and Sparklebird bios.


Tesse
Age: 24
Appearance: Long orange hair. Medium height. white skin tone.
Info: Tesse is a caring, young woman and wife to Hank. When Abasi took in Sharpshoot, Tesse noticed they moved in next door. She treats Sharpshoot like a son and thinks he has what it takes to end the war because Tesse knows something about Sharpshoot that Sharpshoot himself does not know of. She lives in a small town with no name in the state of Setylia. The town has no links to the Big City.

Zoey Sparklebird
Age 15
Appearance: Dark Brown hair usually worn in a ponytail. Medium height. Tan skin tone.
Info:
Zoey lived a normal with her friends and family in the Big City. She was smart and she loved her family very much. One day, she drafted into the teenage army by the government to be trained as a soldier for the war at the age of 7. She escaped a year later by unknown means. She came back to her old home after escaping, but noticed her house was burned to the ground. Her parents are still nowhere to be found. Since then, Zoey left her old name and took the name Sparklebird when she discovered her power to generate turquoise from her limbs. She lives with her "friends" who were the ones that broke her out the army and took her to her old home. They all train regularly.

Sharpshoot's Bio will be be updated next week






Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Jamie Canyon on January 12, 2011, 11:17:11 pm
Awesome story Ash! Truly this is getting pretty exciting! ^_^ I am all curious and draw into your story, wondering why Ashy is still alive 0_o The suspense is a killer!!!

So this Friday?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 13, 2011, 06:46:39 am
Lolz, I'm pretty sure Ashy announced me and Zoey as some of the firsts he would feature in the story, plus Mista Miley Cyrus :P I think there was a lot of posts here already that even said that too so...yeah. Anyway, sorry you're not featured in the story. Maybe next time.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 13, 2011, 04:08:30 pm
hey, Hey, HEY!!!!!!!! mr miley cyrus is a curse where i come from! its like saying i do weird stuff in like kansas, or am crazy.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 13, 2011, 09:06:11 pm
Mr. Miley Cyrus is Conker/Soapy/Paranoid? That's one of his many names.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on January 13, 2011, 10:16:37 pm
The bio you did for me Ashy was short sweet and to the point. :D


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 15, 2011, 11:03:35 am
WHERES THE NEW CHAPPEI!?!?!?!?!?!?!?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 15, 2011, 12:30:56 pm
God you miss one day you couldn't post a chapter and here you have people complaining already!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 15, 2011, 02:38:30 pm
Dude, I'm in suspense!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 16, 2011, 07:53:20 am
Take your time Sweetie ^_^ Don't let trying to make the deadline get u stressed. I'm sure you'll post it when you post it.

I'm super excited to read it :3


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on January 16, 2011, 08:57:01 pm
Yeah Ashy, don't worry, it'll be worth waiting for. ^^

@Silver, please try to be patient.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 19, 2011, 03:19:42 pm
I CANT!!!!!! PEOPLE MY AGE HAVE SHORT ATTENTION SPANDS!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 20, 2011, 08:35:31 am
I'll post 2 scenes tomorrow if I have them time. All I know is that you can expect at least one.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 20, 2011, 08:55:46 am
*thumbs up* Sounds good! I'll keep checking to see if you post more.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 21, 2011, 07:13:23 pm
WE EXPECT 1 AND THERES 0!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 21, 2011, 08:35:02 pm
Simmer down, the days not even done yet.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on January 21, 2011, 11:30:50 pm
Wow Silver, try to calm down a little, okay?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 21, 2011, 11:34:36 pm
Ashy has been busy a lot lately, I hope you're doing ok Ashy. Don't feel you need to rush to post up a new chappie. Take your time!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 22, 2011, 03:24:17 pm
Tonight I'll post both if I can find the time.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 22, 2011, 04:06:12 pm
Mmk, look forward to it! If you don't post, I'll just assume the time was not found :P Good Luck!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 22, 2011, 06:22:17 pm


Chapter 1: Alpha, Scene 3

Sparklebird: YOU KILLED HIM! HOW COULD YOU! -Due the loss of her friend, Sparklebird starts shooting the turquoise from her body uncontrollably,killing a few of the Minnions. All while crying-


Minnions: Oooh, someone needs to learn a lesson! This town belongs to Lord Fusion and LORD FUSION ONLY!! -the remaining minnions (4) slash at Sparklebird with their "razor-sharp fins"-


Sparklebird: I'm not scared of you -Sparkle suddenly generates a blade made out of turquoise that is also "razor-sharp-  I'm going to cut you all into chum for what you did to Ashy!


-Sparklebird blocks the wind attacks and outruns the minnions, even going so far as to throwing her turquoise blade, which impales and kills one of the minnions-

Sparklebird: I can't keep up, they're way too fast for me.  But I can't die here, and I'm sure as heck I won't! TAKE THIS! -Sparklebird shoots more turquoise out all sides, but the minnions have made their way around the turquoise because of Sparklebird's repetitive use of it-

Sparklebird: Oh no! One of them is close! -Sparklebird quickly reacts with a backflip, barely dodging the minnions' fins, which leaves a cut going across her left arm-

Minnion: Let's make this quick, we have a village to take over!

-The minnion attempts to stab Sparklebird on her stomach, but with all of the energy she has left, she rolls and gets another cut. This time on her side-

Minnion: Look at her, all worn out and useless. Since she has managed to live for this long why don't we finish her off with style?

Other Minnion: Sounds like a plan! -the 3 Minnions start manipulating the wind so they take the form of rings, as soon as they're taking time to create the rings, Sparklebird shoots turqoise at all 3 of the minnions, one that gets a turquoise in their head and dies-

Sparklebird: -While clutching her wounds- Showoffs...-Sparklebird quickly creates a barrier of turquoise around her which  bemuse the minnions long enough to allow her to get up, turn around and run towards Sharpshoot- If I'm going to die, at least I'll die by his side...

-suddenly, Sparklebird feels a hand on her left arm-


Sharpshoot: The only thing I will never let happen is your death at the hands of Fusion...


-Sharpshoot stands back up-



Sharpshoot: Look at me, I'm all healed, don't know why, but I'm not complaining.


Minnions: IMPOSSIBLE! -The minnions shoot razor wind at Sharpshoot on vital areas, like the heart, neck and head. Sharpshoot is still standing, bleeding, but still standing-


Sharpshoot: Do you still want to kill Sparklebird? 'Cause I won't let you! -picks up his claymore- IKUZE!




                                           Scene 3 End





Chapter 1: Alpha, Scene 4

Minnions: How in the world is this kid still alive?


Sharpshoot: If I knew I would have abused this power years ago!


Sparklebird: You know what Sharpshoot...you need to get better reflexes. I really thought you died back there



Sharpshoot: Yeah, sorry about that...


Minnions: Quit flirting and fight!


-Sharpshoot evades the minnion that was charging at him- grabs him by the leg and throws him against Sparklebird who activated her spiky turquoise armor, killing the minnion-

Minnion: No--no--NO WAY!


-Sharpshoot grabs his claymore and makes quick work of the minnion by cutting it in half. He keeps slashing until one minnion is left-


Minnion: How the heck is this possible?


Sharpshoot: I am as surprised as you! -Sharpshoot kills the final minnion, cutting it's head off. Killing the minnion, with style-


Sharpshoot: I am beat...


Sparklebird: You know what...those healing powers would really help me right now...-Sparklebird begins to faint-


Sharpshoot: Don't worry, I'll get you to Tesse's. She'll take care of your wounds.


-Before Sharpshoot picks Sparklebird up, he hears more rustling in the bushes-


Sharpshoot: Do you hear that too...?


Sparklebird: -faintly- yeah...


Sharpshoot: -hears stomping- I have a bad feeling about this...-Sharpshoot quickly picks Sparklebird up and starts running- Something is coming alright, but I don't know what is it... -feels the wind getting rough- Could it be that...?


-Out of nowhere a giant ball rolls towards Sharpshoot and Sparklebird-

Sharpshoot: No way! -Sharpshoot starts running while evading the wind-


???: I AM GIGATON! THE IMPENETRABLE BOUNTY HUNTER OF LORD FUSION! I CRUSH THE BONES OF EVERY ONE OF MY VICTIMS WITH MY POWER OF A MILLION HUMAN MALES!



Sharpshoot: Did you say MILLION!




Gigaton: YOUR BONES WILL BE NO MATCH FOR MY STOMP! -Gigaton jumps about 55 feet in the air crashes down creating an earthquake that knocks Sharpshoot out of his feet and Sparklebird out of his hands-



Sharpshoot: Ouch...Oh no! Where did Sparklebird go?


Gigaton: Hahaha! NOTHING CAN STOP THE IMPENETRABLE GIGANTON! -Gigaton is then hit in the eyes by turquoise-

Sparklebird: Why do all of these minnions have to talk so much?


Giganton:I'M NO MINNION! AND MY EYES ARE IMPENETRABLE AS WELL! -Starts rolling into a ball and rolls towards Sharpshoot-


Sharpshoot: Gah! -gets hit by Gigaton and send flying towards a tree- I think he broke my ribs...which are not getting healed as fast for some reason...


Gigaton: NOW GIGATON WILL GET TO SMASH YOU INTO A BLOODY PULP



???: -throws axe at Gigaton, which cuts through his skin-



Gigaton: IMPOSSIBLE! HOW IS THE IMPENETRABLE GIGATON HARMED BY AN ORDINARY AXE-


???: Because Gigaton my old foe..it is I, HANK!


Sharpshoot: -With anime eyes- HANK!



Hank: Ash, how are your vital organs doing?


Sharpshoot: Pretty good!


Sparklebird: Is he that logger?


Sharpshoot: Yes, yes he is!


Sparklebird: But how can he harm Gigaton?


Hank: I too posses great strength! Not as great as Gigaton's but enough to give him a run for his money!


Sharpshoot: Hank is an olympian...



Sparklebird: I think I've heard of them! Aren't they the strongest men in the world? Don't they live Greece though?


Sharpshoot:I didn't know Hank was Greek!




Hank: Uhh..yeah...



GIGATON: AID ME YOU USELESS FISH!


Minnions: Yes commander...

-7 more Razalo clones join Gigaton-


Sharpshoot: Aww no...I need to get Zoey to Tesse!


Sparklebird: Zoey...that's the first time you've called me by my name in like, what, 2 years? You usually just call me you! And here I am calling you by your name everyday!


Sharpshoot: I don't know how you do it Hank...women confuse me.


Sparklebird: ugh...-faints-



Sharpshoot: Hank? Can you take care of that giant idiot?




Hank: You bet! Gigaton was never able to defeat me back in Greece.


Sharpshoot: Thanks Hank! I need to get this girl--I mean Zoey back to Tesse.



Hank: You really care about that girl don't you?



Sharpshoot: -blushes- I don't!



Hank: hahah! I see the way it is...



Sharpshoot: Now, I need to get back to Tesse's!



-Picks Sparklebird up and start running to Tesse's-



Gigaton: GO CHASE THAT KID WITH THE GIRLY GREEN OUTFIT WILL YOU?



Minnions: Yes. -in disgust- Commander...




                                                 SCENE 4 END


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 22, 2011, 06:57:20 pm
Dawww! Epic! Next chappie come soon yes? :3 *wags tail*


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on January 22, 2011, 11:22:01 pm
:D Love the chapter Ashy! It's becoming a much more amazing story than it was at the beginning!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 24, 2011, 04:53:51 pm
......still mad that i dont get to be a part of it.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 24, 2011, 05:59:46 pm
......still mad that i dont get to be a part of it.

and I'm still mad Frank West was cut from MvC3.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 24, 2011, 06:44:30 pm
whos that? is he like a resident evil thing?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 29, 2011, 02:53:50 pm
Scene incoming... Just a bit of a warning


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 29, 2011, 03:21:53 pm
Woot! Can't wait!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 29, 2011, 04:36:03 pm
where, where?
PS: i will be posting my second scene in my story tonight for those who read it.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 29, 2011, 05:22:19 pm
Very nice, very nice :3 I'm very excited about you guys updates. I'll work on my story very soon.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 29, 2011, 06:52:43 pm
am i in it?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 29, 2011, 07:16:07 pm
No, my stories I've already posted. Sry. Let's try and stay on-topic though :P


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 29, 2011, 07:37:30 pm
Posting..about that...

Either late night today or early morning tomorrow.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 29, 2011, 07:39:52 pm
Lol no worries, I'll keep checking here to see :3


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 30, 2011, 10:20:27 am
dont worry. be happy. -plays a bongo-


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 01, 2011, 12:22:04 pm
*nods* I'm sure he's been real busy :3 he's got tihs!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on February 01, 2011, 10:42:13 pm
I am dissapoint in my ability to post sences (or "chappies :3")


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 01, 2011, 10:53:53 pm
CHAPPIE THIEF! Lol naw, its cool :3 u got dis!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on February 02, 2011, 09:03:46 pm
It's okay Ash, we can wait. :)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on February 03, 2011, 06:52:38 pm
Are you excited for the new Batman movie as me!?
Also, am I still in this? Or have I been neglected?
'Cause I can't stand anymore disappointment in my life./Sniff/


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on February 03, 2011, 07:29:52 pm
You and Alice will appear in a future Chapter


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 03, 2011, 11:45:05 pm
Do I get to beat him up in that future chappie?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on February 04, 2011, 12:45:36 am
Chicken tastes good Alice, very good.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 04, 2011, 12:47:53 am
*blinks* I LIEK CHIKN!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 04, 2011, 08:36:35 pm
-bangs head agenst table- ITS BEEN OVER A WEEK MAN!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on February 08, 2011, 05:57:23 pm
Try being in High School and having all advance classes Silver. Then we'll talk.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on February 08, 2011, 08:31:43 pm
Yup, it's super tough, and takes while doing the homework. Silver, come on, please be patient, you'll be fine without the chapter this week.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 08, 2011, 09:07:36 pm
Lol I'm in college ^_- hehe but i understand, i was in all advanced classes myself xD Let's all be patient mmkl!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 09, 2011, 06:59:18 pm
im in advenced classes, and im in 7th grade.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on February 09, 2011, 07:42:34 pm
Yes, but it's nothing compared to high school or (since Alice is there) college.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 09, 2011, 11:04:21 pm
And I've had advanced classes all my school life *shrugs* it doesn't mean that others don't have all this free time *shrugs* He has a lot to do and you need to be patient with him or he will just end up getting angry and not posting AT ALL. Instead of yelling at him, encourage him.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 11, 2011, 06:58:38 pm
im not trying to yell at him, but im am just in suspence all the time.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on February 11, 2011, 09:22:47 pm
And the rest of us are too, but you're the one that is being impatient, just wait a while, okay?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on February 12, 2011, 12:52:24 am


Chapter 1: Alpha, Scene 4

Minnions: How in the world is this kid still alive?


Sharpshoot: If I knew I would have abused this power years ago!


Sparklebird: You know what Sharpshoot...you need to get better reflexes. I really thought you died back there



Sharpshoot: Yeah, sorry about that...


Minnions: Quit flirting and fight!


-Sharpshoot evades the minnion that was charging at him- grabs him by the leg and throws him against Sparklebird who activated her spiky turquoise armor, killing the minnion-

Minnion: No--no--NO WAY!


-Sharpshoot grabs his claymore and makes quick work of the minnion by cutting it in half. He keeps slashing until one minnion is left-


Minnion: How the heck is this possible?


Sharpshoot: I am as surprised as you! -Sharpshoot kills the final minnion, cutting it's head off. Killing the minnion, with style-


Sharpshoot: I am beat...


Sparklebird: You know what...those healing powers would really help me right now...-Sparklebird begins to faint-


Sharpshoot: Don't worry, I'll get you to Tesse's. She'll take care of your wounds.


-Before Sharpshoot picks Sparklebird up, he hears more rustling in the bushes-


Sharpshoot: Do you hear that too...?


Sparklebird: -faintly- yeah...


Sharpshoot: -hears stomping- I have a bad feeling about this...-Sharpshoot quickly picks Sparklebird up and starts running- Something is coming alright, but I don't know what is it... -feels the wind getting rough- Could it be that...?


-Out of nowhere a giant ball rolls towards Sharpshoot and Sparklebird-

Sharpshoot: No way! -Sharpshoot starts running while evading the wind-


???: I AM GIGATON! THE IMPENETRABLE BOUNTY HUNTER OF LORD FUSION! I CRUSH THE BONES OF EVERY ONE OF MY VICTIMS WITH MY POWER OF A MILLION HUMAN MALES!



Sharpshoot: Did you say MILLION!




Gigaton: YOUR BONES WILL BE NO MATCH FOR MY STOMP! -Gigaton jumps about 55 feet in the air crashes down creating an earthquake that knocks Sharpshoot out of his feet and Sparklebird out of his hands-



Sharpshoot: Ouch...Oh no! Where did Sparklebird go?


Gigaton: Hahaha! NOTHING CAN STOP THE IMPENETRABLE GIGANTON! -Gigaton is then hit in the eyes by turquoise-

Sparklebird: Why do all of these minnions have to talk so much?


Giganton:I'M NO MINNION! AND MY EYES ARE IMPENETRABLE AS WELL! -Starts rolling into a ball and rolls towards Sharpshoot-


Sharpshoot: Gah! -gets hit by Gigaton and send flying towards a tree- I think he broke my ribs...which are not getting healed as fast for some reason...


Gigaton: NOW GIGATON WILL GET TO SMASH YOU INTO A BLOODY PULP



???: -throws axe at Gigaton, which cuts through his skin-



Gigaton: IMPOSSIBLE! HOW IS THE IMPENETRABLE GIGATON HARMED BY AN ORDINARY AXE-


???: Because Gigaton my old foe..it is I, HANK!


Sharpshoot: -With anime eyes- HANK!



Hank: Ash, how are your vital organs doing?


Sharpshoot: Pretty good!


Sparklebird: Is he that logger?


Sharpshoot: Yes, yes he is!


Sparklebird: But how can he harm Gigaton?


Hank: I too posses great strength! Not as great as Gigaton's but enough to give him a run for his money!


Sharpshoot: Hank is an olympian...



Sparklebird: I think I've heard of them! Aren't they the strongest men in the world? Don't they live Greece though?


Sharpshoot:I didn't know Hank was Greek!




Hank: Uhh..yeah...



GIGATON: AID ME YOU USELESS FISH!


Minnions: Yes commander...

-7 more Razalo clones join Gigaton-


Sharpshoot: Aww no...I need to get Zoey to Tesse!


Sparklebird: Zoey...that's the first time you've called me by my name in like, what, 2 years? You usually just call me you! And here I am calling you by your name everyday!


Sharpshoot: I don't know how you do it Hank...women confuse me.


Sparklebird: ugh...-faints-



Sharpshoot: Hank? Can you take care of that giant idiot?




Hank: You bet! Gigaton was never able to defeat me back in Greece.


Sharpshoot: Thanks Hank! I need to get this girl--I mean Zoey back to Tesse.



Hank: You really care about that girl don't you?



Sharpshoot: -blushes- I don't!



Hank: hahah! I see the way it is...



Sharpshoot: Now, I need to get back to Tesse's!



-Picks Sparklebird up and start running to Tesse's-



Gigaton: GO CHASE THAT KID WITH THE GIRLY GREEN OUTFIT WILL YOU?



Minnions: Yes. -in disgust- Commander...




                                                 SCENE 4 END

Chapter 1: Alpha, Scene 5

Gigaton: YOU WERE ALWAYS SCUM! OLYMPIA WAS SCUM! IT WAS ALL SCUM!


Hank: Old buddy! You have not changed a bit. Really I though over you would grow some brain power over de years. -Hank sneaks behind Gigaton and piledrives him in a Mike Haggar/Zangief fashion-


Hank: Betraying Olympia was one thing, but siding with fusion? What has gone into that oddly head? -keeps hitting Gigaton, who is no match for Hank-


Gigaton: GIGATON CAN LIFT MANY TONS! YOU CAN ONLY LIFT 5! HOW COME YOU SMACK GIGATON AROUND LIKE I COULD SMACK THE FEMININE BODIED KID AROUND?


Hank: Strength isn't everything my old friend! You need technique! I don't know how you became the strongest warrior in Olympia when all you did was ram your opponents like a wild animal? You remind of a man with claws who also fought like an animal, but at least he had technique, which is why he was able to land a couple of cuts into me. Jaguar was his name, he could beat you in seconds!



Gigaton: I MAY HAVE NEVER BEEN ABLE TO DEFEAT YOU IN PAST..UHHH...TENSE! BUT THIS TIME, GIGATON HAS TRICKS NEW...UHH...NEW TRICKS UP HIS POCKETS!


Hank: You were never too bright either, no?


Gigaton: -Gigaton becomes covered  in a green layer than turns into hard stone. His eyes also turn purple and the mark of Fusion appears on his forehead-


Hank: You look pretty now?

Gigaton: UP SHUT! -Gigaton smacks Hank of his feet, something he has never done before-


Hank: -wiping blood of his mouth- You always relied on cheap tricks too! Now that you have become Fusion's dog you think you can defeat me?


Gigaton: Now, the real fight begins!


Hank: and you also learned to not scream. I guess Fusion gave you basic toddler smarts.

~~~Elsewhere


Sharpshoot: You know, I think you might be putting on a little weight Zoey. That or I'm getting weaker...I think I need more milk.


-Razalo clones continue to shooting wind-



Sharpshoot: You know, this is really annoying. Why can't you guys just not serve Fusion?


Minnions: We love master fusion! It's troglodyte we can't stand


Sharpshoot: Hmm...I think we can both kill him together! That is, if you let me get this girl to safety first.


Minnions: Are you screwing with us? Master Fusion would kill us!


-Sharpshoot throws his claymore which cuts a minnion through the head-



Sharpshoot: If I don't kill you first!



-Sharpshoot picked up his claymore and continued to jump across the trees and do battle with the Minnions while holding Sparklebird at the same time-


Sharpshoot: Yeah...I hate weekdays.



                           
                                              SCENE 5 END




Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 12, 2011, 11:29:51 am
-stands up from seat and starts clapping- ENCORE ENCORE!!!!!! BRAVO!!!! BRAVO!!!!! AWARD WINNING PREFORMANCE!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 12, 2011, 11:49:27 am
Nice chappie, hope to see more soon. When do I come in again? lol


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on February 12, 2011, 06:32:20 pm
Yeah, that was a good chapter you did really well Ashy. (Also, I think you need more milk. :P) ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 12, 2011, 07:07:40 pm
Lolz, definitely more milk ^_- in fact, LOTS OF MILK! xD


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 12, 2011, 09:40:27 pm
-takes two gallons of milk and gives one to alice, and one to zoey- drink up.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 12, 2011, 09:48:24 pm
*blinks* why give it to us. We were talking about Ashy drinking milk.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on February 13, 2011, 12:46:04 pm
Yup, Ashy needs to become stronger. :D


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 13, 2011, 02:30:23 pm
well, we could all get stronger. milk makes strong bones-throws a quart of milk at ashy- drink up.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 13, 2011, 02:45:21 pm
I've drinking milk for years upon years xD lol I'm plenty strong already. I play volleyball :P


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 13, 2011, 07:07:05 pm
and i am learning karate. i have also been drinking milk for years


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on February 13, 2011, 08:45:39 pm
I've been drinking milk for years too. :D I'm not in any sports right now, but I think I might join my high school's soccer or tennis team when I have more money to pay for it. ^^ And aren't we getting a little too off topic?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 13, 2011, 08:50:49 pm
well, we r waiting for ashy's next chappie. we have nothing to do so we r just waiting.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on February 13, 2011, 08:58:50 pm
True, but we might end up turning this thread into an RP or something :D


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on February 13, 2011, 09:01:57 pm
You can discuss the story. Not RP into milk.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on February 13, 2011, 09:11:29 pm
We were discussing that you needed more milk since you can't carry me in the story, but somehow we all got off topic, sorry Ashy.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 13, 2011, 10:28:26 pm
Ashy, my boy, do you have a specific chappie number for when my character is introduced?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on February 13, 2011, 11:08:53 pm
I cannot answer that question. You'll just have to wait. Sorry Alice.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 14, 2011, 12:52:02 am
*sighs* Mmk *waits* Excited for the next update.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 14, 2011, 07:58:52 pm
you are just torchering alice man. its like if someone says that you will get a gaming system on some day, but they never say when. so you just waiting and waiting. idk if my story has ppl like that. nvm that. in other words, alice is being torchered by suspence.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 14, 2011, 08:08:56 pm
*tortured* by *suspence* lol. And not really, I'm just wondering. I'm trying to figure out where the story is going. I'm excited.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on February 19, 2011, 05:11:11 pm
Don't expect friday to be chappie day anymore. It's becoming hard to post on that day. Later today I might post the chappie.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 19, 2011, 06:02:40 pm
i can wait at any time


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on February 20, 2011, 07:54:42 pm
*shrugs* just looking forward to another chappie as soon as you post it, I'll be here to read.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on February 20, 2011, 08:02:33 pm
-takes out pillow and waits- im gonna take a nap. ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 06, 2011, 12:08:27 am

Chapter 1: Alpha, Scene 5

Gigaton: YOU WERE ALWAYS SCUM! OLYMPIA WAS SCUM! IT WAS ALL SCUM!


Hank: Old buddy! You have not changed a bit. Really I though over you would grow some brain power over de years. -Hank sneaks behind Gigaton and piledrives him in a Mike Haggar/Zangief fashion-


Hank: Betraying Olympia was one thing, but siding with fusion? What has gone into that oddly head? -keeps hitting Gigaton, who is no match for Hank-


Gigaton: GIGATON CAN LIFT MANY TONS! YOU CAN ONLY LIFT 5! HOW COME YOU SMACK GIGATON AROUND LIKE I COULD SMACK THE FEMININE BODIED KID AROUND?


Hank: Strength isn't everything my old friend! You need technique! I don't know how you became the strongest warrior in Olympia when all you did was ram your opponents like a wild animal? You remind of a man with claws who also fought like an animal, but at least he had technique, which is why he was able to land a couple of cuts into me. Jaguar was his name, he could beat you in seconds!



Gigaton: I MAY HAVE NEVER BEEN ABLE TO DEFEAT YOU IN PAST..UHHH...TENSE! BUT THIS TIME, GIGATON HAS TRICKS NEW...UHH...NEW TRICKS UP HIS POCKETS!


Hank: You were never too bright either, no?


Gigaton: -Gigaton becomes covered  in a green layer than turns into hard stone. His eyes also turn purple and the mark of Fusion appears on his forehead-


Hank: You look pretty now?

Gigaton: UP SHUT! -Gigaton smacks Hank of his feet, something he has never done before-


Hank: -wiping blood of his mouth- You always relied on cheap tricks too! Now that you have become Fusion's dog you think you can defeat me?


Gigaton: Now, the real fight begins!


Hank: and you also learned to not scream. I guess Fusion gave you basic toddler smarts.

~~~Elsewhere


Sharpshoot: You know, I think you might be putting on a little weight Zoey. That or I'm getting weaker...I think I need more milk.


-Razalo clones continue to shooting wind-



Sharpshoot: You know, this is really annoying. Why can't you guys just not serve Fusion?


Minnions: We love master fusion! It's troglodyte we can't stand


Sharpshoot: Hmm...I think we can both kill him together! That is, if you let me get this girl to safety first.


Minnions: Are you screwing with us? Master Fusion would kill us!


-Sharpshoot throws his claymore which cuts a minnion through the head-



Sharpshoot: If I don't kill you first!



-Sharpshoot picked up his claymore and continued to jump across the trees and do battle with the Minnions while holding Sparklebird at the same time-


Sharpshoot: Yeah...I hate weekdays.



                            
                                              SCENE 5 END





Chapter 1: Alpha, Scene 6


-Hank is still fighting Gigaton, who has received power from Fusion-

Hank: This is a tough fight without a doubt. You're actually making me worry this time!

-Gigaton punches Hank in the face and piledrives him-


Hank: The Olympia way..is to never give up!


-Hank stands up again; despite being bruised and injured-


Gigaton: You think you live to see wife and kid? NO! GIGATON KILL YOU RIGHT HERE HANK! YOU'RE GOING TO PAY FOR THOSE YEARS OF HUMILIATION!


Hank: Hey buddy, you got your punctuation right in that sentence -Hank grabs his axe and hits Gigaton with it, however, with the endurance Fusion gave him, it does not affect him-


Gigaton:  Say bye, Hank!


Hank: No, I won't be beaten by a brute now!

-Hank delivers a jawbreaking punch to Gigaton's head-

Gigaton: I AM MAD NOW!

-Gigaton grabs Hank and jumps several feet up in the air-


Gigaton: YOUR WIFE WILL SEE YOUR END HANK! YOU'RE GOING TO DIE AND THE IMPACT WILL SMASH YOU INTO THE BLOODIEST, MOST STINKIEST PULP THERE IS!

-Hank looks down-

Hank: Ugh...I can see Ash...him with that girl! They remind me of Tesse and I!


Gigaton: THOSE BE WILL YOUR WORDS LASTLY, HANK! YOU DIE NOW!

Hank: Time to pull a little trick...something I always use to defeat you...


-As Gigaton nears the bottom, Hank uses all of his strength to break free and get into piledriver position-

Gigaton: I can't break free!


Hank: See here, gravity is your biggest foe! So long, buddy!


-Hank and Gigaton reach the bottom, and Hank defeats Gigaton with a devastating piledriver, leaving a small crater on the ground-

Hank: It's a good thing Fusion was with you here...as if not, it would have killed you.


-Hank then falls back because he too got hurt from the fall-


Hank: I did it all for you, Tesse. -Hank then remains on his back, with his defeated foe lying on the crater next to him-

~~~~~~Elsewhere

Sharpshoot: I can't multi-task like this! But I can't let Zoey get hit either


Minnions: You will not escape! If we can't have you, then we'll just kill the girl!


Sharpshoot: The day I let Zoey get hurt again, will be the day I stop caring for my own life!

-Sharpshoot then throws his claymore in anger at the Minnions, like an expert marksman-


Sharpshoot: Whoah...I think I need to calm down a bit...


-Sharpshoot's claymore returns to him like a boomerang-

-The  remaining 2 minnions decide to retreat-


Minnions: Lord Fusion will hear about this, he will!

-The minnions disappear into thin air-



It's all over...we can rest now, Zoey!


Sparklebird: That's my name...


-Later that night, Tesse and Hank cared for Sparklebird's wounds and Hank decided to take a small break from lodging due to his fight with Gigaton-

Tesse: Sounds like you had an adventure today, but there's something I have to tell you Ash.


Sharpshoot: What is it?


Tesse: You're not exactly a human being...as you can see from your healing factor. You're...a survivor.


Sharpshoot: What do you mean by survivor?!

Tesse: You're...

~~~~~~~~Back at Fusion's Ship


Fusion: Alshary Sharpshoot? His name does ring a bell. Sharpshoot. If he was anything like his race, I can see how he would be a problem, but if he ever gets in my way again, I know his major weakness. I know what the thing he loves the most is....I will not be afraid to use that against him. Rest for now, Sharpshoot. You'll need the rest...



                    CHAPTER 1: ALPHA
                                          END






Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on March 06, 2011, 08:51:51 am
WOOT! Can't wait to see more ^_^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 06, 2011, 12:48:06 pm
A totally....awesome....end.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 06, 2011, 12:56:42 pm
Please fill this out!

1. What did you like about Alpha?
2. What did you dislike about Alpha? Did you feel anything was weak?
3. Do you like the layout used in the story?
4. Who was your favorite character in Alpha?
5. Any suggestions for Fusion Mayhem?
6. What would you rate Alpha from a scale of 1 to 10?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 06, 2011, 01:09:20 pm
Sure.

1: The action.
2: The suspence. No.
3: Totally
4: Alshary Sharpshoot
5: Add more characters.
6: 10


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on March 06, 2011, 01:26:19 pm
1. What did you like about Alpha?

It's a wonderful introduction to your story, you have a few rough patches with wording sometimes but all in all, it is well-presented and leaves you at a good spot before going into the next part of your tale.

2. What did you dislike about Alpha? Did you feel anything was weak?

I wouldn't say weak though I felt you rushed a couple of chapters in the middle. It was probably due to trying to please your readers but don't feel you have to rush your story.

3. Do you like the layout used in the story?

The layout is scriptform which I do appreciate, I hope you will keep the form consistent throughout the story.

4. Who was your favorite character in Alpha?

I would have to say none of them are my favorite currently, I don't have enough information to say who is my favorite or not. I do wonder what Ashy is though.

5. Any suggestions for Fusion Mayhem?

Take your time when writing, maybe have someone beta your work before you post it just to make sure it reads well.

6. What would you rate Alpha from a scale of 1 to 10?

I'd give it a 7/10. It's a good read so far and I see great potential for this piece.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 06, 2011, 01:27:50 pm
Totally awesome story bro. Can't wait for more.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 06, 2011, 01:29:38 pm
Yeah, the last weeks have been rough. Basketball didn't help either lol But I'll take my time more next time, and give you longer scenes.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 06, 2011, 01:45:16 pm
Nice. More action.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on March 06, 2011, 01:48:13 pm
You should definitely look into a beta reader though :P I have a lot myself that help me along :3


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 06, 2011, 01:55:33 pm
I don't know what that is but try it Ash. It could help.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on March 06, 2011, 01:57:45 pm
Maybe you should pay attention lol. A beta reader is someone you send your writing to before you post it. I've talked about it plenty of times in my fics. A beta reads your story and gives you constructive feedback that will help improve. Then after you go through the beta process, you can post your story up for the readers.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 06, 2011, 05:28:10 pm
I don't like to pay attention. I have the attention spand of a 12 year old.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on March 06, 2011, 05:43:43 pm
I agree with all of Alice's answers Ash, except for favorite character, I like how they're turning out so far, so I can't choose a favorite yet. You're doing a great job, and I think you should just follow Alice's advice.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 06, 2011, 08:06:15 pm
Zoey, your favorite character should be you.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on March 07, 2011, 08:06:31 am
Just because its her, it should automatically be her favorite character? Lol that isn't how that works out.

I am interested to see how you portray my character though. Very interested indeed.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 07, 2011, 06:59:56 pm
Eh, it i was in it, i would say...

4: Who was your favorite character in Alpha?
Oohhh. That's tough. I got it! My fovorite character is MEEEEE!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on March 07, 2011, 08:27:50 pm
Lol, I like the characters so far, it's hard to choose right now.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 09, 2011, 04:35:23 pm
Eh. That's just me. It's Silver Style.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 11, 2011, 08:43:03 pm
The next chapter will feature the debuts of...

Riska
Bounty Hunter
Bad
Top killer in the Milky Way Galaxy, working for Fusion. Not cloned (Like Gigaton)
Super speed. Expert in martial arts and assassin techniques. Armed with a knife and and sword. Does not use guns.

And more...

Also, power grids for characters. They follow the Marvel Power Grids: http://marvel.wikia.com/Power_Grid


Alshary Sharpshoot
Intelligence: 3
Sharpshoot received education from his guardian Abasi.
Strength: 2
Sharpshoot can enhance his strength by the use of his abilities, but without them, he is just as strong as any other fit 14 year-old.
Speed: 3
Sharpshoot has trained his speed since he was young. His Sharpshoot heritage allows him to run faster than a regular human being.
Durability: 6
Sharpshoot's healing factor can heal missing limbs and allows him to heal himself of injuries that would kill a regular human being. Sharpshoot can also survive extreme conditions and weather.
Energy Projection: 5
Yet to be explained
Fighting Ability: 4
Sharpshoot has trained ever since he was a little boy.

Zoey Sparklebird:
Intelligence: 3
As a military soldier, Sparklebird was taught basic education.
Strength: 3
Her turquoise has fused with her bones and muscles, granting her peak human strength.
Speed: 2
Normal 15-year old girl speed
Durability: 3
Her turquoise allows her to heal from bruises and broken bones in just days
Energy Projection: 5
Sparklebird can manipulate nearby turquoise and even generate it from her body.
Fighting Ability: 6
Sparklebird was trained in the military by the top teachers in the world.

Hank:
Intelligence: 3
Hank went to school
Strength: 5
Hank's olympian heritage gives him a massive amount of strength.
Speed: 2
Durability: 3
Energy Projection: 1
Fighting Ability: 5
Hank was trained to be an olympian warrior.

Gigaton:
Intelligence: 1
Gigaton all brawn no brain
Strength: 6
Gigaton strongest olympian there is
Speed: 2
Gigaton move normal due to muscles be big
Durability: 3
Energy Projection: 1

and to kill some suspense...

Natchios "Soapy" Terrorangel
Intelligence: 4
Strength: 2
Speed: 2
Durability: 3
Energy Projection: 3
Fighting Ability: 5






Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 12, 2011, 07:08:57 am
Wait, is Soapy's first name like Electra's last name? Electra Natchios? And Riska must be Alice.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 12, 2011, 11:56:15 am
Riska is her own person Yo


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 12, 2011, 03:50:08 pm
Then when is Alice stepping in?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 12, 2011, 03:52:37 pm
Ah Uh Know


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 12, 2011, 03:54:45 pm
What do you mean you don't know, you wrote the story!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 12, 2011, 03:57:12 pm
I did didn't I?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 12, 2011, 04:20:28 pm
Stop avoiding my questions


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 12, 2011, 04:26:05 pm
I'm not going to spoil the story for you Silver.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 12, 2011, 04:44:53 pm
Awww c'mon.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on March 12, 2011, 10:41:36 pm
Wow, my character seems like she'll do well in this story. -hits Silver on his head- If he spoils it for you, then he'll spoil it for everyone.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 13, 2011, 03:40:08 pm
OW!!!! Why did you have to hit me?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 13, 2011, 03:52:58 pm
The Next Chapter of Fusion Mayhem titled: New Propaganda! Will premiere next week with the debuts of Natchios "Soapy" Terrorangel, the Big City,  and even more of Fusion's wacky minnions (Yes, I've been misspelling minion on purpose)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 13, 2011, 03:56:46 pm
Is Soapy the only new character debuting?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 13, 2011, 04:04:28 pm
"and even more of Fusion's wacky minnions"


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 13, 2011, 04:29:51 pm
I mean is he the only good guy?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 13, 2011, 04:42:40 pm
Zoey and I are in it too


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 13, 2011, 04:45:40 pm
I meant the only new good guy. You know what, i can see that you don't want to tell me. Fine. Whatever.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 13, 2011, 05:40:34 pm
Absolute Victory
On a Quest
Right every single wrooo0oo0oong


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on March 13, 2011, 06:25:43 pm
:P Silver, the rest of us are waiting to see who else will appear, just hold on for a little while more.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on March 13, 2011, 07:35:18 pm
Lolz I'm not in any hurry to know, I'm just excited to see what's next.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 13, 2011, 09:14:07 pm
I don't have a good attention spand, so i can't wait!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on April 02, 2011, 11:44:11 pm
I've been working hard at school lately, and I think I will finally be able to post the debut scene of Fusion Mayhem chapter  next saturday. Please wait a little bit longer.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on April 02, 2011, 11:56:05 pm
Sweet~ Looking forward to it~!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on April 03, 2011, 10:27:27 am
That's cool. Just try to post soon.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on April 03, 2011, 04:57:49 pm
Can't wait to read it next week! ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on June 16, 2011, 01:56:49 pm
Since I just got rid of the ball and chain people call "school", I have enough time to RP and post chapters!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on June 16, 2011, 04:32:31 pm
Awesome! Can't wait to see what you really are. I have a feeling you are a alien.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on June 16, 2011, 07:10:02 pm
Since I just got rid of the ball and chain people call "school", I have enough time to RP and post chapters!

That's great to hear Ash! I can't wait to see your next chapter. ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on July 12, 2011, 10:21:41 pm
This weekend, New Proganda starts! After much work and June procrastination, I will finally post again. Scene will also be longer to make up for such.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on July 13, 2011, 06:40:22 am
Coolio. Can't wait


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on July 13, 2011, 07:21:43 pm
Wow, I can't wait! Hooray!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on July 13, 2011, 08:44:34 pm
That's good to hear Ash, can't wait!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on July 17, 2011, 12:34:17 am
OH YEAH SON, GET READY!

              Fusion Mayhem
                        Chapter 2
                                   New Propaganda!
                                                   Scene 1
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

-Alarm clock rings at 6 in the morning-

Sharpshoot: *yawn* Time for some shirtless morning training! But first...

-Ash ran to a different room in his house, where Sparklebird was recovering-

Sharpshoot: Snoozing like a baby! Recover soon, ok girl?

-After eating his breakfast cooked to him by Tesse, Sharpshoot started thinking as he was doing his fanservice shirtless training-

Sharpshoot: If I'm not exactly who I thought I was, does that not make me a human being? That can't be. I mean, I look like one, I talk like one, and I certainly smell like one in the morning...-

Sharpshoot: HIIIIYAAAAH! -Sharpshoot smashed a wooden plank with his fist- Alright! -Ash kept thinking to himself. He knew something about human leaders, dictators, activists, races, nations. He even knew something about religions-


Sharpshoot: I mean c'mon! But if what Tesse said is true, then I should be able to do some pretty amazing things. If I really am all that special, then what am I still doing here? Hank can survive out here by himself with Tesse, but why am I still here? Am I waiting for Abasi to come back? I don't even know if she's alive! I want to leave and help the people around deal with Fusion's attacks and minnions. A lot people die each day because of that sadistic and presumably-ugly jerk! I need to leave as soon as I can! I need to explore what I am capable of. If I really am the last of my kind, then I better use my potential to it's fullest, but not here.


-Sharpshoot focused his emotions into one punch, and slammed his fist into the ground, creating a small energy sphere surrounding him, which destroyed half the soil he was standing on-


Sharpshoot: Wow. That was pretty flamboyant. I wonder if I can do it again...

-Sharpshoot focused, and after about a minute, his fist started glowing a light green color-

Erm...am  supposed to be worried about this? -Sharpshoot moved his fist around the air like a wand, noticing that the energy followed his every move- I wonder if I can do, THIS! -Sharpshoot swung his hand fast and very hard, creating a small energy ball that crashed into a tree, leaving a hole in it-

Sharpshoot: Alright! -Sharpshoot cheered and swung his fist straight up into the air, which fired a beam, and drained all of Sharpshoot's energy-

Sharpshoot: I need to need to control this... -Ash collapsed on the grass, extremely tired- I'm the most tired I've been in my entire life, and from firing a beam, which wasn't even that big! Heck, it looked incredibly anorexic!

-Subconsciously, Sharpshoot started napping, and eventually fell into a deep sleep-

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hank: How did you think the boy took the news?

Tesse: I think he was a little ecstatic, and a little shocked. I don't think we need to worry much. He's a smart kid, he'll deal with this on his own.

Hank: Yes, he is a very smart kid. I am sure he'll have no trouble with this sudden news.

Tesse: But at the same time, he's very naive, and he's a bit of a smart-mouth. Even garrulous at times.


Hank: Well, he might have a harder time in making new friends but he has the qualities of a warrior!

Tesse: Do you think, he could be able to stop Fusion?

Hank: That boy is something. One day he will have the courage and the power to put an end to that madman. He's going to mature into something special.


Tesse: Gee, you really think so Hank?

Hank: Yes yes. The boy will be a champ!

-Suddenly a mysterious stranger breaks into through the window-

Hank: Hey boddy, what is  the big idea?

???: I'm just gonna need the girl. You know, the shiny one.

Tesse: She's not here!

Hank: I'll tell you what, if you can take a punch, I'll tell you all the information you need, sound good comrade?

???: Wait, what are you...-The mysterious stranger is then punched out the window he came through-

???: That reminds of m'lady @_@

Hank: Huh? I guess you're not weak after all. The girl is at the next door neighbor house.

???: But there's no  house next to yours in any direction?

Hank: It is a town bonus. No noisy neighbors for a couple of blocks. A block to us is what you kids call a "mile".

???: Well, that was eye-opening- -The mysterious stranger flew off in his rocket boots-

Hank: A pair of those things would not support an olympian like me.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~In the skies


???: Where could Sparklebird be? Well, I see a house and a shirtless little kid laying on the grass. Should be easy enough to get information from him.

-The mysterious stranger flies down, and grabs Sharpshoot, taking him to the skies-

???: Black hair...effeminate green outfit. He must be that Sharpshoot kid Sparklebird's crazy about.

Sharpshoot:zZzZzZzZzZzZz...

???: Hyegh...morning breath...


Sharpshoot: ...huh? Where am I?

???: Hey kid, I need some answers

Sharpshoot: Whaa?

???: I see, he's still half asleep. Hey kid, you're about 70 feet up in the air, and if you don't wanna be dropped to your death, you better tell me where Sparklebird is.


Sharpshoot: Whaa?

???: I'm not joking.

Sharpshoot: Whaa?

???:... -The mysterious stranger let go of Sharpshoot, and let him fall to which he thought, was his demise-




   Scene 1 End.





Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on July 17, 2011, 08:56:19 am
Again with the near death thing. It adds suspence, but this is like 2 times in a row. And i assume that that person who dropped you is Soapy.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on July 17, 2011, 12:45:45 pm
If only you read more closely Silver

NOTE: The spelling mistakes on Hank are there to contribute to his accent. And when Ash is tired he tends to repeat himself. Like he said " I need to " twice


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on July 17, 2011, 07:07:38 pm
Nice chapter Ash! Are you going to post another one next week?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on July 17, 2011, 07:46:14 pm
I don't know.But I'm trying to


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on July 17, 2011, 08:10:06 pm
Okay, and don't rush yourself to finish it, we can wait. :)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on July 17, 2011, 08:16:29 pm
Ok then.  :)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on July 18, 2011, 09:26:27 pm
I thought you woulden't tell me. But who could it be if not Soapy? Hm? Your not gonna tell me, but i just wanted to get that specified.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on August 04, 2011, 10:35:37 am
Silver, asking me, the creator, questions about future events in the story is like asking for spoilers, and it's obvious the creator himself wont give em to you.



Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on August 04, 2011, 04:09:01 pm
I was aware of that. Just puting it out there. Where's the new chappie? You still buisy?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on August 15, 2011, 01:50:19 pm
Posting of chapters will stop due to having no computer to post chapters with. Until my computer is fixed, there will not be anymore chapters posted because there is no way I'm posting them from my phone. Too much of a hassle.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on August 15, 2011, 01:58:16 pm
AGHAGHAHGAHABLECH!!!! Well. I have had computer probles before. How long do you think it's gonna take?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on August 16, 2011, 12:40:44 am
Since my computer is being a little...

Might be awhile. I don't know at this point


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on August 16, 2011, 06:34:30 am
Ok then.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on August 17, 2011, 10:28:51 pm
:( Oh well, your chapters will be worth the wait Ash  :)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on October 28, 2011, 11:37:58 pm
OH YEAH SON, GET READY!

              Fusion Mayhem
                        Chapter 2
                                   New Propaganda!
                                                   Scene 1
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

-Alarm clock rings at 6 in the morning-

Sharpshoot: *yawn* Time for some shirtless morning training! But first...

-Ash ran to a different room in his house, where Sparklebird was recovering-

Sharpshoot: Snoozing like a baby! Recover soon, ok girl?

-After eating his breakfast cooked to him by Tesse, Sharpshoot started thinking as he was doing his fanservice shirtless training-

Sharpshoot: If I'm not exactly who I thought I was, does that not make me a human being? That can't be. I mean, I look like one, I talk like one, and I certainly smell like one in the morning...-

Sharpshoot: HIIIIYAAAAH! -Sharpshoot smashed a wooden plank with his fist- Alright! -Ash kept thinking to himself. He knew something about human leaders, dictators, activists, races, nations. He even knew something about religions-


Sharpshoot: I mean c'mon! But if what Tesse said is true, then I should be able to do some pretty amazing things. If I really am all that special, then what am I still doing here? Hank can survive out here by himself with Tesse, but why am I still here? Am I waiting for Abasi to come back? I don't even know if she's alive! I want to leave and help the people around deal with Fusion's attacks and minnions. A lot people die each day because of that sadistic and presumably-ugly jerk! I need to leave as soon as I can! I need to explore what I am capable of. If I really am the last of my kind, then I better use my potential to it's fullest, but not here.


-Sharpshoot focused his emotions into one punch, and slammed his fist into the ground, creating a small energy sphere surrounding him, which destroyed half the soil he was standing on-


Sharpshoot: Wow. That was pretty flamboyant. I wonder if I can do it again...

-Sharpshoot focused, and after about a minute, his fist started glowing a light green color-

Erm...am  supposed to be worried about this? -Sharpshoot moved his fist around the air like a wand, noticing that the energy followed his every move- I wonder if I can do, THIS! -Sharpshoot swung his hand fast and very hard, creating a small energy ball that crashed into a tree, leaving a hole in it-

Sharpshoot: Alright! -Sharpshoot cheered and swung his fist straight up into the air, which fired a beam, and drained all of Sharpshoot's energy-

Sharpshoot: I need to need to control this... -Ash collapsed on the grass, extremely tired- I'm the most tired I've been in my entire life, and from firing a beam, which wasn't even that big! Heck, it looked incredibly anorexic!

-Subconsciously, Sharpshoot started napping, and eventually fell into a deep sleep-

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hank: How did you think the boy took the news?

Tesse: I think he was a little ecstatic, and a little shocked. I don't think we need to worry much. He's a smart kid, he'll deal with this on his own.

Hank: Yes, he is a very smart kid. I am sure he'll have no trouble with this sudden news.

Tesse: But at the same time, he's very naive, and he's a bit of a smart-mouth. Even garrulous at times.


Hank: Well, he might have a harder time in making new friends but he has the qualities of a warrior!

Tesse: Do you think, he could be able to stop Fusion?

Hank: That boy is something. One day he will have the courage and the power to put an end to that madman. He's going to mature into something special.


Tesse: Gee, you really think so Hank?

Hank: Yes yes. The boy will be a champ!

-Suddenly a mysterious stranger breaks into through the window-

Hank: Hey boddy, what is  the big idea?

???: I'm just gonna need the girl. You know, the shiny one.

Tesse: She's not here!

Hank: I'll tell you what, if you can take a punch, I'll tell you all the information you need, sound good comrade?

???: Wait, what are you...-The mysterious stranger is then punched out the window he came through-

???: That reminds of m'lady @_@

Hank: Huh? I guess you're not weak after all. The girl is at the next door neighbor house.

???: But there's no  house next to yours in any direction?

Hank: It is a town bonus. No noisy neighbors for a couple of blocks. A block to us is what you kids call a "mile".

???: Well, that was eye-opening- -The mysterious stranger flew off in his rocket boots-

Hank: A pair of those things would not support an olympian like me.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~In the skies


???: Where could Sparklebird be? Well, I see a house and a shirtless little kid laying on the grass. Should be easy enough to get information from him.

-The mysterious stranger flies down, and grabs Sharpshoot, taking him to the skies-

???: Black hair...effeminate green outfit. He must be that Sharpshoot kid Sparklebird's crazy about.

Sharpshoot:zZzZzZzZzZzZz...

???: Hyegh...morning breath...


Sharpshoot: ...huh? Where am I?

???: Hey kid, I need some answers

Sharpshoot: Whaa?

???: I see, he's still half asleep. Hey kid, you're about 70 feet up in the air, and if you don't wanna be dropped to your death, you better tell me where Sparklebird is.


Sharpshoot: Whaa?

???: I'm not joking.

Sharpshoot: Whaa?

???:... -The mysterious stranger let go of Sharpshoot, and let him fall to which he thought, was his demise-




   Scene 1 End.





  Fusion Mayhem
            Chapter 2
                     New Propaganda!
                                     Scene 2


-The mysterious stranger flew back down to catch Sharpshoot-

???: Seriously, I will have to hurt you if you don't tell me what I need to know.

-Sharpshoot gained consciousness and realized he was in the air being a held by what he presumed was a creepy adult-

Sharpshoot: OH MY GOD! STAY AWAY FROM ME! I AM NOT GOING TO BE SOLD ON THE BLACK MARKET!

???: Black market? The hell? What is the matter with you kid? I am just here for some answers.

Sharpshoot: Really? What kind of answers, because if they're about my body then I-

???: They're are certainly not about that...

Sharpshoot: Oh. Say Mr. Not a Creeper Who Abducts Children...

???: I'm 17 years old

Sharpshoot: Do you fight?

???: Yes, and trust me, I will have to fight you unless you tell me where you hid Sparklebird.

Sharpshoot: See, here's the problem. You're asking me to give you the whereabouts of a 15 year old girl while you're holding a shirtless 14 year old boy.

???: Again, I am 17 years of age, and your feminine anorexic body does not interest me in any way.

Sharpshoot: Really? Anorexic AND feminine? -Sharpshoot punched the stranger in the face, causing himself to be dropped, and landed on the ground in a splatter-

???: Ouch, he hit my nose! -Looks down- Looks like I won't be getting my answers now since he's now a bloody pulp on the ground... -Suddenly, the stranger witnessed Sharpshoot's limbs, guts, bones, and blood reform back into Sharpshoot-

???: That was not for faint of heart to see...I think I'm going hurl, and possibly skip anymore meals tonight...

Sharpshoot: And that is how you escape stranger danger. I better go back inside and don my claymore and outfit!

-Sharpshoot went inside of his home, changed, and came back out-

Sharpshoot: I'm not going to let you take Zoey!

???: Wait, before you try and fight, I'm just letting you know that I'm one of her friends. My name is Soapy.

Sharpshoot: Oh! You're the womanizer, right?

Soapy: Eh, yeah, I guess...but why is Zoey hurt?

Sharpshoot: Fusion's minnions attacked the woods, Zoey helped me take care of them and we narrowly escaped with our lives.

Soapy: Really? I knew she had it in her.

Sharpshoot: But sorry. Zoey is staying here until she feels better.

Soapy: That's not up to you to decide.

Sharpshoot: And it's not up to you either!

-Soapy turned his boots into combat mode, and turned on his defensive armor, and flew down to attack Sharpshoot-


Sharpshoot: Cool boots, what can they do?

Soapy: This. -Soapy kicked Ash, and the impact was supported by energy sound waves that add strength to the kicks, sending Ash flying into a tree- And so much more.

-Soapy continued to kick the air, releasing sound waves that kept going in Sharpshoot's direction-

Sharpshoot: Oh boy! -Sharpshoot dodges every wave Soapy kept kicking at him with his agility and speed-

Soapy: I gotta say, that's pretty impressive. -Soapy kicked the ground, hard, creating an invisible ground wave that knocked Sharpshoot off of his feet-

Sharpshoot: Whoah!

-Soapy then rammed Sharpshoot with his flight and decided to crash him down-

Sharpshoot: Energy shield!

-The impact was taken by the shield, allowing Sharpshoot to blitz a staggered Soapy into the wall of the house, without breaking it of course-

Soapy: You got some pretty good moves. -Soapy then jumps and lands on Sharpshoot's shoulder, lightly, but enough to stagger him-

Sharpshoot: Gah!

-Soapy then pushed Sharpshoot with his feet and sent him crashing against a tree, while Soapy landed on the ground with a proficient backflip-

Sharpshoot: -Gets up and feels disoriented and tipsy- Ok, that was pretty good too. Claymore! To me! -Ash calls his claymore- I didn't want to have to use this on you, but I guess I'll have to! -Ash blitzed Soapy with his superior speed slashed at his boots, damaging them-

Soapy: No! I forgot to activate the shielding for my boots!

-Soapy then threw his boots at Sharpshoot, which exploded and took him out-

Soapy: Luckily I always travel with a spare.

-Sharpshoot then landed on the floor with burns and a damaged costume. His claymore spun and impaled itself into the ground a couple of feet from Sharpshoot-

Sharpshoot: agh...

Soapy: I hope you knew that you couldn't win. Ah, and what better way to take out than with your own weapon!

-Suddenly, Sparklebird walked out of the house-

Sparklebird: What's all the commotion out here for?

-Sparklebird saw Shapshoot beaten on the ground with his costume bruised and battered, while Soapy tried to pick up his claymore in order to finish him-

Soapy: Why can't I pick this up!

Sparklebird: Soapy! What are you-!

Soapy: Kid, you're ok after all!

Sparklebird: Yeah, thanks to Ashy!

Soapy: Oh...well, he's over there. I had to knock some sense into him. He trying to impede me from taking you home with me and the misses, and he put up a good fight too. He even destroyed a pair of my boots, but that was ultimately was caused his defeat...Kiddo?

-Zoey had already left to tend to Sharpshoot-

Sparklebird: Really? Did you have to burn his costume?

Soapy: Well, no, but the explosion did it, not me.

Sparklebird: And another thing, stop referring to you know who as your misses, as we both know that you're not together in any way.

Shapshoot: -Wakes up- Hey! Stranger! You and me, round 2...Huh? Zoey! You're all better.

Sparklebird: Yeah. Thanks for keeping an eye on me.

Sharpshoot: -While blushing- Oh, it, it, it was nothing...

Soapy: Well, it's time we head back.

Sparklebird: I can't head back yet. I have to pay my gratitude to Ash.

Soapy: It is not up to you.

Sharpshoot: Two against one, eh...what was his name again?

Sparklebird: His name is Natchios, but he goes by Soapy 'cause all the girls he dates sorta slip away. Kinda like he's soapy.

Sharpshoot: Oh, so yeah, Nachos. Two against one!

Soapy: Fine then, I won't take you back by force. But I'm not heading back until you are ready to.

-Sparklebird nodded, and Ash showed Soapy inside of his home-

                                        Scene 2 End


Yeah, my laptop is better now. But school and extra-curricular activities are taking up a lot of my time my time. Sorry I haven't been one for over 20 days, but I hope this makes up for it.







Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on October 29, 2011, 04:36:42 pm
I KNEW IT!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on July 24, 2012, 03:48:45 pm
Ok, here's the deal.

I haven't posted in a while because I sort of left what I had on a different country (Smooth huh?) but that didn't stop me from writing some new stuff when I moved. So as soon as I get my internet back up, i will resume the writing.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on July 24, 2012, 09:39:52 pm
Cool


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on August 31, 2012, 11:28:00 pm

  Fusion Mayhem
            Chapter 2
                     New Propaganda!
                                     Scene 2


-The mysterious stranger flew back down to catch Sharpshoot-

???: Seriously, I will have to hurt you if you don't tell me what I need to know.

-Sharpshoot gained consciousness and realized he was in the air being a held by what he presumed was a creepy adult-

Sharpshoot: OH MY GOD! STAY AWAY FROM ME! I AM NOT GOING TO BE SOLD ON THE BLACK MARKET!

???: Black market? The hell? What is the matter with you kid? I am just here for some answers.

Sharpshoot: Really? What kind of answers, because if they're about my body then I-

???: They're are certainly not about that...

Sharpshoot: Oh. Say Mr. Not a Creeper Who Abducts Children...

???: I'm 17 years old

Sharpshoot: Do you fight?

???: Yes, and trust me, I will have to fight you unless you tell me where you hid Sparklebird.

Sharpshoot: See, here's the problem. You're asking me to give you the whereabouts of a 15 year old girl while you're holding a shirtless 14 year old boy.

???: Again, I am 17 years of age, and your feminine anorexic body does not interest me in any way.

Sharpshoot: Really? Anorexic AND feminine? -Sharpshoot punched the stranger in the face, causing himself to be dropped, and landed on the ground in a splatter-

???: Ouch, he hit my nose! -Looks down- Looks like I won't be getting my answers now since he's now a bloody pulp on the ground... -Suddenly, the stranger witnessed Sharpshoot's limbs, guts, bones, and blood reform back into Sharpshoot-

???: That was not for faint of heart to see...I think I'm going hurl, and possibly skip anymore meals tonight...

Sharpshoot: And that is how you escape stranger danger. I better go back inside and don my claymore and outfit!

-Sharpshoot went inside of his home, changed, and came back out-

Sharpshoot: I'm not going to let you take Zoey!

???: Wait, before you try and fight, I'm just letting you know that I'm one of her friends. My name is Soapy.

Sharpshoot: Oh! You're the womanizer, right?

Soapy: Eh, yeah, I guess...but why is Zoey hurt?

Sharpshoot: Fusion's minnions attacked the woods, Zoey helped me take care of them and we narrowly escaped with our lives.

Soapy: Really? I knew she had it in her.

Sharpshoot: But sorry. Zoey is staying here until she feels better.

Soapy: That's not up to you to decide.

Sharpshoot: And it's not up to you either!

-Soapy turned his boots into combat mode, and turned on his defensive armor, and flew down to attack Sharpshoot-


Sharpshoot: Cool boots, what can they do?

Soapy: This. -Soapy kicked Ash, and the impact was supported by energy sound waves that add strength to the kicks, sending Ash flying into a tree- And so much more.

-Soapy continued to kick the air, releasing sound waves that kept going in Sharpshoot's direction-

Sharpshoot: Oh boy! -Sharpshoot dodges every wave Soapy kept kicking at him with his agility and speed-

Soapy: I gotta say, that's pretty impressive. -Soapy kicked the ground, hard, creating an invisible ground wave that knocked Sharpshoot off of his feet-

Sharpshoot: Whoah!

-Soapy then rammed Sharpshoot with his flight and decided to crash him down-

Sharpshoot: Energy shield!

-The impact was taken by the shield, allowing Sharpshoot to blitz a staggered Soapy into the wall of the house, without breaking it of course-

Soapy: You got some pretty good moves. -Soapy then jumps and lands on Sharpshoot's shoulder, lightly, but enough to stagger him-

Sharpshoot: Gah!

-Soapy then pushed Sharpshoot with his feet and sent him crashing against a tree, while Soapy landed on the ground with a proficient backflip-

Sharpshoot: -Gets up and feels disoriented and tipsy- Ok, that was pretty good too. Claymore! To me! -Ash calls his claymore- I didn't want to have to use this on you, but I guess I'll have to! -Ash blitzed Soapy with his superior speed slashed at his boots, damaging them-

Soapy: No! I forgot to activate the shielding for my boots!

-Soapy then threw his boots at Sharpshoot, which exploded and took him out-

Soapy: Luckily I always travel with a spare.

-Sharpshoot then landed on the floor with burns and a damaged costume. His claymore spun and impaled itself into the ground a couple of feet from Sharpshoot-

Sharpshoot: agh...

Soapy: I hope you knew that you couldn't win. Ah, and what better way to take out than with your own weapon!

-Suddenly, Sparklebird walked out of the house-

Sparklebird: What's all the commotion out here for?

-Sparklebird saw Shapshoot beaten on the ground with his costume bruised and battered, while Soapy tried to pick up his claymore in order to finish him-

Soapy: Why can't I pick this up!

Sparklebird: Soapy! What are you-!

Soapy: Kid, you're ok after all!

Sparklebird: Yeah, thanks to Ashy!

Soapy: Oh...well, he's over there. I had to knock some sense into him. He trying to impede me from taking you home with me and the misses, and he put up a good fight too. He even destroyed a pair of my boots, but that was ultimately was caused his defeat...Kiddo?

-Zoey had already left to tend to Sharpshoot-

Sparklebird: Really? Did you have to burn his costume?

Soapy: Well, no, but the explosion did it, not me.

Sparklebird: And another thing, stop referring to you know who as your misses, as we both know that you're not together in any way.

Shapshoot: -Wakes up- Hey! Stranger! You and me, round 2...Huh? Zoey! You're all better.

Sparklebird: Yeah. Thanks for keeping an eye on me.

Sharpshoot: -While blushing- Oh, it, it, it was nothing...

Soapy: Well, it's time we head back.

Sparklebird: I can't head back yet. I have to pay my gratitude to Ash.

Soapy: It is not up to you.

Sharpshoot: Two against one, eh...what was his name again?

Sparklebird: His name is Natchios, but he goes by Soapy 'cause all the girls he dates sorta slip away. Kinda like he's soapy.

Sharpshoot: Oh, so yeah, Nachos. Two against one!

Soapy: Fine then, I won't take you back by force. But I'm not heading back until you are ready to.

-Sparklebird nodded, and Ash showed Soapy inside of his home-

                                        Scene 2 End


Yeah, my laptop is better now. But school and extra-curricular activities are taking up a lot of my time my time. Sorry I haven't been one for over 20 days, but I hope this makes up for it.







 Fusion Mayhem
           Chapter 2
                       New Propaganda
                                        Scene 3

-Sharpshoot had to deal with Soapy's constant presence in the house-

Soapy: And for the record, I came up with these boots myself.

Sharpshoot: WHY OH WHY DO YOU THINK I CARE!

Soapy: Just trying to make small talk kid.

Sharpshoot: You're not very good at it.

Soapy: Meh. I can only talk to the ladies, not males who look like them.

Sharpshoot: My rage is building.

Soapy: Yeah that's nice.

-Sparklebird came out of her room, feeling better since last night, which was the same night of the day of Sharpshoot's and Soapy's little scuffle.-

Sharpshoot: Zoey! How are you feeling today?

Sparklebird: Pretty good now. I think I'm ready to get back.

Sharpshoot: We can't. Look outside.

-It was raining lightly outside, but the rain made trees burn. This wasn't ordinary rain, this was acid rain-


Sharpshoot: I don't know what that's doing there. This has never happened before!

Sparklebird: Wow...I guess I can stay here for another day...

Sharpshoot: I thought you liked it here though.

Sparklebird: Yes, but I only have one change of armor and there's no way I can wash it out there.

Sharpshoot: You can wear one of my big shirts if you want.

Sparklebird: I'd need more than a shirt. But hey, don't worry. I don't mind wearing dirty armor for a day.

Sharpshoot: Whatever floats your boat I guess.

Soapy: Hey, I have a question for you kid.

Sharpshoot: What is it?

Soapy: Why isn't the rain tearing through the house?

Sharpshoot: Huh...that never occurred to me before. I don't even what kind of rain this is.

Soapy: Hmm..maybe I could. If could just get a sample of it. Say kid...you can heal right?

Sharpshoot: Yeah, why?

-and in a single blur, Sharpshoot was swiftly kicked out of his own home into the pouring rain outside-


Sharpshoot: OWOWOWOWOW IT BURNS! I'M GONNA GET YOU FOR THIS, NACHOS!

Soapy: It's Nat-chios.

Sharpshoot: Whatever!

Soapy: Here, catch. -Sharpshoot caught a petri dish in his hand-

Soapy: Fill that about .25%

Sparklebird: Why did you kick him instead of asking for him to go outside?

Soapy: Because he destroyed two of my babies.

Sparklebird:...your boots?

Soapy: Yeah, When you spend so much time developing a dangerous weapon, you can't help but to adopt it.

Sharpshoot: That's the stupidest thing I have ever heard.

Soapy: Quiet and fill the dish.

-Sharpshoot reluctantly filled the dish-

Sharpshoot: Ok, I'm coming back in now.

-Sharpshoot re-entered his home-

Sharpshoot: Now find out what that is while I go rinse this stuff off, it's killing me. It's funny because it's true.

Sparklebird: Ha...yeah!

Sharpshoot: Why does no one think I'm funny?

-Sharpshoot went upstairs-

Soapy: Interesting... -Soapy was observing the liquid in his strange machine-

Soapy: This is mineral glydocine.

Sparklebird: Really?

Soapy: This stuff is literally skin cancer. Which brings me to raise a new question, what are these houses made out of?

Sparklebird: Looks like bricks, straw, and cement. But the roof has these weird rhymestones.

Soapy: Yeah...I heard about this on my trip to the Big City last week. Some homes carry these to fend of Fusio-

Sparklebird: WHAAT?

Soapy: Ok, we have to get out of here, and we have to do it now.

Sparklebird: I can't believe there are more of his here minnions already!

-Suddenly, Sharpshoot came dressed with a towel on his head. He sees his friends' expressions-

Sharpshoot: Oh come on guys! This is a legitimate way to dry your head without a hair dryer.

Sparklebird: Alshary! Fusion's minnions are causing this weird rain!

Soapy: A mineral glydocine rain to be exact.

Sharpshoot: What the heck is that?

Soapy: A synthetic element, mixed with minerals be a weapon.

Sharpshoot: So, you're saying Fusion is trying to kill me with a little bit of acid rain?

-Suddenly, something big shook the ground. A biological monster with half a head and a round body with tentacles in its place for arms and legs rose from the ground-


Soapy: Eh, not just that.

-But alas, a purple light was emitted from within the monster as it slowly got bigger until it exploded, revealing a purple female warrior, who seemed to be unaffected by the rain-

-The warrior made her way to the house-

?: Do you know how long I have been looking for you both?

Sharpshoot: Wow. Who is she!

-Sharpshoot was putting all of his attention on the unknown female warrior, even had a bit of a blush going on. Sparklebird showed a bit of jealously at the fact-

Sparklebird: Alice...Ash? You cannot be serious!

?: Is this that kid you can't stop talking about, Zoey? I'm Alice Freeangel. Nice to meet you.

Sharpshoot: humanahumanahumana...

Freeangel: Eh?


                    SCENE 3 END

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Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 02, 2012, 08:09:15 pm
It's nice to see you posting new chapters again Ash. ^^ And wow I didn't see that ending coming O_O


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 02, 2012, 08:32:51 pm
Yeah, Alice wasn't supposed to appear until a few scenes later. But now that I lost what I had before, I figured I might execute it better and have her be introduced earlier.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 02, 2012, 08:48:45 pm
That makes sense, and I'm sorry that you lost the scenes you had already finished.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 02, 2012, 08:56:48 pm
It's cool. In a way I'm glad that I have another chance to execute it all better.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 02, 2012, 09:21:05 pm
True, you can make it more interesting than what it probably would've been. ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 02, 2012, 10:13:06 pm
It's too bad the world will never know what it would have been  :evil:


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on September 02, 2012, 10:17:21 pm
The world may never know......


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 03, 2012, 10:53:15 pm
Will post a chappie within the next few hours if someone comments in the next 2 hours


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 03, 2012, 11:05:45 pm
:D Out of curiosity Ash, do you remember some of the things that were supposed to happen?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 03, 2012, 11:07:42 pm
Darn! I thought for sure no one would post!

Let's just say one of us died halfway through the story, and it wasn't me


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 03, 2012, 11:45:25 pm
XD Lolz, sorry Ash.

And wow, that's really interesting.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 04, 2012, 12:06:52 am
So I guess I have to post that chappie soon


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 04, 2012, 12:31:36 am
 :roll: Sorry...again.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 04, 2012, 01:27:30 am

 Fusion Mayhem
           Chapter 2
                       New Propaganda
                                        Scene 3

-Sharpshoot had to deal with Soapy's constant presence in the house-

Soapy: And for the record, I came up with these boots myself.

Sharpshoot: WHY OH WHY DO YOU THINK I CARE!

Soapy: Just trying to make small talk kid.

Sharpshoot: You're not very good at it.

Soapy: Meh. I can only talk to the ladies, not males who look like them.

Sharpshoot: My rage is building.

Soapy: Yeah that's nice.

-Sparklebird came out of her room, feeling better since last night, which was the same night of the day of Sharpshoot's and Soapy's little scuffle.-

Sharpshoot: Zoey! How are you feeling today?

Sparklebird: Pretty good now. I think I'm ready to get back.

Sharpshoot: We can't. Look outside.

-It was raining lightly outside, but the rain made trees burn. This wasn't ordinary rain, this was acid rain-


Sharpshoot: I don't know what that's doing there. This has never happened before!

Sparklebird: Wow...I guess I can stay here for another day...

Sharpshoot: I thought you liked it here though.

Sparklebird: Yes, but I only have one change of armor and there's no way I can wash it out there.

Sharpshoot: You can wear one of my big shirts if you want.

Sparklebird: I'd need more than a shirt. But hey, don't worry. I don't mind wearing dirty armor for a day.

Sharpshoot: Whatever floats your boat I guess.

Soapy: Hey, I have a question for you kid.

Sharpshoot: What is it?

Soapy: Why isn't the rain tearing through the house?

Sharpshoot: Huh...that never occurred to me before. I don't even what kind of rain this is.

Soapy: Hmm..maybe I could. If could just get a sample of it. Say kid...you can heal right?

Sharpshoot: Yeah, why?

-and in a single blur, Sharpshoot was swiftly kicked out of his own home into the pouring rain outside-


Sharpshoot: OWOWOWOWOW IT BURNS! I'M GONNA GET YOU FOR THIS, NACHOS!

Soapy: It's Nat-chios.

Sharpshoot: Whatever!

Soapy: Here, catch. -Sharpshoot caught a petri dish in his hand-

Soapy: Fill that about .25%

Sparklebird: Why did you kick him instead of asking for him to go outside?

Soapy: Because he destroyed two of my babies.

Sparklebird:...your boots?

Soapy: Yeah, When you spend so much time developing a dangerous weapon, you can't help but to adopt it.

Sharpshoot: That's the stupidest thing I have ever heard.

Soapy: Quiet and fill the dish.

-Sharpshoot reluctantly filled the dish-

Sharpshoot: Ok, I'm coming back in now.

-Sharpshoot re-entered his home-

Sharpshoot: Now find out what that is while I go rinse this stuff off, it's killing me. It's funny because it's true.

Sparklebird: Ha...yeah!

Sharpshoot: Why does no one think I'm funny?

-Sharpshoot went upstairs-

Soapy: Interesting... -Soapy was observing the liquid in his strange machine-

Soapy: This is mineral glydocine.

Sparklebird: Really?

Soapy: This stuff is literally skin cancer. Which brings me to raise a new question, what are these houses made out of?

Sparklebird: Looks like bricks, straw, and cement. But the roof has these weird rhymestones.

Soapy: Yeah...I heard about this on my trip to the Big City last week. Some homes carry these to fend of Fusio-

Sparklebird: WHAAT?

Soapy: Ok, we have to get out of here, and we have to do it now.

Sparklebird: I can't believe there are more of his here minnions already!

-Suddenly, Sharpshoot came dressed with a towel on his head. He sees his friends' expressions-

Sharpshoot: Oh come on guys! This is a legitimate way to dry your head without a hair dryer.

Sparklebird: Alshary! Fusion's minnions are causing this weird rain!

Soapy: A mineral glydocine rain to be exact.

Sharpshoot: What the heck is that?

Soapy: A synthetic element, mixed with minerals be a weapon.

Sharpshoot: So, you're saying Fusion is trying to kill me with a little bit of acid rain?

-Suddenly, something big shook the ground. A biological monster with half a head and a round body with tentacles in its place for arms and legs rose from the ground-


Soapy: Eh, not just that.

-But alas, a purple light was emitted from within the monster as it slowly got bigger until it exploded, revealing a purple female warrior, who seemed to be unaffected by the rain-

-The warrior made her way to the house-

?: Do you know how long I have been looking for you both?

Sharpshoot: Wow. Who is she!

-Sharpshoot was putting all of his attention on the unknown female warrior, even had a bit of a blush going on. Sparklebird showed a bit of jealously at the fact-

Sparklebird: Alice...Ash? You cannot be serious!

?: Is this that kid you can't stop talking about, Zoey? I'm Alice Freeangel. Nice to meet you.

Sharpshoot: humanahumanahumana...

Freeangel: Eh?


                    SCENE 3 END

 Fusion Mayhem
          Chapter 2
                      New Propaganda
                            Scene 4

-Sparklebird could not believe her eyes, Sharpshoot was completely baffled by Freeangel's presence.-

Sharpshoot: I'm, I'm, I'm-

Sparklebird: A buffoon.

Sharpshoot: Sure.

Sparklebird:...

Soapy: Sorry kid, she's mine.

-Sparklebird furiously left the room-

Sharpshoot: You're so cool...

Freeangel: Alshary Sharpshoot right?

-Sharpshoot nodded with his mouth open-

Sharpshoot: Can you teach me that? What you just did to destroy that monster in one hit? It was so cool!

Soapy: Pardon me?

-It appears that Sharpshoot's attention isn't on Freeangel herself, but on her powers-

Sharpshoot: I wish I was as strong as that.

Soapy: Wow. You're some kind of stupid, kid. I'll go get Zoey.

Freenagel: So...nice house you have here. Very clean, very decorated...will you please stop looking at me like that? It's creepy!

Sharpshoot: WILL YOU TEACH ME THAT COOL ATTACK? PLEASE!

Freenagel: Eh...

-Soapy and a calmed-down Sparklebird arrived to see Sharpshoot spazzing out over Freenagel's attacking prowess-

Soapy: See, what did I tell you?

Sparklebird: ...yay Alice! You're here!

Sharpshoot: I'm sorry, where are my manners? Would you like to have something to drink?

Soapy: Hey you never offered me any-

Sharpshoot: Shhh. I'm talking to the strong lady here, not you.

Freenagel: Sure. Water would be fine.

Sharpshoot: On it!

-Sharpshoot ran for the kitchen-

Freeangel: What do you see in him, Zoey?

Sparklebird: What? Who? Me? Nothing. He's nothing to me.

Freeangel: Riiight. Listen, we need to head out.

Soapy: Where to?

Freenagel: The Big City. We need to start our Resistance Procedure guys.

Sparklebird: Right now? With all of this rain?

Freengel: Afraid so. Don't worry though, I have just the thing for it.

-Freenagel handed Soapy and Sparklebird each a rhymestone-


Freeangel: Just stick that on any compartment of your armor. So, Zoey. You better start saying goodbye to your friend so we can leave.

Sparklebird: ...Alice.

Freeangel: Yeah?

Sparklebird: I think he may want to come with us.

Freeangel: Really?

Sparklebird: Yes. This is the thing he's waited for his entire life. He wants to leave Setylia and help the rest of the world against Fusion! Please let him, it would mean a lot to me.

Freenagel: Hmmm...Alright then. We need all the help we can get anyway.

-Sharpshoot emerged from the kitchen with a glass of water-

Sharpshoot: Here you go, um, strong lady!

Freenagel: Please, call me Alice.

Sharpshoot: Right! So, will you teach me now?

Freeangel: I have a better idea. How would you like to come with us? Outside of Setylia?

Sharpshoot: ...I'd love to!

Soapy: Aww jeez...

Sparklebird: Thank you so much Alice!

Freenagel: Heh heh, your welcome Zoey.

Freeangel: Alright then. We will head back and meet you here around dawn, how's that sound?

Sharpshoot: Sounds great! Thank you, Alice.

Freenagel: Don't sweat it kid!

-Sharpshoot's friends left the house, all except for Sparklebird-

Sparklebird: You know, I'm really glad you're coming.

Sharpshoot: Uh, ye-yeah. Me too.

Sparklebird: I'll see you tomorrow then. Take care!

-Sparklebird waved goodbye as she left the house-

-Sharpshoot was ecstatic. He would finally live his life-long dream of helping those in the war against Fusion. That night, he could not sleep. For once in his life, he had something greater to live for-

Sharpshoot: I can't believe it. I finally get to set out on my journey. -Sharpshoot turned his attention to a framed photo of Abasi-

Sharpshoot: If only you were still here...I know, I'll find you!  I'll find out exactly where you are and bring you home where you belong. I promise.

-Sharpshoot finally dozed off and slept like a baby that night. He got up so early that he had enough time to pack up and say good bye and thanks to Hank and Tesse-


Tesse: Can you believe it, Hank? He's all grown up now!

Hank: Oh stop it Tesse! You're going to make an olympian cry.

-Sharpshoot waved goodbye and waited outside his home-

Sharpshoot: I can't wait!

-But the happiness would not last, as a strange woman was watching Sharpshoot through the grass-

?: This little boy won't know what hit him...

-The woman started to make her way to Sharpshoot, who was distracted by his own happiness-

Sharpshoot: I owe it all to Zoey. Oh how I think I might actually love that gi- huh?

-Sharpshoot could hear foot steps-

Sharpshoot: Hmmm...something's not right around here.

-Suddenly a sword slashed at Sharpshoot, who managed to dodge it in time-

Sharpshoot: Huh? -But there was no one behind him. Who could have been making that sword move-

?: What's the matter boy? Can't see me?

-Small knives were thrown at Sharpshoot, who skillfully dodged every single one-

?: Over here. -Sharpshoot turned to see nothing-

?: Or perhaps here. -This time, a trap was triggered, one that exploded. But once again, Sharpshoot managed to dodge it-

Sharpshoot: I don't know who you are, but if you want me, you're going to have to take me by force! Now show yourself!

?: The fun's just ended for you dear boy, but it's only starting for me.

Sharpshoot: Did you hear what I just said?

?: Hohoho. As you wish...


                       SCENE 4 END


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on September 04, 2012, 09:15:29 am
Bedazzle! You gonna post a new chapter tomorrow too, or just bedazzleing?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 04, 2012, 12:44:08 pm
Best part from this scene :D :


Freenagel: So...nice house you have here. Very clean, very decorated...will you please stop looking at me like that? It's creepy!


Overall, great scene as usual Ash ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 04, 2012, 02:30:00 pm
Thanks Zoey! And Silver, the bedazzling is the color fonts and all that junk I usually do. I have a 2-day break within the week, so I'm going to spoil you guys with another scene tonight.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 04, 2012, 04:13:52 pm
Yay! ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 04, 2012, 07:12:56 pm
I do owe you guys months of content anyway


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 04, 2012, 08:00:49 pm
True  :laugh:


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 04, 2012, 08:51:15 pm
You weren't supposed to agree with that. Now I actually feel like I do.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 04, 2012, 09:52:46 pm
Aww Ash, I'm just kidding. We can wait a while for new scenes ^^ don't pressure yourself to write more than you want


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 04, 2012, 09:57:00 pm
Fine then! I'll post tonight's in a few minutes


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 04, 2012, 10:05:25 pm
@.@ Ash...you don't have to


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 04, 2012, 11:35:48 pm
Oh hey, look. A new scene. You can blame Zoey for that.


 Fusion Mayhem
          Chapter 2
                      New Propaganda
                            Scene 4

-Sparklebird could not believe her eyes, Sharpshoot was completely baffled by Freeangel's presence.-

Sharpshoot: I'm, I'm, I'm-

Sparklebird: A buffoon.

Sharpshoot: Sure.

Sparklebird:...

Soapy: Sorry kid, she's mine.

-Sparklebird furiously left the room-

Sharpshoot: You're so cool...

Freeangel: Alshary Sharpshoot right?

-Sharpshoot nodded with his mouth open-

Sharpshoot: Can you teach me that? What you just did to destroy that monster in one hit? It was so cool!

Soapy: Pardon me?

-It appears that Sharpshoot's attention isn't on Freeangel herself, but on her powers-

Sharpshoot: I wish I was as strong as that.

Soapy: Wow. You're some kind of stupid, kid. I'll go get Zoey.

Freenagel: So...nice house you have here. Very clean, very decorated...will you please stop looking at me like that? It's creepy!

Sharpshoot: WILL YOU TEACH ME THAT COOL ATTACK? PLEASE!

Freenagel: Eh...

-Soapy and a calmed-down Sparklebird arrived to see Sharpshoot spazzing out over Freenagel's attacking prowess-

Soapy: See, what did I tell you?

Sparklebird: ...yay Alice! You're here!

Sharpshoot: I'm sorry, where are my manners? Would you like to have something to drink?

Soapy: Hey you never offered me any-

Sharpshoot: Shhh. I'm talking to the strong lady here, not you.

Freenagel: Sure. Water would be fine.

Sharpshoot: On it!

-Sharpshoot ran for the kitchen-

Freeangel: What do you see in him, Zoey?

Sparklebird: What? Who? Me? Nothing. He's nothing to me.

Freeangel: Riiight. Listen, we need to head out.

Soapy: Where to?

Freenagel: The Big City. We need to start our Resistance Procedure guys.

Sparklebird: Right now? With all of this rain?

Freengel: Afraid so. Don't worry though, I have just the thing for it.

-Freenagel handed Soapy and Sparklebird each a rhymestone-


Freeangel: Just stick that on any compartment of your armor. So, Zoey. You better start saying goodbye to your friend so we can leave.

Sparklebird: ...Alice.

Freeangel: Yeah?

Sparklebird: I think he may want to come with us.

Freeangel: Really?

Sparklebird: Yes. This is the thing he's waited for his entire life. He wants to leave Setylia and help the rest of the world against Fusion! Please let him, it would mean a lot to me.

Freenagel: Hmmm...Alright then. We need all the help we can get anyway.

-Sharpshoot emerged from the kitchen with a glass of water-

Sharpshoot: Here you go, um, strong lady!

Freenagel: Please, call me Alice.

Sharpshoot: Right! So, will you teach me now?

Freeangel: I have a better idea. How would you like to come with us? Outside of Setylia?

Sharpshoot: ...I'd love to!

Soapy: Aww jeez...

Sparklebird: Thank you so much Alice!

Freenagel: Heh heh, your welcome Zoey.

Freeangel: Alright then. We will head back and meet you here around dawn, how's that sound?

Sharpshoot: Sounds great! Thank you, Alice.

Freenagel: Don't sweat it kid!

-Sharpshoot's friends left the house, all except for Sparklebird-

Sparklebird: You know, I'm really glad you're coming.

Sharpshoot: Uh, ye-yeah. Me too.

Sparklebird: I'll see you tomorrow then. Take care!

-Sparklebird waved goodbye as she left the house-

-Sharpshoot was ecstatic. He would finally live his life-long dream of helping those in the war against Fusion. That night, he could not sleep. For once in his life, he had something greater to live for-

Sharpshoot: I can't believe it. I finally get to set out on my journey. -Sharpshoot turned his attention to a framed photo of Abasi-

Sharpshoot: If only you were still here...I know, I'll find you!  I'll find out exactly where you are and bring you home where you belong. I promise.

-Sharpshoot finally dozed off and slept like a baby that night. He got up so early that he had enough time to pack up and say good bye and thanks to Hank and Tesse-


Tesse: Can you believe it, Hank? He's all grown up now!

Hank: Oh stop it Tesse! You're going to make an olympian cry.

-Sharpshoot waved goodbye and waited outside his home-

Sharpshoot: I can't wait!

-But the happiness would not last, as a strange woman was watching Sharpshoot through the grass-

?: This little boy won't know what hit him...

-The woman started to make her way to Sharpshoot, who was distracted by his own happiness-

Sharpshoot: I owe it all to Zoey. Oh how I think I might actually love that gi- huh?

-Sharpshoot could hear foot steps-

Sharpshoot: Hmmm...something's not right around here.

-Suddenly a sword slashed at Sharpshoot, who managed to dodge it in time-

Sharpshoot: Huh? -But there was no one behind him. Who could have been making that sword move-

?: What's the matter boy? Can't see me?

-Small knives were thrown at Sharpshoot, who skillfully dodged every single one-

?: Over here. -Sharpshoot turned to see nothing-

?: Or perhaps here. -This time, a trap was triggered, one that exploded. But once again, Sharpshoot managed to dodge it-

Sharpshoot: I don't know who you are, but if you want me, you're going to have to take me by force! Now show yourself!

?: The fun's just ended for you dear boy, but it's only starting for me.

Sharpshoot: Did you hear what I just said?

?: Hohoho. As you wish...


                       SCENE 4 END


  Fusion Mayhem
           Chapter 2
                       New Propaganda
                              Scene 5

-Sharpshoot was fighting an enemy he could not see-

Sharpshoot: Let me guess, Fusion sent you.

?: Who else?

Sharpshoot: Why can't that bonehead come after me himself, huh?

?: I would not know how to tell you kid. I just take the cash and do what I'm told. It so happens he wants you gone.

-More knives were thrown at Sharpshoot from different directions. One managed to hit his ankle-

Sharpshoot: Gyaah! That hurt. -Sharpshoot removed the knife-

?: That's the plan! I'm sorry I have to kill such a helpless little boy, but I love cold-hard cash more than anything in the world.

Sharpshoot: Hmmm. I recognize the fact that you'll probably kill me. So can I ask you for your name? I would hate to be killed by a person I don't know.

?: It's Riska. Now then. I wanna get going so-AAAHH!

-Sharpshoot had found the woman, who was on a treetop. He was pulling her hair-

Riska: I see. I expected that to be a trap. Not only do you have the name of the hunter who will kill you, you have her face as well.

Sharpshoot: I ain't dieing lady. -Sharpshoot slammed Riska out of the treetop and moved forward to try and slash her with his claymore-

Riska: Kyaaagghh! -Riska was slashed-

Sharpshoot: Hpmh. -But she soon disappeared- Huh?

Riska: Death from above! Skullbreaker!

-Riska emitted from above Sharpshoot. The Riska that had been hit was a clone of herself she created using her gadgets-


Sharpshoot: Woah! -Sharpshoot managed to catch Riska's foot before it slammed into his skull-

Sharpshoot: You can't kill me lady! -Sharpshoot pushed Riska away-

Sharpshoot: I can heal.

Riska: You think I haven't dealt with people like that before?

Sharpshoot: I'm not like them. -Sharpshoot concentrated and created a barrier around himself with his energy- Cool! Now, you name your moves correct? Then check this out! Green Blitz! -Sharpshoot charged Riska as fast as he could. She could not react in time and was hit, with the barrier shattering at the sheer force of the impact. Riska was slammed into the ground, creating a small crater-

Sharpshoot: gasp...That, that was pretty cool...gasp

-Riska got up. Shaking some dirt of off her clothes-


Riska: Wow kid. You're something. Here I thought you would be easy like the rest of my jobs. I guess I'll stop fooling around now. -Riska showed off her sword skills before getting into a stance-

Sharpshoot: -Sharpshoot spun his claymore with one finger and stopped it and assumed a stance of his own- I don't know how you're still standing, but you won't be for long.

Riska: -laughs- What? Are you going to kill ME? That's rich kid.

Sharpshoot: Why does everybody call me a kid? I'm fourteen!

Riska: Well you haven't hit puberty yet. That's for sure.

Sharpshoot: That's it! I won't kill you, but you're in for a world of hurt.

-Sharpshooot recklessly charged at Riska, who easily dodged the attack and got a deep slash in Sharpshoot's left arm-

Riska: Come on puppy boy. Defend yourself! -Riska was speeding at Sharpshoot with slashes. He wasn't able to dodge a few-

Sharpshoot: No big deal. You haven't hit me that hard yet. I hate to admit it, but she's out of my league in swordplay. So what can I do now?

Sharpshoot: Hmph! -Sharpshoot slammed the ground with a glowing fist and created a small wave that shook Riska off of her feet-

Riska: Ow. That hurt. You're a gimmick, aren't you? No matter, you're not a very rare one.

Sharpshoot:...what? I did not get a word you just said.

Riska: Well, you couldn't possibly comprehend my superior language, I mean- -Sharpshoot charged at Riska and slashed her-

Riska: Hey! I was talking! -Riska threw 4 knives at Sharpshoot, with 2 hitting his column-

Sharpshoot: Gah! -Sharpshoot was paralyzed-

Riska: Now you're a sitting duck!

Sharpshoot: -Sharpshoot pulled the knives out of his column, but he was still unable to move- C'mon c'mon! Heal! -But there was nothing he could do. He was a target-

Riska: ...Now. It's time to show you how I deal with healers... -Riska's blade emitted a bronze aura- Slash of Death! -Riska charged an energy wave from her sword and shot it straight to Sharpshoot- Now you die!

-Sharpshoot did not close his eyes. Instead he looked at the wave that would kill him. He was staring death in the face but the wave was deflected by a simple mirror, who was held by none other than...-

Freeangel: Not on my watch sister!

Sharpshoot: Alice?

Riska: A meddler eh? This will be a bonus for me.

Freenagel: Bring it.


                            SCENE 5 END

And Zoey, I was joking.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 05, 2012, 12:28:28 am
 :P Riska seems like a really interesting character, too bad she's a villain. Nice job on the scene again Ash. ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on September 05, 2012, 09:03:31 am
Wooooo!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on September 05, 2012, 08:27:08 pm
Yay; epic story Ash and I love how you wrote my character xD. SOoooooo when's the next chappie? :P


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 05, 2012, 08:38:20 pm
Let's just say there's more to Riska that Alice might know about


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on September 05, 2012, 08:41:02 pm
Hmmmmmm. Hmmmmmmm. Hmmmmmmmm.  I don't get it


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 07, 2012, 08:37:32 pm
Post chappie or NOT post chappie? Hmmmm...


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on September 07, 2012, 10:07:24 pm
Do it!! Do it!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 07, 2012, 10:40:49 pm
Not? ok then.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 07, 2012, 11:23:56 pm
-tackle hugs Ash- Pretty please?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 07, 2012, 11:28:46 pm
Tackle hug? That sounds like an oxymoron


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 07, 2012, 11:38:35 pm
 Maybe it is :D


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on September 08, 2012, 03:22:03 pm
I was gonna post last night, but there was a storm that caused a power outage so I couldn't. I probably won't be able to post today or tomorrow. Sorry guys.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on September 08, 2012, 04:05:30 pm
It's fine. Ive had that problem myself


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on September 08, 2012, 06:11:04 pm
Yeah, no problem ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on October 30, 2012, 07:16:36 pm
I have a 5 day weekend for no reason (Yeah, thanks Mexico...)

So, I'll probably post more sometime this week.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on October 30, 2012, 08:14:39 pm
Yayayayayyayayahyayayahayyayayyayayayayyayayayayyayay!!!!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on October 30, 2012, 10:10:03 pm
Lol Silver, and that's great Ash! ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 04, 2012, 08:37:16 pm


  Fusion Mayhem
           Chapter 2
                       New Propaganda
                              Scene 5

-Sharpshoot was fighting an enemy he could not see-

Sharpshoot: Let me guess, Fusion sent you.

?: Who else?

Sharpshoot: Why can't that bonehead come after me himself, huh?

?: I would not know how to tell you kid. I just take the cash and do what I'm told. It so happens he wants you gone.

-More knives were thrown at Sharpshoot from different directions. One managed to hit his ankle-

Sharpshoot: Gyaah! That hurt. -Sharpshoot removed the knife-

?: That's the plan! I'm sorry I have to kill such a helpless little boy, but I love cold-hard cash more than anything in the world.

Sharpshoot: Hmmm. I recognize the fact that you'll probably kill me. So can I ask you for your name? I would hate to be killed by a person I don't know.

?: It's Riska. Now then. I wanna get going so-AAAHH!

-Sharpshoot had found the woman, who was on a treetop. He was pulling her hair-

Riska: I see. I expected that to be a trap. Not only do you have the name of the hunter who will kill you, you have her face as well.

Sharpshoot: I ain't dieing lady. -Sharpshoot slammed Riska out of the treetop and moved forward to try and slash her with his claymore-

Riska: Kyaaagghh! -Riska was slashed-

Sharpshoot: Hpmh. -But she soon disappeared- Huh?

Riska: Death from above! Skullbreaker!

-Riska emitted from above Sharpshoot. The Riska that had been hit was a clone of herself she created using her gadgets-


Sharpshoot: Woah! -Sharpshoot managed to catch Riska's foot before it slammed into his skull-

Sharpshoot: You can't kill me lady! -Sharpshoot pushed Riska away-

Sharpshoot: I can heal.

Riska: You think I haven't dealt with people like that before?

Sharpshoot: I'm not like them. -Sharpshoot concentrated and created a barrier around himself with his energy- Cool! Now, you name your moves correct? Then check this out! Green Blitz! -Sharpshoot charged Riska as fast as he could. She could not react in time and was hit, with the barrier shattering at the sheer force of the impact. Riska was slammed into the ground, creating a small crater-

Sharpshoot: gasp...That, that was pretty cool...gasp

-Riska got up. Shaking some dirt of off her clothes-


Riska: Wow kid. You're something. Here I thought you would be easy like the rest of my jobs. I guess I'll stop fooling around now. -Riska showed off her sword skills before getting into a stance-

Sharpshoot: -Sharpshoot spun his claymore with one finger and stopped it and assumed a stance of his own- I don't know how you're still standing, but you won't be for long.

Riska: -laughs- What? Are you going to kill ME? That's rich kid.

Sharpshoot: Why does everybody call me a kid? I'm fourteen!

Riska: Well you haven't hit puberty yet. That's for sure.

Sharpshoot: That's it! I won't kill you, but you're in for a world of hurt.

-Sharpshooot recklessly charged at Riska, who easily dodged the attack and got a deep slash in Sharpshoot's left arm-

Riska: Come on puppy boy. Defend yourself! -Riska was speeding at Sharpshoot with slashes. He wasn't able to dodge a few-

Sharpshoot: No big deal. You haven't hit me that hard yet. I hate to admit it, but she's out of my league in swordplay. So what can I do now?

Sharpshoot: Hmph! -Sharpshoot slammed the ground with a glowing fist and created a small wave that shook Riska off of her feet-

Riska: Ow. That hurt. You're a gimmick, aren't you? No matter, you're not a very rare one.

Sharpshoot:...what? I did not get a word you just said.

Riska: Well, you couldn't possibly comprehend my superior language, I mean- -Sharpshoot charged at Riska and slashed her-

Riska: Hey! I was talking! -Riska threw 4 knives at Sharpshoot, with 2 hitting his column-

Sharpshoot: Gah! -Sharpshoot was paralyzed-

Riska: Now you're a sitting duck!

Sharpshoot: -Sharpshoot pulled the knives out of his column, but he was still unable to move- C'mon c'mon! Heal! -But there was nothing he could do. He was a target-

Riska: ...Now. It's time to show you how I deal with healers... -Riska's blade emitted a bronze aura- Slash of Death! -Riska charged an energy wave from her sword and shot it straight to Sharpshoot- Now you die!

-Sharpshoot did not close his eyes. Instead he looked at the wave that would kill him. He was staring death in the face but the wave was deflected by a simple mirror, who was held by none other than...-

Freeangel: Not on my watch sister!

Sharpshoot: Alice?

Riska: A meddler eh? This will be a bonus for me.

Freenagel: Bring it.


                            SCENE 5 END

And Zoey, I was joking.

 Fusion Mayhem
           Chapter 2
                      New Propaganda
                                Scene 6
 -Freeangel had showed up just in time to save Sharpshoot's life-

Riska: Well aren't you brave my dear? How could you possibly fare so well? But what I want to comprehend is, how did you know a simple mirror would reflect my attack?

Freeangel: Because, I've seen that trick before. Your blade is enchanted with dark magic.

Riska: Now how could you possibly be informed with such information?

Freeangel: What? Do I look stupid to you? I do my research.

Riska: I guess you're not as stupid as he.

Sharpshoot: Hey, I'm not stupid! I'm just young and naive. That's what Tesse says.

Riska: Enough with this useless banter, now we do battle!

Freenagel: Fine by me. I'll do you a favor and end this quickly.

Riska: No time for another guile remark! -Riska swooped in and started to slash at Freeangel. Freeangel dodged every single attack perfectly-

Sharpshoot: Wow. She's really agile too!

-Freeangel finally blocked the sword with her forearm and punched Riska into a nearby tree-

Riska: Ouch. -Riska got up and disposed of her blade. She then created 2 clones of herself- Keep her occupied!

-The clones nodded and began launching a flurry of strikes at Freeangel, who dodged every single one-

Riska: Activate. cabbage trap.

Sharpshoot: Cabbage?

-Suddenly, the clones disappeared and a purple hybrid between a rose and a cabbage started to manifest itself around Freenagel. Freenagel was then caught in the pedals-

Riska: Now! -Riska picked her blade up from the ground and was jumping at Freenagel, ready to decapitate her-

Freeangel: Gotcha. -Freeangel headbutted Riska's incoming sword, shattering it to pieces-

-Riska's legs started to wobble and she fell to the ground, astonished at what became of her blade-

Riska: My-my-my-my swo-swo-swo

Sharpshoot: Heheheh! That was pretty neat.

-Freenagel smiled back at Sharpshoot as she broke free from the trap-

Riska: -Riska began to tear up- My blade! No! I won't get a taste of that superfluous cash money either!

Freeangel: Could you quit down, Riska? You're bringing shame to yourself.

Riska: This isn't over purple ogre! I'll even the sides eventually, you hear?

Sharpshoot: She doesn't look like an ogre to me. A ferocious giant titan maybe, but definitely not an ogre. Plus, ogre's have hideous faces and her face isn't that bad.

Freeangel: Eh. Thanks?

Sharpshoot: Much better than Zoey's.

Freenagel: I don't think you should say that around her. She can get a little jealous.

Sharpshoot: Why would she get jealous of that?

Freeangel: Nevermind. -Riska had taken off crying-

Sharpshoot: So why did you let her escape?

Freeangel: She isn't worth it.

Sharpshoot: I think there's more you're not telling me.

Freeangel: Is this how you repay me for agreeing to take you along with us to the Big City and then saving  your life too? With questions?

Sharpshoot: No ma'am. I am sorry. Thank you for saving my soul.

Freeangel: Eh. You're welcome I guess.

Sharpshoot: Where are the others?

Soapy: Right here! Good show madam. -Soapy and Zoey had been observing the fight from a nearby bush

-Sparklebird was very angry-

Freenagel: How long have you been here?

Soapy: Right on time to see you shatter that sword.

-Sparklebird was still very angry-

Sharpshoot: What happened to her?

Sparklebird: Nothing. Nothing at all.

-Sparklbird crossed her arms and faced away-

Sharpshoot: Alright then. Geez, I wonder what her problem is.

Soapy: Ugh... -Soapy "facepalmed"-

Freeangel: So, you have everything you need?

Sharpshoot: Yep. I have it all right here. -Sharpshoot showed Freeangel a very big backpack-

Soapy: How much does that weight?

Sharpshoot: Couple of pounds. Not much. Maybe like 100 or 120 pounds.

Soapy: Alrighty then.

Freeangel: It's a very long walk. I hope you're ready.

Sharpshoot: Yes ma'am!

Soapy: C'mon skippy, get over it.

Sparklebird: Fine. And I told you to stop calling me that!

Soapy: But it just sounds so cute! I mean, skippy the girl who can thr- -Sparklebird punched Soapy in the face, knocking him off of his feet. Soapy had Sparklebird's fist branded on his left cheek- I shall never kid around with an angry woman again.

Sharpshoot: Why are you even angry?

Sparklebird: Ok, that's it! You want to know why I'm angry?

Sharpshoot: Yeah, why are yo- Hey! Ow! Cut it out! -Sparklebird was punching Sharpshoot with exceptional force-

Sharpshoot: C'mon, this is painful!

Sparklebird: I can't believe you don't know why I'm angry!

-Soapy was laughing at Sharpshoot's misfortune-

Soapy: Hahahaha. It's really fun seeing this kind of pain being experienced by someone else!

Freeangel: *sigh* This is going to be a very long walk...

                                         SCENE 6 END









Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 04, 2012, 09:01:36 pm
Yay!! Zoey beating up Ash yaaaay!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 04, 2012, 09:08:02 pm
:D All I can say is that he deserves it.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 04, 2012, 09:24:12 pm
He always deserves a beating!! Lol


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 04, 2012, 09:43:31 pm
...Soapy deserved the beating too.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 04, 2012, 09:52:39 pm
I'll tell him you made him get punched by a chick on Xbox. Lol.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 04, 2012, 10:16:54 pm
XD Well, he did call me skippy so...


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 04, 2012, 10:30:05 pm
Lol. I'll tell him she had a good reason. Lol


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 04, 2012, 10:44:27 pm
Lol, of course I have a good reason for beating him and Ash up. :D


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 05, 2012, 06:53:04 pm
Just an FYI, Zoey and I are still 14 at the time of this chapter. You'll start noticing more changes both physically and mentally as we age.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 07, 2012, 08:01:22 pm
That was just uncalled for, sir. My fictional self disapproves very much
of this violent behavior. Still, I await anxiously for the next installment
in the story.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 07, 2012, 09:30:47 pm
Hey there/Miley/Soapy/Paraniod Citizen! Glad to have you have back for...a post. Yeah, Zoey's going through a phase right now.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 07, 2012, 09:43:33 pm
Hey! You brought the violence upon yourself Ash. :P


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 08, 2012, 05:27:04 pm
That was just uncalled for, sir. My fictional self disapproves very much
of this violent behavior. Still, I await anxiously for the next installment
in the story.

I gave you fair warning while you were playing Fallout. I told you she hit you, and i recall you laughing. It wasn't uncalled for if you called her Skippy. Now shoo and play Halo 4 or Borderlands 2 or something.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on November 08, 2012, 10:30:54 pm
Hey there/Miley/Soapy/Paraniod Citizen! Glad to have you have back for...a post.

From the ashes he rises!


Quote
I gave you fair warning while you were playing Fallout. I told you she hit you, and i recall you laughing. It wasn't uncalled for if you called her Skippy. Now shoo and play Halo 4 or Borderlands 2 or something.

Oh jeez, thanks for revealing my playing habits to the world!

Skippy sounds like the name of cutesy wutsey wunny wabbit, so
there was definitely some over reaction going on here.



Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 09, 2012, 05:14:42 am
Is revealing your habits bad?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 09, 2012, 05:15:04 pm

Skippy sounds like the name of cutesy wutsey wunny wabbit, so
there was definitely some over reaction going on here.


But I'm not a bunny rabbit! But I'm sorry for what my 14 year old fictional self did to you Soapy. >.<


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 09, 2012, 05:17:45 pm
You gonna come on regularly now -insert his real name here-?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 09, 2012, 11:29:42 pm
SUPPLIES!

Fusion Mayhem
           Chapter 2
                      New Propaganda
                                Scene 6
 -Freeangel had showed up just in time to save Sharpshoot's life-

Riska: Well aren't you brave my dear? How could you possibly fare so well? But what I want to comprehend is, how did you know a simple mirror would reflect my attack?

Freeangel: Because, I've seen that trick before. Your blade is enchanted with dark magic.

Riska: Now how could you possibly be informed with such information?

Freeangel: What? Do I look stupid to you? I do my research.

Riska: I guess you're not as stupid as he.

Sharpshoot: Hey, I'm not stupid! I'm just young and naive. That's what Tesse says.

Riska: Enough with this useless banter, now we do battle!

Freenagel: Fine by me. I'll do you a favor and end this quickly.

Riska: No time for another guile remark! -Riska swooped in and started to slash at Freeangel. Freeangel dodged every single attack perfectly-

Sharpshoot: Wow. She's really agile too!

-Freeangel finally blocked the sword with her forearm and punched Riska into a nearby tree-

Riska: Ouch. -Riska got up and disposed of her blade. She then created 2 clones of herself- Keep her occupied!

-The clones nodded and began launching a flurry of strikes at Freeangel, who dodged every single one-

Riska: Activate. cabbage trap.

Sharpshoot: Cabbage?

-Suddenly, the clones disappeared and a purple hybrid between a rose and a cabbage started to manifest itself around Freenagel. Freenagel was then caught in the pedals-

Riska: Now! -Riska picked her blade up from the ground and was jumping at Freenagel, ready to decapitate her-

Freeangel: Gotcha. -Freeangel headbutted Riska's incoming sword, shattering it to pieces-

-Riska's legs started to wobble and she fell to the ground, astonished at what became of her blade-

Riska: My-my-my-my swo-swo-swo

Sharpshoot: Heheheh! That was pretty neat.

-Freenagel smiled back at Sharpshoot as she broke free from the trap-

Riska: -Riska began to tear up- My blade! No! I won't get a taste of that superfluous cash money either!

Freeangel: Could you quit down, Riska? You're bringing shame to yourself.

Riska: This isn't over purple ogre! I'll even the sides eventually, you hear?

Sharpshoot: She doesn't look like an ogre to me. A ferocious giant titan maybe, but definitely not an ogre. Plus, ogre's have hideous faces and her face isn't that bad.

Freeangel: Eh. Thanks?

Sharpshoot: Much better than Zoey's.

Freenagel: I don't think you should say that around her. She can get a little jealous.

Sharpshoot: Why would she get jealous of that?

Freeangel: Nevermind. -Riska had taken off crying-

Sharpshoot: So why did you let her escape?

Freeangel: She isn't worth it.

Sharpshoot: I think there's more you're not telling me.

Freeangel: Is this how you repay me for agreeing to take you along with us to the Big City and then saving  your life too? With questions?

Sharpshoot: No ma'am. I am sorry. Thank you for saving my soul.

Freeangel: Eh. You're welcome I guess.

Sharpshoot: Where are the others?

Soapy: Right here! Good show madam. -Soapy and Zoey had been observing the fight from a nearby bush

-Sparklebird was very angry-

Freenagel: How long have you been here?

Soapy: Right on time to see you shatter that sword.

-Sparklebird was still very angry-

Sharpshoot: What happened to her?

Sparklebird: Nothing. Nothing at all.

-Sparklbird crossed her arms and faced away-

Sharpshoot: Alright then. Geez, I wonder what her problem is.

Soapy: Ugh... -Soapy "facepalmed"-

Freeangel: So, you have everything you need?

Sharpshoot: Yep. I have it all right here. -Sharpshoot showed Freeangel a very big backpack-

Soapy: How much does that weight?

Sharpshoot: Couple of pounds. Not much. Maybe like 100 or 120 pounds.

Soapy: Alrighty then.

Freeangel: It's a very long walk. I hope you're ready.

Sharpshoot: Yes ma'am!

Soapy: C'mon skippy, get over it.

Sparklebird: Fine. And I told you to stop calling me that!

Soapy: But it just sounds so cute! I mean, skippy the girl who can thr- -Sparklebird punched Soapy in the face, knocking him off of his feet. Soapy had Sparklebird's fist branded on his left cheek- I shall never kid around with an angry woman again.

Sharpshoot: Why are you even angry?

Sparklebird: Ok, that's it! You want to know why I'm angry?

Sharpshoot: Yeah, why are yo- Hey! Ow! Cut it out! -Sparklebird was punching Sharpshoot with exceptional force-

Sharpshoot: C'mon, this is painful!

Sparklebird: I can't believe you don't know why I'm angry!

-Soapy was laughing at Sharpshoot's misfortune-

Soapy: Hahahaha. It's really fun seeing this kind of pain being experienced by someone else!

Freeangel: *sigh* This is going to be a very long walk...

                                         SCENE 6 END

  Fusion Mayhem
            Chapter 2
                        New Propaganda
                                  Scene 7
-The group had been walking for approximately 32 hours. It was around 12 PM-

Sharpshoot: -Sharpshoot was covered in bandages and bruises, in a comedic fashion- Are we almost there yet.

Freeangel: We should arrive in about 2 hours.

-Sharpshoot noticed less trees and vegetation and more people around-

Soapy: You look amazed kid, Haven't you ever seen this many people around in one spot?

Sharpshoot: No, I can't say I have. I mean, the town square never gets this much people.  

Soapy: I guess you've never been to the Big City then.

Sharpshoot: Well, I have. But I was too young, don't remember it to be honest.

Soapy: It's nothing but technology and tall buildings.

Sharpshoot: How big is it?

Soapy: Well, seeing as how the Big City is one of the few major capitals left in the world, it is humongous. I mean, the mile radius alone is around 200 miles wide.

Sharpshoot: Wait. Miles. I think Abasi taught me about those. Wow, that's pretty big then. Do they separate the city in any way? You know, so people don't get lost.

Soapy: Well, of course they do.  There are 14 sectors in the city. The main sector is Sector S. Home of the Silver Building, or what's the government. The main square is there.

Sharpshoot: So what are we doing anyway?

-Sparklebird was still silent and refused to talk to anyone with the exception of Freeangel-

Freeangel: We're planning on creating our own group of combatants to begin dispatching Fusion's minnions around the country. However, that's not the only thing we came to see.

Sharpshoot: What else?

Soapy: Some of the city people have actually become Fusion's followers. They're being tricked into it by some sort of propaganda the minnions have been spreading around the city.

-Sharpshoot was shocked to hear what he had just heard-

Sharpshoot: People? Into Fusion? How is this possible?

Sparklebird: ...That's what we're going to investigate. Haven't you been paying attention?

Sharpshoot: Hey why are you even mad at me? You know, your face doesn't look cute with that rugged angry expression.

-Sparklebird calmed down a little-

Sparklebird: Whatever!

Sharpshoot: Why are you blu- Huh?

-Sharpshoot heard the screams of a woman-

Sharpshoot: What is that?

-The group ran into the source of the screaming. A large crowd was surrounding the commotion-

-A woman's husband had been knocked out cold by a large, well-built man with some kind of metal covering both of his large fists-

?: Sorry ma'am. Your husband got in my way. I simply wanted the paper.

-The large man took the last newspaper from the knocked out husband-

?: Now, if anybody else has something to say to me, say it now. Or I'll be on my way.

Sharpshoot: HEY!

-The man turned around to see the small Sharpshoot calling to him-

?: What do you want to say, kid? I don't want to have to hurt you.

Sharpshoot: What's the big idea? You can't take people's stuff like that.

?: Look kid. I need the paper.

Sharpshoot: Yeah so what? So you just take it?

?: Yeah. What are you going to do about, kiddo?

Sharpshoot: I'll show you what I'm going to about it.

Soapy: Hey kid, don't. Leave the man be. We can't call attention to ourselves like that.

?: Listen to your babysitter kid. I have bigger fish to fry. Huh?

-The man noticed Freeangel-

?: Well well well, if it isn't little Kali. Haven't seen you for a very longtime.

Freenagel: Steel Cold Bruce...what are you doing here?

Bruce: Just going to the Big City, why you askin'?

Freeangel: I haven't forgotten about what you did to us.

Bruce: You're still holding that grudge. Whatever. Keep livin' in the past if ya want.

-Bruce was retreating with the newspaper in his hand-

Sharpshoot: HYYYYYAAAAAGGH! -Sharpshoot jumped at Bruce with his fist ready to punch him-

Bruce: -Bruce turned around to look- Hmph. -Bruce countered back with a very hard punch directly at Sharpshoot's gut. The intensity of the attack was strong enough to make Sharpshoot cough blood and send him flying into a large rock formation several feet back. The impact was loud and Sharpshoot's impact on the rocks was even louder-

Sparklebird: Ash!

-Sparklebird ran to see if Ash was ok-

Bruce: Heh. Stick to babysittin', Kali. That kid has way too much spunk for his own good.

-Bruce walked off into the distance-

Freeangel: Grrrr.... -Freenagel was clenching her fist- We're not wasting anymore time. Natchios, go and retrieve them.

Soapy: Your wish is my command. -Soapy ran off to Sharpshoot's location-

-Freenagel approached the woman-

Freeangel: ...Sorry about your husband. Here. -Alice gave the woman a copy of the newspaper she had bought earlier- Take care.

-Soapy came back with Sparklebird. He also had Ash on his back-

Soapy: I know It's not my business, but what was that all about.

Freeangel: Nothing.

Soapy: You know, there's still a lot we don't know about you, Alice.

Freenagel: I could say the same about you.

Soapy: Fair enough.

-The group walked toward the big city, with the crowd watching them from afar-


                                         SCENE 7 END



Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 10, 2012, 12:07:58 am
Awesome scene as usual Ash! :D I'm really curious to learn more about Alice's past with Bruce and even have some ideas.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 10, 2012, 12:41:57 am
Thanks Zoey! Any speculation is welcome!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 10, 2012, 08:01:04 am
Awwwww you named a building after me. How sweet.  ;D


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 10, 2012, 03:37:25 pm
I'm glad you caught on to that reference.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 11, 2012, 05:52:18 am
How could I not? But I dont understand what Soapy said when he told Ash "The Silver Building, or what's the government." What does that mean?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 11, 2012, 10:29:50 pm
That it is THE main government building in the Big City.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 12, 2012, 09:09:39 pm
Do I run it? Huh? Huh?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 13, 2012, 04:29:43 pm
No, it's just named after you. Also, 2 more central characters from the RP were actually created to be part of Fusion Mayhem, but I felt like testing them out in the RP first. They will both have their own sagas and will be initially hostile.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 13, 2012, 04:39:14 pm
Were they ever in the RP?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 13, 2012, 05:01:00 pm
Yes, they're both in the RP. I just wanted to clarify that I created them for Fusion Mayhem so you guys don't think "lol he's just taking ideas from the RP rofl"


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 14, 2012, 05:26:47 am
Cool. I'm not sure if I will recognize them (I joined reeeeeeeally late after all)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 14, 2012, 08:24:42 am
*pokes* hewwo everyone! Missed you :) and this is so good, I cant wait to read what's next.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 14, 2012, 08:39:27 pm
Hey, it's the sword crusher!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 16, 2012, 03:37:40 pm
The girl who's kicked my and Ash's @ss countless times


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 18, 2012, 08:07:36 pm
I've hit writers block on FM, so I'm going to take some time off of it and work on a new story for the next month or so. I'll post it soon.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 20, 2012, 03:05:49 pm
Well, you could always include ME!!!! YEAH!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on November 20, 2012, 07:32:36 pm
It won't use our characters or anyone based on them. (Well, the protagonist is going to be partially based on me, but that's about it).


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on November 20, 2012, 07:42:22 pm
Aww.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on November 20, 2012, 11:40:05 pm
 Good luck with your new story Ash, and getting past your writer's block for FM.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 26, 2012, 09:56:18 am
Good luck getting over writers block Ashy!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 01, 2012, 06:11:52 pm
OT: I've decided I'm at least going to post the rest of this chapter first though.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on December 01, 2012, 07:05:20 pm
OT: Woot! Just do your best!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 01, 2012, 07:40:59 pm
OT: YEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 16, 2012, 03:31:26 am

  Fusion Mayhem
            Chapter 2
                        New Propaganda
                                  Scene 7
-The group had been walking for approximately 32 hours. It was around 12 PM-

Sharpshoot: -Sharpshoot was covered in bandages and bruises, in a comedic fashion- Are we almost there yet.

Freeangel: We should arrive in about 2 hours.

-Sharpshoot noticed less trees and vegetation and more people around-

Soapy: You look amazed kid, Haven't you ever seen this many people around in one spot?

Sharpshoot: No, I can't say I have. I mean, the town square never gets this much people.  

Soapy: I guess you've never been to the Big City then.

Sharpshoot: Well, I have. But I was too young, don't remember it to be honest.

Soapy: It's nothing but technology and tall buildings.

Sharpshoot: How big is it?

Soapy: Well, seeing as how the Big City is one of the few major capitals left in the world, it is humongous. I mean, the mile radius alone is around 200 miles wide.

Sharpshoot: Wait. Miles. I think Abasi taught me about those. Wow, that's pretty big then. Do they separate the city in any way? You know, so people don't get lost.

Soapy: Well, of course they do.  There are 14 sectors in the city. The main sector is Sector S. Home of the Silver Building, or what's the government. The main square is there.

Sharpshoot: So what are we doing anyway?

-Sparklebird was still silent and refused to talk to anyone with the exception of Freeangel-

Freeangel: We're planning on creating our own group of combatants to begin dispatching Fusion's minnions around the country. However, that's not the only thing we came to see.

Sharpshoot: What else?

Soapy: Some of the city people have actually become Fusion's followers. They're being tricked into it by some sort of propaganda the minnions have been spreading around the city.

-Sharpshoot was shocked to hear what he had just heard-

Sharpshoot: People? Into Fusion? How is this possible?

Sparklebird: ...That's what we're going to investigate. Haven't you been paying attention?

Sharpshoot: Hey why are you even mad at me? You know, your face doesn't look cute with that rugged angry expression.

-Sparklebird calmed down a little-

Sparklebird: Whatever!

Sharpshoot: Why are you blu- Huh?

-Sharpshoot heard the screams of a woman-

Sharpshoot: What is that?

-The group ran into the source of the screaming. A large crowd was surrounding the commotion-

-A woman's husband had been knocked out cold by a large, well-built man with some kind of metal covering both of his large fists-

?: Sorry ma'am. Your husband got in my way. I simply wanted the paper.

-The large man took the last newspaper from the knocked out husband-

?: Now, if anybody else has something to say to me, say it now. Or I'll be on my way.

Sharpshoot: HEY!

-The man turned around to see the small Sharpshoot calling to him-

?: What do you want to say, kid? I don't want to have to hurt you.

Sharpshoot: What's the big idea? You can't take people's stuff like that.

?: Look kid. I need the paper.

Sharpshoot: Yeah so what? So you just take it?

?: Yeah. What are you going to do about, kiddo?

Sharpshoot: I'll show you what I'm going to about it.

Soapy: Hey kid, don't. Leave the man be. We can't call attention to ourselves like that.

?: Listen to your babysitter kid. I have bigger fish to fry. Huh?

-The man noticed Freeangel-

?: Well well well, if it isn't little Kali. Haven't seen you for a very longtime.

Freenagel: Steel Cold Bruce...what are you doing here?

Bruce: Just going to the Big City, why you askin'?

Freeangel: I haven't forgotten about what you did to us.

Bruce: You're still holding that grudge. Whatever. Keep livin' in the past if ya want.

-Bruce was retreating with the newspaper in his hand-

Sharpshoot: HYYYYYAAAAAGGH! -Sharpshoot jumped at Bruce with his fist ready to punch him-

Bruce: -Bruce turned around to look- Hmph. -Bruce countered back with a very hard punch directly at Sharpshoot's gut. The intensity of the attack was strong enough to make Sharpshoot cough blood and send him flying into a large rock formation several feet back. The impact was loud and Sharpshoot's impact on the rocks was even louder-

Sparklebird: Ash!

-Sparklebird ran to see if Ash was ok-

Bruce: Heh. Stick to babysittin', Kali. That kid has way too much spunk for his own good.

-Bruce walked off into the distance-

Freeangel: Grrrr.... -Freenagel was clenching her fist- We're not wasting anymore time. Natchios, go and retrieve them.

Soapy: Your wish is my command. -Soapy ran off to Sharpshoot's location-

-Freenagel approached the woman-

Freeangel: ...Sorry about your husband. Here. -Alice gave the woman a copy of the newspaper she had bought earlier- Take care.

-Soapy came back with Sparklebird. He also had Ash on his back-

Soapy: I know It's not my business, but what was that all about.

Freeangel: Nothing.

Soapy: You know, there's still a lot we don't know about you, Alice.

Freenagel: I could say the same about you.

Soapy: Fair enough.

-The group walked toward the big city, with the crowd watching them from afar-


                                         SCENE 7 END

  Fusion Mayhem!
             Chapter 2
                           New Propaganda
                                              Scene 8

-The group is currently entering the Big City, following Sharpshoot's defeat at the hands of Bruce-

Soapy: Ok, we're here!

Freeangel: Guys, get ready. We'll be in the entrance any time now.

-The quartette reached the entrance, where they were inspected and eventually let in-

Freeangel: Our meeting hall is in the center of Sector S. It's  secret so don't go around casually mentioning it. -Freeangel had said all of this to Sharpshoot via whispering in his ear-

Soapy: Shh. We're here now.

-The group entered an abandoned building near a warehouse, in an alley. They were greeted by other fighters, all itching to defeat Fusion-

-A blonde, well-built man wearing armor painted in cammo spoke up as soon as the quartette entered the building.

Tony: He guys, shut up! Ms. Freeangel is here!

Freeangel: No need to call me that Tony. My name is Alice. I've told you before.

Soapy: Guys, we have a new recruit.

Sharpshoot: Hiya!

-Sharpshoot greeted all the people in the building-

Tony: Hey, name's Tony, what's yours?

Sharpshoot: Alshary Sharpshoot, but you can call me Ash.

Tony: Alright, Ash. Come on, I'll introduce you to everyone.

Tony: This here's Sabat.

Sabat: Hey. -Sabat was an older man, his right eye was missing and wore a black eye patch to conceal the injury. He had a 5 o' clock shadow, a long brown ponytail, and was smoking a rather large cigar-

Tony: And this here's Shawna.

Shawna: Hey cutie. -Shawna was a busty woman in her late 20s. She had a mole in her right cheek and had a long head of blonde hair-

Sparklebird: Don't call him that, Shawna!

Shawna: Relax a bit Zoey. I'm just saying hi.

Sparklebird: You better be!

Tony: Oh...so you're THAT guy...

Sparklebird: Tony...

Tony: Nevermind, nevermind. Here, I'll keep introducing you.

Tito: Who's this loser?

Sharpshoot: What was that?

Tito: I said, who's this lo-

Tony: Already picking a fight with the new guy, Tito? Chill man.

Tito: He doesn't look like a fighter.

Tony: Haven't you learned by now to not judge a book by it's cover?

Tito: Tch. Just stating my first impressions. -Tito was a tall, thin but built man about Soapy's age. He had a ridiculous spiky hairdo and strawberry blond hair. He wore a white suit with  blue tie. Why you ask? "Tito: Because I can".-

Tony: There's more of us, but I'll let Alice speak for now.

Freeangel: Thank you Tony. Now, do I have your attention?

Tony: Yep.

Freeangel: Good. As you all know, people have begun to support Fusion and his army. I do not think this is something people  are actually doing because they are aware of what they're bargaining for. So, we have traced the source of it now. Fusion is imposing a propaganda for the people of the Big City. He has chosen a non-violent way to gain supporters, and it seems to be working. I'm going to need someone to accompany Soapy and I to one of these presentations, to know exactly what Fusion is saying to gain said supporters. This is an undercover mission, so I don't want you tagging along Tito. Stealth isn't your strong suit.

Tito: Tch. Whatever.

Sharpshoot: Think I could go?

Soapy: You're a bit too new for this one. Let someone else handle it.

Sparklebird: Plus, you're just as bad as Tito when it comes to this sort of thing.

Sharpshoot: Just how bad is Tito?

Tito: Hey, stop namedropping me already, unless you people want to eat boot!

Freeangel: Hey, pay attention! Sabat, you're off too. You're a very distinctive figure. So that leaves either Zoey, Shawna, or Tony.

Tony: I'll pass on this one.

Sparklebird: I'll go.

Tony: Are you sure Zoey?  Shawna could do it instead.

Shawna: Yeah, let me do it. Or do you want me to be the one to keep the new cutie company...

-Sparklebird paused for a bit-

Sparklebird: Ok, fine. You can take it.

Sharpshoot: Anyone else hear that?

Soapy: Hear what?

-Suddenly, a window broke and a grenade entered the building-

Freenagel: EVERYONE TAKE COVER!

-All of the fighters jumped back and covered themselves from the explosion-

Sharpshoot: Hey, who's doing that!

-Sharpshoot jumped out the window-

Sharpshoot: Show yourself!

?: So the rumors are true...

Sharpshoot: Who the hell are you?

?: I'm not with Fusion, but I am from a concerned party. I can't believe I'm standing in front of the last member of the Sharpshoot clan.

Sharpshoot: I said, who the hell are you?!

?: Kal's the name. Anyway, I must leave you now. I have to report back to my superiors.

-Sharpshoot jumped and punched Kal, but it turned out to be an illusion. Kal was gone-

Freenagel: Alshary!

Sharpshoot: Huh? Did you see that? Some weird guy who claims he's not with Fusion tried to kill us.

Soapy: We know, ok. They're from another group. We don't really get along.

Sharpshoot: So you're not only fighting Fusion, you're also fighting each other?

Soapy: It's a bit more complicated than that.

Sharpshoot: I don't get it! Why is it more complicated? Why can't someone just tell me!

Freeangel: Now's not the time for that. We need to stop them. They're going to ruin everything!

Sharpshoot: Huh? What?

Tony: They're going to attack the big presentation tonight! They don't know what they're doing!

Sharpshoot: But why? How do you know?

Tony: That grenade had a very powerful sleep aura. They planned to knock us out cold for a very long time. Enough time to carry out their plan.

Freeangel: Now we have to find them and put a stop to them before they ruin the whole plan!

Sparklebird: What are we waiting for then?

Freeangel: Follow me. That Kal guy left a very traceable path of energy.

-Freeangel's group of fighters ventured out into a dark part of town-


                                                                                               SCENE 8 END



Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on December 16, 2012, 07:35:09 am
Awesomesauce!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 16, 2012, 09:01:48 am
No writer's block?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on December 16, 2012, 12:10:19 pm
Amazing scene Ash! ^^


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 16, 2012, 09:35:41 pm
Heads up, next Scene will be the finale for this chapter.


Also, Tony was the one who was supposed to say "I'll pass on this one" not Shawna. That was my bad. FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIXED.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on December 17, 2012, 05:16:11 pm
Then you're gonna stop?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 19, 2012, 01:48:32 pm
I'm going to focus on A Long Road To Fortune for a while.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 31, 2012, 08:44:47 pm
I AM NOT GOING TO WAIT UNTIL NEXT YEAR TO FINISH THIS!


 Fusion Mayhem!
             Chapter 2
                           New Propaganda
                                              Scene 8

-The group is currently entering the Big City, following Sharpshoot's defeat at the hands of Bruce-

Soapy: Ok, we're here!

Freeangel: Guys, get ready. We'll be in the entrance any time now.

-The quartette reached the entrance, where they were inspected and eventually let in-

Freeangel: Our meeting hall is in the center of Sector S. It's  secret so don't go around casually mentioning it. -Freeangel had said all of this to Sharpshoot via whispering in his ear-

Soapy: Shh. We're here now.

-The group entered an abandoned building near a warehouse, in an alley. They were greeted by other fighters, all itching to defeat Fusion-

-A blonde, well-built man wearing armor painted in cammo spoke up as soon as the quartette entered the building.

Tony: He guys, shut up! Ms. Freeangel is here!

Freeangel: No need to call me that Tony. My name is Alice. I've told you before.

Soapy: Guys, we have a new recruit.

Sharpshoot: Hiya!

-Sharpshoot greeted all the people in the building-

Tony: Hey, name's Tony, what's yours?

Sharpshoot: Alshary Sharpshoot, but you can call me Ash.

Tony: Alright, Ash. Come on, I'll introduce you to everyone.

Tony: This here's Sabat.

Sabat: Hey. -Sabat was an older man, his right eye was missing and wore a black eye patch to conceal the injury. He had a 5 o' clock shadow, a long brown ponytail, and was smoking a rather large cigar-

Tony: And this here's Shawna.

Shawna: Hey cutie. -Shawna was a busty woman in her late 20s. She had a mole in her right cheek and had a long head of blonde hair-

Sparklebird: Don't call him that, Shawna!

Shawna: Relax a bit Zoey. I'm just saying hi.

Sparklebird: You better be!

Tony: Oh...so you're THAT guy...

Sparklebird: Tony...

Tony: Nevermind, nevermind. Here, I'll keep introducing you.

Tito: Who's this loser?

Sharpshoot: What was that?

Tito: I said, who's this lo-

Tony: Already picking a fight with the new guy, Tito? Chill man.

Tito: He doesn't look like a fighter.

Tony: Haven't you learned by now to not judge a book by it's cover?

Tito: Tch. Just stating my first impressions. -Tito was a tall, thin but built man about Soapy's age. He had a ridiculous spiky hairdo and strawberry blond hair. He wore a white suit with  blue tie. Why you ask? "Tito: Because I can".-

Tony: There's more of us, but I'll let Alice speak for now.

Freeangel: Thank you Tony. Now, do I have your attention?

Tony: Yep.

Freeangel: Good. As you all know, people have begun to support Fusion and his army. I do not think this is something people  are actually doing because they are aware of what they're bargaining for. So, we have traced the source of it now. Fusion is imposing a propaganda for the people of the Big City. He has chosen a non-violent way to gain supporters, and it seems to be working. I'm going to need someone to accompany Soapy and I to one of these presentations, to know exactly what Fusion is saying to gain said supporters. This is an undercover mission, so I don't want you tagging along Tito. Stealth isn't your strong suit.

Tito: Tch. Whatever.

Sharpshoot: Think I could go?

Soapy: You're a bit too new for this one. Let someone else handle it.

Sparklebird: Plus, you're just as bad as Tito when it comes to this sort of thing.

Sharpshoot: Just how bad is Tito?

Tito: Hey, stop namedropping me already, unless you people want to eat boot!

Freeangel: Hey, pay attention! Sabat, you're off too. You're a very distinctive figure. So that leaves either Zoey, Shawna, or Tony.

Tony: I'll pass on this one.

Sparklebird: I'll go.

Tony: Are you sure Zoey?  Shawna could do it instead.

Shawna: Yeah, let me do it. Or do you want me to be the one to keep the new cutie company...

-Sparklebird paused for a bit-

Sparklebird: Ok, fine. You can take it.

Sharpshoot: Anyone else hear that?

Soapy: Hear what?

-Suddenly, a window broke and a grenade entered the building-

Freenagel: EVERYONE TAKE COVER!

-All of the fighters jumped back and covered themselves from the explosion-

Sharpshoot: Hey, who's doing that!

-Sharpshoot jumped out the window-

Sharpshoot: Show yourself!

?: So the rumors are true...

Sharpshoot: Who the hell are you?

?: I'm not with Fusion, but I am from a concerned party. I can't believe I'm standing in front of the last member of the Sharpshoot clan.

Sharpshoot: I said, who the hell are you?!

?: Kal's the name. Anyway, I must leave you now. I have to report back to my superiors.

-Sharpshoot jumped and punched Kal, but it turned out to be an illusion. Kal was gone-

Freenagel: Alshary!

Sharpshoot: Huh? Did you see that? Some weird guy who claims he's not with Fusion tried to kill us.

Soapy: We know, ok. They're from another group. We don't really get along.

Sharpshoot: So you're not only fighting Fusion, you're also fighting each other?

Soapy: It's a bit more complicated than that.

Sharpshoot: I don't get it! Why is it more complicated? Why can't someone just tell me!

Freeangel: Now's not the time for that. We need to stop them. They're going to ruin everything!

Sharpshoot: Huh? What?

Tony: They're going to attack the big presentation tonight! They don't know what they're doing!

Sharpshoot: But why? How do you know?

Tony: That grenade had a very powerful sleep aura. They planned to knock us out cold for a very long time. Enough time to carry out their plan.

Freeangel: Now we have to find them and put a stop to them before they ruin the whole plan!

Sparklebird: What are we waiting for then?

Freeangel: Follow me. That Kal guy left a very traceable path of energy.

-Freeangel's group of fighters ventured out into a dark part of town-


                                                                                               SCENE 8 END




                                                                         Fusion Mayhem!
                                                                                    Chapter 2
                                                                                                   New Propaganda!
                                                                                                                     Scene 9

-Sharpshoot came into a building-

Sharpshoot: Alright Kal! You're going to get it!

Kal: Were you really so foolish as to come here by yourself?

Sharpshoot: You kind of put the rest of my people to sleep, so...

-Sharpshoot ran at Kal and punched him into  wall-

Kal: I did not see that one coming. I heard you were fast, but that is the fastest I have ever seen. Whatever, my splicing powers will take care of you!

-Kal surrounded himself with energy and reproduced by what seemed to be mitosis, eventually, the room was filled with Kal's clones-

Sharpshoot: Wow. My eyes are burning up!

Kal: I'm much better looking than you.

Sharpshoot: I'm sorry, I guess that hit to the head I gave you just not must've screwed your brain up a little.

Kal: If you think I'm the only one you're going to have to deal with, you are screwed.

-Kal snapped his fingers and 2 more men showed up-

-A tall man with shades and a stick appeared, and so did a short-haired brunette holding no weapon-

Kal: The 3 of us are notorious around these parts. Aren't we, Kujo and Est'efani?

Sharpshoot: Est'efanny? What kind of a name is that?

Est'efani: A very original name! Like your name is that original. I mean, Sharpshoot is as dull as they get.

Sharpshoot: My name is Alshary!

Kujo: That's actually kind of cool.

Sharpshoot: That stick of your's isn't.

Est'efani: Let's hurry up! We don't have time to be wasting right now! We need to stick it to those minnions!

Sharpshoot: Like heck you will!

-Sharpshoot rushed at Est'efani but what homerunned out of the building by Kujo's almighty stick-

Kujo: That was really easy.

-Sharpshoot then came running back in, surrounding himself with a green energy sphere-

Sharpshoot: GRREEEEEEEEEEN NNNN BLIIIIIITZZZZZZZZZZ!

Kal: After him princes!

Kal clones: Right on!

-A single file of Kal clones attempted to stop Sharpshoot, but they were all easily blown away upon contact with the sphere-

Kal: Uh oh. YAAAAARG!

-Kal was crushed by the attack-

Kal:...I think you guys should tke this one... -Kal comically fainted-

Kujo: You ready Est'?

Est'efani: I was born ready!

Kujo: Super combination technique!

Est'efani: All start hit!

-Est'efani created a gigantic yellow start with very sharp edges-

-Unbeknownst to them,  a man was watching their fight from afar-

?: Heh. That spunky kid is at it again.

-Kujo hit the giant spinning start at Sharpshoot-

Sharpshoot: Ok. That's big. But I can easily dodge it!

-Sharpshoot jumped out of the star's way-

Sharpshoot: Pfft. Piece of cake.

Kujo: I wouldn't be so sure.

Sharpshoot: Huh? -Sharpshoot turned back to see the giant start was still coming at him, and much faster now-

?: Heheh. That kid is going to get his butt handed to him again.

Sharpshoot: It follows me anywhere I go eh?

-Sharpshoot ran straight for Kujo and Est'efani, who were not worried-

Kujo: *sarcasm* Oh no! Please don't hurt us!

Est'efani: Yes, you wouldn't hurt a lady would ya?  ;)

Sharpshoot: YES.

Kujo: Not the answer I was expecting to be honest.

-Sharpshoot reached the duo and was engaging them in close combat-

Kujo:  Bad, bad move. You never enegaged Est'e in close combat.

Est'efani: This is why!

-Sharpshoot was being attracted to Est'efani like if he were a giant piece of metal and she were a very powerful magnet-

-Est'efani grabbed a hold of Sharpshoot-

Est'efani: Have a nice death!

Sharpshoot: No! Ugh. Ugh. I can't break free!

-Est'efani threw Sharpshoot right at the star-

Sharpshoot: Morons!

-As the duo were laughing at Sharpshoot, his claymore came flying at them from behind and hit them both in the back of the head, knocking them out almost immediately, causing the star to disappear-

-Sharpshoot landed on the ground with a thud-

Sharpshoot: Ow.

?: *clap* *clap* *clap* You're ain't no fool. But you're still to weak!

-The man was revealed to be none other than Steel Kold Bruce-

Sharpshoot: You again! This time you're not getting the best of me! GREEEEENNNN BLLLLIIIIIIIIIIIII-

-Bruce broke the sphere and grabbed Sharpshoot by the neck-

Sharpshoot: No way!

-Bruce had a sadistic smile on his face-

Bruce: Lights out.

-Bruce slammed Sharpshoot down on the ground in front of him and began to pummel him furiously-

-In just a few seconds, Sharpshoot's face had been reorganized-

Sharpshoot: I can still fight...

Bruce: I don't think so!

-With one powerful punch to the gut, Bruce sent Sharpshoot flying out of the building through the roof-

Bruce: I don't need these chumps to destroy those minnions.  

-Suddenly, 5 simultaneous projectile attacks hit Bruce, pushing him back-

Shawna: Time for a nap, tough guy.

-Shawna touched the back of Bruce's neck and stopped him from moving-

-Bruce was put to sleep by Shawna's energy and fell to the ground-

-The smoke from the blasts cleared, revealing Freenagel, Sabat, Tony, Tito, and Soapy-

Freeangel: ...

-Outside of the building, Sharpshoot was being surrounded by lowly minnions-

Minnion: Let's take the cred! We finally got one of the Resistance!

-The minnions all nodded in agreement, before each of the got impaled by turquoise shards to the brain-  

Sparklebird: Back off.

-Sparklebird started tending to Sharpshoot, while the rest of the group members took Bruce into custody-

                                                                                                     CHAPTER 2 END

 


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on December 31, 2012, 09:02:20 pm
epic character and a happy new year to you all! :D


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on December 31, 2012, 09:05:44 pm
Wow! This scene was full of action, it was great Ash! How many more are left in this chapter?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 31, 2012, 09:11:50 pm
That's it for this chapter. On to ALRTF for now.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 31, 2012, 09:16:14 pm
ALSO DOUBLE POST BECAUSE I AM A WILD STEED AND NOBODY CAN TAME ME!

pls don't ban me Alice

1. What did you like about New Propaganda?
2. What did you dislike about New Propaganda? Did you feel anything was weak?
3. Who was your favorite character in New Propaganda?
4. Any suggestions for Fusion Mayhem?
5. What would you rate New Propaganda from a scale of 1 to 10?
6. Do you think Sharpshoot and Sparklebird will ever stop being children and just admit their feelings to one another?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on December 31, 2012, 09:23:42 pm
HAPPY NEW YEAR *bans* jk :P

1 - I admire your writing style and how much detail you incorporate while also working with a lot of dialogue.

2 - There are still moments of errors but those are just things that can easily slip into writing by an editor's stance *shrugs* Just figured I'd mention that.

3 - I'm not sure on favorite characters but I did like everyone's portrayal done by you *shrugs*

4 - Don't feel you need to rush anything with Fusion Mayhem; take your time and really build up your story. If you need a break from it, take a break and let the story form itself over time.

5 - Currently, I'd probably rate it a 7.5 or 8.

6 - We shall see :P


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on December 31, 2012, 09:47:13 pm
1. The detail that you put into it and how you have developed the characters.

2. There weren't any major problems that needed to be fixed.

3. Like I said before and Alice said now, all of the characters are interesting in their own way and that makes it hard to choose a favorite.

4. None that I can think of right now besides just working on the rest until you feel satisfied.

5. 8, Your fan-fic has improved a lot since you started writing it.

6. I think I'm just going to keep beating you up until something happens. :P


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 01, 2013, 01:08:39 am
Hey thar. I'm tired and my kegs hurt like hell, and happy New Years!!! Agh

1: iz da best.

2: Action is too close. You need to break off at times, and develop characters.

3: The building named after me. Hahahhhhaaaahahahaahahahahahaaaaaa!!! I don't know.....

4: ......you know what I'm gonna say.

5: like a 8-ish.

6: Yeah probably


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 04, 2013, 06:59:50 pm
Thank you for your reviews. I will work these in for the next chapter.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 04, 2013, 08:59:10 pm
Yaaaay


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 05, 2013, 02:12:56 am
But that won't be for like another 5 years


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 05, 2013, 08:32:23 am
I"ll hold you to that :P


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 08, 2013, 05:02:48 pm
Sweet. Less work for me.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on January 09, 2013, 04:57:53 pm
1- Dud3 u lyk sohuld st0p wreaytin an dye 

Really liked it, although not my favorite part so far. The

2- I feel that introducing too many characters at once (The "Fighters" I like to call them) can pin you to the wall.
You either give some too much screen time, or not enough. You have at the moment your protagonist, supportive characters (Freeangel, Zoey, etc,),
their friends, villains, and now sidekicks. It can get out of hand. Still, their characterization in this was great.

3- Shawna fo sho

4- Keep at it

5- 8-ish

6- She's so into you, bra. I'll be your wing man, any time.

While I can't exactly write as eloquently as you, I hope my criticism came across as reasonable.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 09, 2013, 05:18:30 pm
I get what you're saying about introducing too many characters. I had around 4 more on the first draft I left behind in Oregon. But you know, a lot of mangas are like that. These are the characters I'm going to be sticking with for a while though, until we get to more of the big bads.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 09, 2013, 07:29:34 pm
And you won't implement this for 5 years, was it?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 09, 2013, 07:53:11 pm
Why yes Silver.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 09, 2013, 07:58:49 pm
I hate you.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 09, 2013, 08:15:24 pm
*sarcasm*


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on January 09, 2013, 09:29:22 pm
Yes.




A manga is different (pics!) so it's easier to keep track of who is who. Anyway, got faith in you, brotha.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 09, 2013, 09:46:21 pm
It was easy to keep track in the beginning imo when each character had their own color. But I got lazy. And thanks, I won't let any of you down (except for maybe Silver)


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: TurqoiseAngel on January 10, 2013, 01:16:16 am
6- She's so into you, bra. I'll be your wing man, any time. 

...If it goes anything like how you tried to calm me down, I doubt it's going to help Ash :P



And Silver just has really high expectations, so don't worry too much, Ash. :D


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 10, 2013, 03:07:16 pm
All day erryday


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 12, 2013, 11:46:44 am
I meant because he's not on it lol umadbro


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 12, 2013, 02:30:43 pm
Shut up.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on January 27, 2013, 07:47:49 pm
[quote...If it goes anything like how you tried to calm me down, I doubt it's going to help Ash[/quote]

Huh? Side note, why does everyone refer to you as "Ash"? Am I the only one who notices the "L"?

On topic

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Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 28, 2013, 12:53:11 am
Alsh sounds weird.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 28, 2013, 01:31:58 pm
Indeed. We used to call him Ashy


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on November 26, 2013, 01:47:22 pm
*stares* this hasn't been updated in so long T_T


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on December 20, 2013, 11:32:45 pm
I've been focusing full time on my zombie story. I don't know when I'll continue this tbh :/


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on January 10, 2015, 12:24:49 am
Okay this is legit coming back btw. Yay


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on January 10, 2015, 03:59:33 am
Get hype


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on January 12, 2015, 06:25:28 am
OMG hyped!


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on January 18, 2015, 08:53:49 am
Hey can you guys help me hold some of this hype?


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Sharpshoot on March 17, 2015, 04:23:07 pm
Fusion Mayhem
Chapter 3 "Street Dreams"
Scene 1

-Steel Kold Bruce, as is his name apparently, sits in a chair, restrained and bound by ropes made out of some metallic alloy, the only thing possibly capable of holding Bruce captive. On his cell, he arches his head down because he is knocked out cold, courtesy of Shawna's energy leaching trick.-

-Alshary Sharpshoot watches him from the other side of the glass, his face pressed against it. He's frowning because Bruce has, not once, but twice now easily dispatched him with no effort at all. -

Sharpshoot: What the heck makes you so much better than me anyway? You don't even have a weapon -he mutters to himself-

Bruce is still out cold though.

-Sparklebird stands behind Sharpshoot, who is more worried about what Soapy, Alice, and Shawna will come across in the meeting-.

Sparklebird: You buffoon! Forget about him already! Think about our friends instead! They could be in trouble!

-Sharpshoot turned back around to look at Sparklebird. She was referring, of course, to Alice, Soapy, and Shawna. The 3 of them undercover, in one of those "Fusion PTSA meetings". Sharpshoot's childlike way of thinking kept him mostly focused on Steel Kold Bruce, however.-

Sharpshoot (muttering): I'll get you the third time you see, third times the charm.  -he presses his face against the window-

-Sparklebird is visibly irritated, and surrounds her left fist with turquoise. She slams the back of Sharpshoot's head and he screams in pain. An anime style bump appears on his head, sprouting from the exact spot struck by Sparklebird.-

Sharpshoot: Owww! What'd I do now?

Sparklebird: Have you been listening to anything I've been saying? Seriously?

Sharpshoot's look is dumbfounded.

Sharpshoot: huaah? Oh, nope. Not at all!

Sparklebird: Our friends!

Sharpshoot: eh, your friends. I haven't known them for very long technically.

-The look on Sparklebird's face receives even more rage-

Sparklebird: Now is not the time to be funny! Why aren't you worried?

Sharpshoot: Have you seen how strong that Alice lady is? She can totally kick everyone's butt!

Sparklebird: True, I guess...but I still worry. What if they just have someone stronger?

Tito: You're talking as if she were going to a gladiator fight, when she's just going to some town meeting, dumb kid.

Tony: Tito, be nicer! But I'm sure that they'll be fine Zoey. Shawna is there. She can detect any funny business.

Sharpshoot: Shawna is that robust lady right?

Sparklebird: Robust? You pervert, you're not supposed to ogle women!

Sharpshoot: goggle? what? Hey ow-

-Sparklebird attacked Sharpshoot, leaving him with yet another bump on his head, atop of the old-

Sharpshoot: Owww

Tito: If I were you kid, I'd look for a different honey.

Sparklebird: Shut up Tito!

Tito: Oh yeah? What if I don't? You gonna throw some cheap jewelry at me?

-A spark appears in Sparklebird and she comically creates a giant hammer made from turquoise. She slams it down on Tito, twice. It then breaks, leaving Tito face down-

Tito: Owww...

Tony: Eh, I better not say anything.

Sharpshoot: That was so cool! You made a gigantic hammer! Can you do it again? Please? Please?

Sparklebird (blushing): Okay...

-Sabat watched this from the corner, amused at the situation. His mind did longer on Alice, Soapy, Shawna, and the mission, however...-

-We now turn to Downtown Big City, a more... sinister looking alleyway. Alice, Soapy, and Shawna walked casually, ignoring any sights that might be on them. Apart from Soapy and Shawna's overly eccentric getups, Alice stood out the less. She wore a simple outfit that consisted of ocean blue jeans and a tight shirt with horizontal pink stripes that exposed some of her impressively toned abdomen. Kind of an unusual thing for Alice to wear, yes, but that was the point.-

-On the other hand we have Soapy, who is dressed in a designer jacket with a cammo pattern and so ripped punk jeans. He also rocked a green Mohawk over his bald cap. Talk about overkill.-

-Then Shawna...Shawna just looked like a hippie to be honest. She wore a long pink and red dress with random flower patterns that showed off none of her curvy figure, and then  her eccentric rainbow wig made her look like a parakeet. To top it off, she wore the most ridiculous purple shades imaginable.-
 
-Soapy, who stood behind Alice, simply observed her lower back, exposed by her shirt. Her jeans were tight as well obviously.-

Soapy: you know Alice, that outfit of yours is very distracting.

Alice: Yeah, I'm wearing the distracting get up.

Shawna: you mind telling me why you're pitching a tent?

Soapy; what are you implying?

Alice: Nevermind that. We're here. Shut it.

-Alice and her comrades casually strut into the meeting room, closing the door behind them.-

       -Scene 1 End-





Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Silver Kid on March 17, 2015, 06:13:19 pm
I can't imagine soapy wearing anything different


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: Makastar on April 07, 2015, 12:51:51 pm
Love it xD Soapy's outfit is best outfit.


Title: Re: Fusion Mayhem!
Post by: CTRL ALT Dead on August 02, 2015, 09:23:53 pm
Captured Soapys mannerisms to bloody brilliantly. And I bet he rocked that mohawk <3